Why are the 'B' and 'd' not connected to the cursive? Why did you go with a non-cursive 'A' if you were going to link it with cursive? Same question for the 'r'. Why did you choose to keep the strokes passing through letters? Why didn't you align 'Entertainment' to a path following the banner's shape?
I don't want you to answer me. I don't want you to abandon the design. Ask yourself these question I've asked you and if you cannot come up with an answer as to why you did that particular thing, rework it to go with standards of design. If you have a reason, keep working with it until it looks 'right' to you.
And laserdis, I am sure they used the pen tool.