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July 24, 2013 @ 01:59 PM
TeddyBear Jake

Post: 13

Join Date: Jul 2013


Dungeon Forward
We would love any feedback you can provide. Just relaunched the site. #DreamChasing #DungeonForward
http://dungeonforward.com/product/dngfwd-black
July 24, 2013 @ 02:13 PM
kcufthepopulation

Post: 50

Join Date: Aug 2012


http://www.kcufthepopulation.com

July 24, 2013 @ 02:59 PM
Project Nibiru

Post: 94

Join Date: Aug 2012

Location: Long Beach, CA


Dungeon Forward
We would love any feedback you can provide. Just relaunched the site. #DreamChasing #DungeonForward
http://dungeonforward.com/product/the-patriot-tank-white

Project Nibiru:

Im just gonna warn you now ... you might get allot of down votes. Next time when you post here try and put all your items on one post because some people here see it as spam if its done separately, it also helps when you are being quoted.
    
     You mentioned you would love any feedback and this IS a feedback thread so i will go ahead and try to provide my opinion. The first impression I get when I see your brand is "oh great, here is another neff/plndr/zumiez brand, which isn't bad if that's really what your brand is about. I wouldn't know because you don't provided any information as to what your brand is, what its about and what your trying to achieve. You should provide this is if you're looking for a decent critique that will hopefully help you move forward with what you hope to accomplish.
     I did go ahead and look at your site so I'll just be talking about your brand as a whole rather than individual pieces because everything you have for sale has the same style and look to it as the rest. I believe you could of focused more on your presentation along with many more things. Your models don't look styled very well, even though you can only really see their jeans and a middle finger while holding a heat snap-back which doesn't do anymore justice. I get a really kiddish vibe from all of your designs and i'd like to see you mature from that because i'll be honest, these look like shirts 14 year old teenagers would wear, which again isn't bad if you're catering to them and are only interested in the money making side of the fashion business. Consider focusing more on a single collection and a single theme per collection rather than putting out a bunch of t shirts that all look very generic and alike. Along with this you should venture out of the t shirt brand scene and venture out onto other ideas like patterns, materials and the execution of your products. Not only do i strongly suggest you look back onto each of your designs and see what it is you could be doing better, i also suggest you try and do more research on fashion itself. I believe this will help your company grow and mature into a true clothing brand.

If you have any questions as to why i said what i said or questions to anything else you could address me privately or on the forum itself. I wish you and every-other young hungry brand out there the best of luck.

- Project Nibiru

http://projectnibiru.bigcartel.com Also Follow us on Instragram & Twitter @ projectnibiru

July 24, 2013 @ 03:41 PM
TeddyBear Jake

Post: 13

Join Date: Jul 2013


Dungeon Forward
We would love any feedback you can provide. Just relaunched the site. #DreamChasing #DungeonForward
http://dungeonforward.com/product/the-patriot-tank-white

Project Nibiru:

Im just gonna warn you now ... you might get allot of down votes. Next time when you post here try and put all your items on one post because some people here see it as spam if its done separately, it also helps when you are being quoted.
    
     You mentioned you would love any feedback and this IS a feedback thread so i will go ahead and try to provide my opinion. The first impression I get when I see your brand is "oh great, here is another neff/plndr/zumiez brand, which isn't bad if that's really what your brand is about. I wouldn't know because you don't provided any information as to what your brand is, what its about and what your trying to achieve. You should provide this is if you're looking for a decent critique that will hopefully help you move forward with what you hope to accomplish.
     I did go ahead and look at your site so I'll just be talking about your brand as a whole rather than individual pieces because everything you have for sale has the same style and look to it as the rest. I believe you could of focused more on your presentation along with many more things. Your models don't look styled very well, even though you can only really see their jeans and a middle finger while holding a heat snap-back which doesn't do anymore justice. I get a really kiddish vibe from all of your designs and i'd like to see you mature from that because i'll be honest, these look like shirts 14 year old teenagers would wear, which again isn't bad if you're catering to them and are only interested in the money making side of the fashion business. Consider focusing more on a single collection and a single theme per collection rather than putting out a bunch of t shirts that all look very generic and alike. Along with this you should venture out of the t shirt brand scene and venture out onto other ideas like patterns, materials and the execution of your products. Not only do i strongly suggest you look back onto each of your designs and see what it is you could be doing better, i also suggest you try and do more research on fashion itself. I believe this will help your company grow and mature into a true clothing brand.

If you have any questions as to why i said what i said or questions to anything else you could address me privately or on the forum itself. I wish you and every-other young hungry brand out there the best of luck.

- Project Nibiru


Dungeon Forward is the abstraction of the common phrase fashion forward. We adopted the word dungeon because it encompasses the places we draw inspiration from. We often use our mascot to "personify" all that we gain inspiration from. At times this message is hidden. On other occasions it is very blatant.

We kept the word forward, because we want to continue to bring forth a unique (design) approach in the delivery of our message. We will build upon this message in the days to come, but we will always be about Music, Art, and Street Culture.

I definitely appreciate all of the feedback. We are very humble in our approach and appreciate all of the support we get. This is our opportunity to share our design aesthetic with the world, and we definitely recognize that our public feedback is important. The support my brand garners will definitely span a demographic outside of the 14 year old spectrum. We are targeting a 17-34 eclectic following. For our entry into the market we have intentionally included a range, not necessarily completely aligned with one another.  I will definitely take your advice on the styling, although we limited the styling in the product shots to focus on the actual shirt.

While the middle finger may be a little extreme, that again is intentional. We are not selling sex like these other brands, but we are very aware of the infatuation with a reckless lifestyle. This infatuation is shared by the corporate counterparts I encounter in the life we all want to escape. Our brand has evolved of the years and we continue to grow, develop, and flourish in the way that we approach design. We anticipate that each series we release will become more and more cohesive in maintaining our devotion to Music, Art, And Street Culture. We also expect our personal design quality to become more and more recognizable.

Finally This note "Along with this you should venture out of the t shirt brand scene and
venture out onto other ideas like patterns, materials and the execution
of your products. Not only do i strongly suggest you look back onto each
of your designs and see what it is you could be doing better, i also
suggest you try and do more research on fashion itself. I believe this
will help your company grow and mature into a true clothing brand." is such a real note, and we are currently making strides in our understanding and digestion of fashion both new and old from military and regime to resort and beach. For us hungry brands, it is often our capital resources that limit our offering. We are at a point where this is becoming less of an issue, but as we continue to learn, breathe, and digest our brand, these different approaches will reveal themselves.

Thanks Again for the feed back. -DC
July 24, 2013 @ 05:03 PM
TeddyBear Jake

Post: 13

Join Date: Jul 2013

Hey HB,

this is the first press of my brand Desperotica,
the idea is essentially we want to put out pieces we would wear ourselves//
below are a few images from the lookbook/preview
any criticism/feedback is greatly apperciated!


www.desperotica.com
www.desperotica.com
www.desperotica.com



Buying the ryde r die tee ,minimalism doesn't always work. but when it does,it's beautiful! keep your brand feel consistent and flowing, I'll be a returning customer if you can pull it off next time. good luck, good work!
thank you for the support! yes, i wouldn't put out a design that did not have the original streetwear attitude (not some zumiez/plndr garbage pop kiddy graphics). without coming off too cheesy, but we're sticking to our roots. 
Dope only Recognizes Dope - Hate is filled with flattery. We appreciate the recognition.
July 24, 2013 @ 05:31 PM
hkeys

Post: 541

Join Date: Apr 2012

Location: Tampa

I can dig dangerers embroidered patch. Just got ours to start prepping F/W.


http://thedividedminds.com/

July 24, 2013 @ 07:06 PM
devil

Post: 20

Join Date: Jul 2013



Hey HB i've had my spreadshirt for over a month now and have been adding designs in it based on community feedback as well my own designs.and would like to expand it out please check it out 

and as always you can request custom designs.

http://fuccboi.spreadshirt.com/
http://fuccboi.spreadshirt.com/

free shipping today on the 24th, with coupon : "XMASINJULY" 
July 24, 2013 @ 07:32 PM
Doriftos

Post: 6

Join Date: Jul 2013

Shittiest designs ever, seems like you made all of them overnight
July 24, 2013 @ 09:32 PM
BigJackBurton

Post: 39

Join Date: Jul 2013

daaaaaamit
July 24, 2013 @ 11:12 PM
EnigmaApparel

Post: 553

Join Date: Mar 2013



Hey HB i've had my spreadshirt for over a month now and have been adding designs in it based on community feedback as well my own designs.and would like to expand it out please check it out 

and as always you can request custom designs.

http://fuccboi.spreadshirt.com/
http://fuccboi.spreadshirt.com/

free shipping today on the 24th, with coupon : "XMASINJULY" 
fuck you and everything youve created

Feeling like Bishop from Juice

July 24, 2013 @ 11:43 PM
vileshit

Post: 76

Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: England

who really calls their brand fuccboi tho?
July 25, 2013 @ 12:22 AM
kiran h

Post: 395

Join Date: Jan 2013

Location: 306

I was fooling around in Illustrator last night and made these lol. Just wanted to get feedback and opinions on these and see if anything's worth getting and if anyone would want anything. Silence 88 would be printed on a mesh jersey, wavy and the other silence design would be on tee's, and the shorts would be mesh champion shorts. Commercialism tee was a joke haha. Just want your guys' opinions on this shit though. 











http://www.soundcloud.com/whoiskiran | twitter: @_notkiran | ig: kiranxharrison

July 25, 2013 @ 12:34 AM
Doriftos

Post: 6

Join Date: Jul 2013

I only like the first tee, make it black with white letters and keep the front blank
July 25, 2013 @ 01:34 AM
≈ nash ≈

Post: 109

Join Date: Mar 2013

Location: Pennsylvania

i actually like the commercialism tee, but without the writing on the back.

the red box logo alone is a subtle hit, which i like.

Connected Goods // www.connectedgoods.bigcartel.com

July 25, 2013 @ 02:40 AM
Ulrich

Post: 211

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: California

awkward but i like it lol
July 25, 2013 @ 03:09 AM
Blakada

Post: 14

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: Los Angeles

Hey HB,

this is the first press of my brand Desperotica,
the idea is essentially we want to put out pieces we would wear ourselves//
below are a few images from the lookbook/preview
any criticism/feedback is greatly apperciated!


www.desperotica.com
www.desperotica.com
www.desperotica.com



Buying the ryde r die tee ,minimalism doesn't always work. but when it does,it's beautiful! keep your brand feel consistent and flowing, I'll be a returning customer if you can pull it off next time. good luck, good work!
thank you for the support! yes, i wouldn't put out a design that did not have the original streetwear attitude (not some zumiez/plndr garbage pop kiddy graphics). without coming off too cheesy, but we're sticking to our roots. 
Keep it up - where are you guys located?

Los Angeles, CA | www.IllSic.com

July 25, 2013 @ 03:14 AM
Blakada

Post: 14

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: Los Angeles




Pre-Orders available on http://dscnewyork.com/ 
Seen no feedback on this brand atall, think this t shirt is pretty good id defiantly wear it anyway. As for the rest of your collection though. Drop the overdone french art tee's and the product description that tells me how fire the tee's look, no ones going to go to buy it and then go wow the company says this tee is fire im gonna buy it. Also drop the thrift store bracelets and take some new pictures of them sweaters because the shits saggin everywhere looks like you found it scrunched up in a time capsule from 1992 and just stuck it on a hnager without ironing it. Other than that tee in the picture is nice.
I second that

Los Angeles, CA | www.IllSic.com

July 25, 2013 @ 03:16 AM
RectBySovl

Post: 70

Join Date: Jul 2013



Hey HB i've had my spreadshirt for over a month now and have been adding designs in it based on community feedback as well my own designs.and would like to expand it out please check it out 

and as always you can request custom designs.

http://fuccboi.spreadshirt.com/
http://fuccboi.spreadshirt.com/

free shipping today on the 24th, with coupon : "XMASINJULY" 
fuck you and everything youve created
your so called "brand" name is fucking hilarious, i give you props for that but everything that you have is a joke.
First of all, all the shirts look the same, and their all horrible. The worst thing about it is that you have it on spreadshirt, which if im correct you dont even got more than half of the money when someone does buy something.
YOURE DOING IT ALL WRONG FUCCBOI

http://instagram.com/strictlystreet https://twitter.com/strictlyxstreet

July 25, 2013 @ 03:19 AM
RectBySovl

Post: 70

Join Date: Jul 2013

I can dig dangerers embroidered patch. Just got ours to start prepping F/W.

I want to know what this is going on!

http://instagram.com/strictlystreet https://twitter.com/strictlyxstreet

July 25, 2013 @ 03:21 AM
PersuadeClothing

Post: 15

Join Date: Jul 2013

Here's The Photo Again, Please Give Feedback. http://lademivie.tumblr.com
Pretty sick sweaters. When do you think you'll drop em?
July 25, 2013 @ 03:32 AM
Half Life

Post: 43

Join Date: Jul 2013

Here's The Photo Again, Please Give Feedback. http://lademivie.tumblr.com
Pretty sick sweaters. When do you think you'll drop em?
Probably fall this year, but will for sure come anytime before January.

Here's the first collection updated:

http://lademivie.tumblr.com/

July 25, 2013 @ 03:51 AM
hkeys

Post: 541

Join Date: Apr 2012

Location: Tampa

I can dig dangerers embroidered patch. Just got ours to start prepping F/W.

I want to know what this is going on!
Ahh in due time my friend. Feel free to comment on our thread next time. 

http://thedividedminds.com/

July 25, 2013 @ 02:12 PM
justinsos

Post: 81

Join Date: Feb 2012

Location: Canada

Hey! Released some summer stuff about a week ago and posted a lookbook video I made for it. Here is the link to the site (www.sinkorswimbrand.com) any feedback is welcome. Pretty stoked on it all. We are from Western Canada so anyone out here hit us up or if you just wanna chat. Always like meeting new people.

Here is our video as well!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=awcIvy8F16U

Thanks guys

Sink or Swim Brand / www.sinkorswimbrand.com / Spring 2014 this April

July 25, 2013 @ 05:15 PM
kcufthepopulation

Post: 50

Join Date: Aug 2012


http://www.kcufthepopulation.com

July 25, 2013 @ 06:08 PM
KENNY_POWERS

Post: 65

Join Date: Jun 2013

/\      DUDE I HAVE EPILEPSY.. NOOOOO
July 25, 2013 @ 06:54 PM
Blakada

Post: 14

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: Los Angeles

Hey HB,

this is the first press of my brand Desperotica,
the idea is essentially we want to put out pieces we would wear ourselves//
below are a few images from the lookbook/preview
any criticism/feedback is greatly apperciated!


www.desperotica.com
www.desperotica.com
www.desperotica.com



Keep it up - where are you guys located?
Toronto! (how often do you hear about brands coming from Toronto let alone Canada anyways) Thanks for the support
Not too often.. But you got a good look, grow your base and hope to see you up there my friend.

Los Angeles, CA | www.IllSic.com

July 25, 2013 @ 09:41 PM
TeddyBear Jake

Post: 13

Join Date: Jul 2013


This look is our best selling out of our second series.
 

http://www.dungeonforward.com/
http://instagram.com/dungeonforward
@dungeonforward
July 25, 2013 @ 10:07 PM
cabbage_giant

Post: 257

Join Date: Jun 2013


Thoughts on putting these prints on a bucket hat? Would you cop?
July 25, 2013 @ 10:41 PM
Blakada

Post: 14

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: Los Angeles


Thoughts on putting these prints on a bucket hat? Would you cop?
Designing these yourself?

Los Angeles, CA | www.IllSic.com

July 25, 2013 @ 11:03 PM
mintmamba

Post: 13

Join Date: Sep 2012


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