Need help with this logo

August 09, 2013 @ 18:56:12
I made this in illustrator by tracing out a sketch I scanned but it looks like trash. I really need this to turn out well. Can u help me out fam?

Fly on little wing

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August 11, 2013 @ 18:57:29
Soooo fuck all yall who seen this and didn't say shit

I got an update



let me know what yall think. 

Fly on little wing

August 11, 2013 @ 19:59:36
Looks nice. I agree with jamesonwirt. You should try to have the word "entertainment" look more drawn instead of typed. Also the link to the picture in your second post is broken, so I don't know what your changes look like if you made any.

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August 11, 2013 @ 22:02:53
^^^ or you can try the pen tool for smoother curves
August 14, 2013 @ 14:49:30
Why are the 'B' and 'd' not connected to the cursive? Why did you go with a non-cursive 'A' if you were going to link it with cursive? Same question for the 'r'. Why did you choose to keep the strokes passing through letters? Why didn't you align 'Entertainment' to a path following the banner's shape?

I don't want you to answer me. I don't want you to abandon the design. Ask yourself these question I've asked you and if you cannot come up with an answer as to why you did that particular thing, rework it to go with standards of design. If you have a reason, keep working with it until it looks 'right' to you.


And laserdis, I am sure they used the pen tool.

narsha.narsha.narsha

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