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August 9, 2013 @ 06:56 PM
No Fuxx Given

Post: 600

Join Date: Nov 2011

Location: Canada

I made this in illustrator by tracing out a sketch I scanned but it looks like trash. I really need this to turn out well. Can u help me out fam?

Fly on little wing

August 9, 2013 @ 08:03 PM
j2cray

Post: 12

Join Date: Aug 2013

Location: Cali

I actually like it! you should make the banner bigger and write entertainment in that sort of.font and add a shadow or give it a 3D effect
August 11, 2013 @ 06:57 PM
No Fuxx Given

Post: 600

Join Date: Nov 2011

Location: Canada

Soooo fuck all yall who seen this and didn't say shit

I got an update



let me know what yall think. 

Fly on little wing

August 11, 2013 @ 07:59 PM
courage

Post: 48

Join Date: Dec 2012

Looks nice. I agree with jamesonwirt. You should try to have the word "entertainment" look more drawn instead of typed. Also the link to the picture in your second post is broken, so I don't know what your changes look like if you made any.
August 11, 2013 @ 09:44 PM
Tathens

Post: 713

Join Date: Nov 2011

Location: TORONTO

Did you try to use "Black and White Logo" in Illustrator? (live trace feature)

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August 11, 2013 @ 10:02 PM
laserdis

Post: 391

Join Date: Aug 2013

Location: Ooo

^^^ or you can try the pen tool for smoother curves
August 14, 2013 @ 02:49 PM
99%Shit

Post: 3285

Join Date: Oct 2009

Location: Ontario

Why are the 'B' and 'd' not connected to the cursive? Why did you go with a non-cursive 'A' if you were going to link it with cursive? Same question for the 'r'. Why did you choose to keep the strokes passing through letters? Why didn't you align 'Entertainment' to a path following the banner's shape?

I don't want you to answer me. I don't want you to abandon the design. Ask yourself these question I've asked you and if you cannot come up with an answer as to why you did that particular thing, rework it to go with standards of design. If you have a reason, keep working with it until it looks 'right' to you.


And laserdis, I am sure they used the pen tool.

narsha.narsha.narsha

August 19, 2013 @ 07:27 PM
theycallmeblack

Post: 689

Join Date: Dec 2012

Location: SAN DIEGO

Choose a better font for "Entertainment". Why is the l and B connected if it's two words?

Put more time in, look at how nice letters are constructed.

Watch this:
http://vimeo.com/61006621

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