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January 5, 2014 @ 10:37 PM
GOLF

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What do you all think about the Chief theme? 
January 5, 2014 @ 11:13 PM
YLYR

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Location: Los Angeles, Califor...


no it looks straight. Its just...lemme see here..ok so put that face on the front and take off the words on the bottom of the mask face design and enlarge it just a little. Than leave the star on the back and enlarge it. Just slightly not a lot. And then you could probably make the face a one color. Like a silhouette of a face you know. But I get the one eye symbolism but thats lame now. Put both eyes unless it came like that you know. And then the star could be a bold color like yellow or idk. Lime green to pop out. And then the mask the same color of course or the tee will be ruined you know. Like if the star was blue and the mask was lime green it would throw people off...and then you're done. Also a sleeve hit would complete it. Like both sleeves if possible or one. Just like the words YLYR could go down the sleeves. Bold font. Then I think thats it. You could actually put the face inside the star and put it on the back and do a small YLYR on the pocket. Do you have a forum for this because people would really give you feedback and then from there they may be willing to cop. I mean they probably will most likely..

Alright so what you think now.. yeah I think im going to to start my own thread.. but I need you guys help lol so If I start it would you guys subscribe to it?
January 5, 2014 @ 11:22 PM
YLYR

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Location: Los Angeles, Califor...

I need to hit the sleeve better - i'am actually working on that now..
January 5, 2014 @ 11:23 PM
TheBandits

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Location: New Zealand



Very few left, get yours before we shut down in preparation for spring.
Word is bond


Best regards.
picked one of these up. fucking sick.
Whats that font tho cool
January 5, 2014 @ 11:43 PM
Rise AboveSxA

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Location: St.Louis MO 314

We all know the Spring is coming up what type of gear yall expect to see dropping? Fly shit & not so fly shit

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January 6, 2014 @ 02:05 AM
swayd

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I can only do so much with photoshop right now Im not very good. Im trying to find a graphic designer I have a lot more ideas in mind.
check out my portfolio box 
i do freelance work

http://www.firs-traditions.portfoliobox.me/#0
January 6, 2014 @ 02:08 AM
swayd

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feedback:
Bonus  (brand name)
January 6, 2014 @ 03:11 AM
GhostWritin'

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January 6, 2014 @ 03:57 AM
January 6, 2014 @ 04:05 AM
swayd

Post: 16

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A main logo.  keeping it very simple and to the point.   
It is primarily about deserving.  "Bonus" is the brand name which signifies deserving.  Doing extra, working extra, pushing more etc. to get that extra, whatever it may be.  A square has four corners and it bares 4 different building blocks for street wear: Culture, Origin, Lifestyle and Quality.  That is what the branding means.  I chose a square because that is also a very easy shape to manipulate.
January 6, 2014 @ 05:30 AM
quiet

Post: 235

Join Date: Sep 2013


no it looks straight. Its just...lemme see here..ok so put that face on the front and take off the words on the bottom of the mask face design and enlarge it just a little. Than leave the star on the back and enlarge it. Just slightly not a lot. And then you could probably make the face a one color. Like a silhouette of a face you know. But I get the one eye symbolism but thats lame now. Put both eyes unless it came like that you know. And then the star could be a bold color like yellow or idk. Lime green to pop out. And then the mask the same color of course or the tee will be ruined you know. Like if the star was blue and the mask was lime green it would throw people off...and then you're done. Also a sleeve hit would complete it. Like both sleeves if possible or one. Just like the words YLYR could go down the sleeves. Bold font. Then I think thats it. You could actually put the face inside the star and put it on the back and do a small YLYR on the pocket. Do you have a forum for this because people would really give you feedback and then from there they may be willing to cop. I mean they probably will most likely..

Alright so what you think now.. yeah I think im going to to start my own thread.. but I need you guys help lol so If I start it would you guys subscribe to it?
you know you dont need to put YRLR on the tee at all right? You can just have the a small face on the pocket as a small print. on the front. Also try light blue. But the siize of the star on the back looks good. Try a different font on the sleeve if you still want to put something there. But put the words Rules dont Govern us. Or something clever you know. Your Life Your Rules is your brand name and thats clear already you know. Throw a line in there like idk...you gotta make up one though. Have fun with it..maybe a line like Why live by rules?.... Idk you know what I mean though. Dont just go for your brand name. . That should be your final choice to use your own name. But do your own thing man, you'll figure it out

triworld - http://triworld.us/ -

January 6, 2014 @ 05:35 AM
brodylikestochill

Post: 568

Join Date: Aug 2013

A main logo.  keeping it very simple and to the point.   
give me feedback.
your asking for feedback on a word and a square, this is whats wrong with this thread

Seto Kaiba // UsurpInternational.com // #Freethad

January 6, 2014 @ 05:57 AM
swayd

Post: 16

Join Date: Oct 2012

A main logo.  keeping it very simple and to the point.   
give me feedback.
your asking for feedback on a word and a square, this is whats wrong with this thread


It is primarily about deserving.  "Bonus" is the brand name which signifies deserving.  Doing extra, working extra, pushing more etc. to get that extra, whatever it may be.  A square has four corners and it bares 4 different building blocks for street wear: Culture, Origin, Lifestyle and Quality.  That is what the branding means.  I chose a square because that is also a very easy shape to manipulate.
January 6, 2014 @ 05:57 AM
Malachi Shockley

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Location: www.knownothing.us

My brand, Know Nothing, has shot some film photos that have gained us some attention on the internet over the past year. So what better way to thank you all than to include in each order a numbered 4x6 photo print of a random film photo of our choice that featured some of our items.Thank you all for the support.



knownothing.us 

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January 6, 2014 @ 07:48 AM
supersupersuper

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feedback:
Bonus  (brand name)
this looks super similar to the Divinities Liquid Swords tee bro!
January 6, 2014 @ 08:09 AM
swayd

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feedback:
Bonus  (brand name)
this looks super similar to the Divinities Liquid Swords tee bro!
yea, just saw their product.  it is what it is.  what else are samples for, you know?
January 6, 2014 @ 08:23 AM
zacarycaine

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Join Date: Dec 2013

Location: USA

I feel like if you need to explain to us what your brand means, you're not doing a good job getting the message across. Even though you're straight up telling us.

I feel like your message should be clear within your clothing, without you having to explain it to us, if its not then you're doing something wrong.

But idk that's just me.
January 6, 2014 @ 08:27 AM
swayd

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Join Date: Oct 2012

I feel like if you need to explain to us what your brand means, you're not doing a good job getting the message across. Even though you're straight up telling us.

I feel like your message should be clear within your clothing, without you having to explain it to us, if its not then you're doing something wrong.

But idk that's just me.
makes sense.  I appreciate that. 
January 6, 2014 @ 08:36 AM
zacarycaine

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Join Date: Dec 2013

Location: USA

I feel like if you need to explain to us what your brand means, you're not doing a good job getting the message across. Even though you're straight up telling us.

I feel like your message should be clear within your clothing, without you having to explain it to us, if its not then you're doing something wrong.

But idk that's just me.
makes sense.  I appreciate that. 
Yeah no disrespect though, because I'm trying to start my own brand and that's just how i see it. I feel when people explain what their brand is about, it sounds too cheesy or like they are trying to hard. I mean that's how i felt just explaining my brand to my designer. I felt stupid because it just sounded too cheesy even though it's all true. I'd rather just have the designs do most of the talking.
January 6, 2014 @ 08:42 AM
swayd

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I feel like if you need to explain to us what your brand means, you're not doing a good job getting the message across. Even though you're straight up telling us.

I feel like your message should be clear within your clothing, without you having to explain it to us, if its not then you're doing something wrong.

But idk that's just me.
makes sense.  I appreciate that. 
Yeah no disrespect though, because I'm trying to start my own brand and that's just how i see it. I feel when people explain what their brand is about, it sounds too cheesy or like they are trying to hard. I mean that's how i felt just explaining my brand to my designer. I felt stupid because it just sounded too cheesy even though it's all true. I'd rather just have the designs do most of the talking.
no doubt.  its hard to get the point across via web though, you know? if you can come out with a product that shows quality (print, durability, fabrics etc.) you don't need to explain yourself.  I feel people are just going to automatically associate with it.  That goes for a lot of brands.  look at a bunch of them and some of the graphics don't speak for themselves.  Being able to conjure up a meaning while establishing yourself does sound cliche but i think that can get your foot in the door.  goes without saying the graphic should also have something behind it.  i chose the Raging Bull scene of Robert De Niro because it shows succession through persistence and that is what my brand is about.
January 6, 2014 @ 10:46 AM
Castle Master

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January 6, 2014 @ 08:40 PM
January 6, 2014 @ 08:50 PM
kushsupremacy

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i have made some mock ups and wanted to get you guys look on it. feel free to share your opinions 
Design 2
http://s913.photobucket.com/user/southeastbeast1/media/Mobile%20Uploads/blacksweartshirt2_zpsa9d94d7c.jpg.html?sort=3&o=0

Design 1
http://s913.photobucket.com/user/southeastbeast1/media/Mobile%20Uploads/blacksweartshirtfront2_zps0db7e697.jpg.html?sort=3&o=1
Very clear what your inspiration was here. Try to do something original.
January 6, 2014 @ 08:50 PM
OR NAH

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Location: Philly


where the azn girls at

January 6, 2014 @ 11:04 PM
quiet

Post: 235

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guys so imma post my lookbook in this thread. Please gimme some feedback or sumthin.
Idk hopefully I'll get some feedback. Its for LUGIA, idk we're gonna reveal it at 11:30, dont just give it a thumbs down give it a na it could have been better because of _________________. OR yea it was tight. Please man give me some feedback, we're trynna get better at these visuals. Imma post it in my thread of course. But I also want to post it here. Not to brag or anything. But because you guys are the meanest assholes on Hypebeast so..I wanted to get the harshest criticism possible. So thats why I post here. You guys are really really really mean to upcoming brands..and I mean we're still upcoming and ummm if you guys could throw dirt all over it that would be appreciated

triworld - http://triworld.us/ -

January 6, 2014 @ 11:21 PM
jgcdiamond

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Join Date: Jan 2014

We might be late to join the party, but thats alright! We are a "Up and Coming" label known as D. I. A. M. O. N. D. and we would appreciate if you guys could check out our inventory and give us your feedback! http://jgcdiamond.storenvy.com/
January 7, 2014 @ 12:48 AM
Riseofhovah

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Join Date: Dec 2013

My t shirt design I made! Wanted you guys to give ya opinion! If you give the thumps down just say way! 
January 7, 2014 @ 12:54 AM
Riseofhovah

Post: 13

Join Date: Dec 2013

We might be late to join the party, but thats alright! We are a "Up and Coming" label known as D. I. A. M. O. N. D. and we would appreciate if you guys could check out our inventory and give us your feedback! http://jgcdiamond.storenvy.com/
You got some nice stuff I like it.. Only problem is that it's really closely related to diamond supply co... You gone have to distinguish that diamond from there's if you know what I mean..
January 7, 2014 @ 12:55 AM
brodylikestochill

Post: 568

Join Date: Aug 2013

We might be late to join the party, but thats alright! We are a "Up and Coming" label known as D. I. A. M. O. N. D. and we would appreciate if you guys could check out our inventory and give us your feedback! http://jgcdiamond.storenvy.com/
Ok, I don't like to just be not nice to people on here because everyone is here for the same reason and wants to succeed, however this is the worst kind of terrible. Ok so Im going to put my complaints in list form. 

1. fuckin shark level bites, you bit diamond and crooks and castles, two of the worst brands out imo and you bit their most trademark designs. The medusa head B! seriously this isn't a flip or even a bite its just fucking stealing. 

2. putting the diamond in a different print is not a new design, its lame, tired, played out, cliche etc.

3.You can see the interface from whatever shitty tee shirt design site you used in your product picture! you're basically just telling your audience that you don't give a fuck about the aesthetic of your site. 

4.You named it diamond. same name as Internationally known mall dweller fucboi brand, seriously are you kidding me? Im sorry this is atrocious im done 

Seto Kaiba // UsurpInternational.com // #Freethad

January 7, 2014 @ 01:06 AM
jono301

Post: 18

Join Date: Mar 2013

Any opinions on this longsleeve? 
- The text states "The Ecstasy of Success" with the blooming rose (in camo) melting a little on a small scale. It's a reminder almost, that anything you're working for may look benevolent but always has the opportunity to collapse. As a 15 year old, I quickly learned that you take risks to move up but those risks may also bring you down. There's also a big reason why "ecstasy" was used, i'll leave it up to you to figure it out.
- Any suggestions on the front part? I have some ideas for the sleeve but since everyone's doing it right now, i feel like it'd be better just to add some ideas to the back
**The cover job wasn't really good as you can see, this was the only one i could find that compliments the design the most,, try to disregard that***

"Let the ones who wait suffer, as you climb" www.Theoriginalsco.com


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