Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Nov 01, 2013 @ 01:48
Hey King Koast, I can tell you're trying so keep it up. As for constructive criticism, first of all I really don't like the name Apex. Nothing special and sounds so generic. Try to think of a name thats distinct and different.

Secondly, your designs are plain and all I see are box logos. Like mentioned earlier, no one wants to buy an unknown brand. Maybe on your first designs, work on non-logo shirts but should have a certain feel to how you want your brand to feel. The key is creating an impactful design where you have people wondering where that shirt is from. When you start selling these shirts and your brand is being built up, then you can slowly start to push shirts with your logo visible. Hope this helps.

www.fadebygrey.com

Nov 01, 2013 @ 03:19
Just a couple tee's I been working on. Thinking of possibly getting them embroidered on a crew neck or hoodie as well. First one's what I call "Fly Tip" second ones "Omega Tee"


I think these are fresh, but the second one's the best. Maybe the design could be a little bigger and possibly placed differently.
Nov 01, 2013 @ 09:52
http://hghstndrds.com/

Should be done printing t-shirts by November 6th. Check out the designs at http://hghstndrds.bigcartel.com/ and tell me what you think. I would love some feed back on things.

hgh stndrds hghstndrds.com shop.hghstndrds.com

Nov 01, 2013 @ 10:02
Nov 01, 2013 @ 10:13
http://hghstndrds.com/


Should be done printing these by November 6th. Would love any feed back.





http://hghstndrds.bigcartel.com/

hgh stndrds hghstndrds.com shop.hghstndrds.com

Nov 01, 2013 @ 14:00




Noisev Winter 2013 Collection
Lookbook and previews now viewable at noisev.us
Collection available on November11th @ 6pm PST



Designs are fresh, but that n.w.a-esque font is over used, the drowning tee is particularly good doh

http://secret-castle.com/

Nov 01, 2013 @ 17:51
Hello hypebeast! Apache is a new clothing brand based in Los Angeles. Feedback would be great on this collection! This is the "Apache Racing" Collection. If it is hard to see the designs, larger images can be uploaded.

+ WEBSITE
+ INSTAGRAM



"COVER"


"1985 WHITE LAMBORGHINI COUNTACH, TWO OF 'EM"


"PRO SERIES"


"APACHE RACING TEAM"


"END"


*note the colors of the clothes are minimal, but colors can be adjusted in the future.

apacheusa.tumblr.com

Nov 01, 2013 @ 20:32
Hello Hypebeast I just started a clothing line named "Wave Season" based in Tulsa, OK and I wanted everyone to check out my first release "The Ghost of ODB" I will have a couple of more releases also before an actual full winter collection that I will be dropping in December. anyway check out my tees and give me feedback.



"GOD MADE DIRT" /// available @ waveseason.bigcartel.com for only $17

twitter: @WAVExSEASON



Nov 02, 2013 @ 01:22

burgermoney.com/shop
twitter: @datbumo
Nov 02, 2013 @ 02:48
Originally posted by Inactive User
Well, went back to the drawing board, again. 

Here's the back of each shirt: the rose will match the design colors. 


And a few new Designs:


the best design you have going for you is the G with rose in it...even still your designs look as if you quickly threw them together without though, the rose has detail (which i think is the best part to your work right now) but then you use these shitty fonts you downloaded without even trying to modify them in any way, making it look like you barely did any work,
that last font you used too many people do it and its shit, if you go back a page or 2 you'll see another brand already used it, the tail or underline is ugly
red on a Tiffany shirt should never be done..too harsh..it makes the consumer look away..Tiff color is a soft and delicate color and should be used with only other colors that bring out its attributes 
Nov 02, 2013 @ 04:30
damn.

apache is nice, even though i know its the same dude behind excelsior, halflife, all that other shit haha,

Connected Goods // www.connectedgoods.bigcartel.com

Nov 02, 2013 @ 06:56
Trying the more natural style for winter collection instead of drawings. Y'all haven't been really feelin' me, but hey the show must go on lol




Nov 02, 2013 @ 09:40
Trying the more natural style for winter collection instead of drawings. Y'all haven't been really feelin' me, but hey the show must go on lol




if i saw anyone on the street with the word "lyfe" on it i would laugh in their face 

@ja.emz

Nov 02, 2013 @ 15:13
We went for a clean collection but we upped the quality more compared to our previous collections which we sold out everything on. I've personally learned a lot from you guys here at the hypebeast forums and please, give me any opinions or constructive criticisms. Domain is bound to change.

"Let the ones who wait suffer, as you climb" www.Theoriginalsco.com

Nov 02, 2013 @ 16:17
We went for a clean collection but we upped the quality more compared to our previous collections which we sold out everything on. I've personally learned a lot from you guys here at the hypebeast forums and please, give me any opinions or constructive criticisms. Domain is bound to change.




the irony is strong

@ja.emz

Nov 02, 2013 @ 16:23
(Invalid img)Starting a new line

KronikClothingCompany

Kronikclothingcompany.bigcartel.com

First Item 5 Panel Strapback


Nov 02, 2013 @ 18:19
We went for a clean collection but we upped the quality more compared to our previous collections which we sold out everything on. I've personally learned a lot from you guys here at the hypebeast forums and please, give me any opinions or constructive criticisms. Domain is bound to change.
rename it to the unoriginals

http://www.distantlight.co

Nov 02, 2013 @ 18:57
Web Store Open --- American-Outsider.com 


outsidermia.com // Members Only

Nov 02, 2013 @ 19:08
Web Store Open --- American-Outsider.com 

I'll pass on those prices...
Nov 02, 2013 @ 21:27
Just noticed this on Outsiders ig.


old design of his




and kanye's newest shirt



Still think outsider and al dente is fucking hype. get over it.
Nov 02, 2013 @ 22:00

Nov 02, 2013 @ 22:27
(Invalid img)what do you guys think...
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Nov 02, 2013 @ 22:45


Whats up Jake here. What you think about the new Blu Label line? www.blulabel.co.uk
Nov 02, 2013 @ 23:53


Nov 02, 2013 @ 23:56
The post above this one are SQX1 - Square x 1 'assassination' t-shirts.

www.sqx1.nl
Nov 03, 2013 @ 00:27
Trying the more natural style for winter collection instead of drawings. Y'all haven't been really feelin' me, but hey the show must go on lol




if i saw anyone on the street with the word "lyfe" on it i would laugh in their face 
And they'd probably knock your ass out. If it's not your style it's not your style. I didn't spell Life with an "I" for more than one reason. I think it's nice it's my style and that's all that matters there's millions of people in this world and I know there's a crowd for it.  
Nov 03, 2013 @ 03:46
if i saw anyone on the street with the word "lyfe" on it i would laugh in their face 
And they'd probably knock your ass out. If it's not your style it's not your style. I didn't spell Life with an "I" for more than one reason. I think it's nice it's my style and that's all that matters there's millions of people in this world and I know there's a crowd for it.  
"I think it's nice it's my style" - There's where you went wrong, my friend. Are you making these shirts for yourself, or your brand? I do agree, there is a crowd for it, but only if you're shooting for your customers to be mom's who buy their thirteen-year-old kid's clothes for them.
Nov 03, 2013 @ 03:52
if i saw anyone on the street with the word "lyfe" on it i would laugh in their face 
And they'd probably knock your ass out. If it's not your style it's not your style. I didn't spell Life with an "I" for more than one reason. I think it's nice it's my style and that's all that matters there's millions of people in this world and I know there's a crowd for it.  
Your logo is the Sanuk logo. Just sayin.
Nov 03, 2013 @ 03:58
Hey guys, i'm just starting out my own fashion blog and i was wondering if you guys could check it out. i'm just starting out. you can also follow me on instagram andrewsuavity. My blog is down below.
http://streetsuavity.tumblr.com/
Nov 03, 2013 @ 09:05

I hope this shows. It's an image from photobucket of a 2 tone crew neck. Tell me what you think. Check my Instagram also @authenick

Follow @authenick

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