Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Feb 03, 2012 @ 18:01
Daniel Steez - This isn't hating or anything but the quality of the crewneck sweatshirts look pretty poor. Obviously I'm only going off a couple of pictures but so will your online customers. Can I ask which sweatshirts you use?

Really feeling the Grafitti Tee in Black though!
Feb 03, 2012 @ 22:14

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Feb 03, 2012 @ 23:29
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Feb 04, 2012 @ 03:15
Hey guys! Im back and have scratched my original design, thanks to everyone's words of wisdom.
I have now put alot of thought, time, and design into my new brand and name.

Please let me know what you guys think about these logos i drew up.





Feb 04, 2012 @ 04:38
Hey guys! Im back and have scratched my original design, thanks to everyone's words of wisdom.
I have now put alot of thought, time, and design into my new brand and name.

Please let me know what you guys think about these logos i drew up.






Eh, its hard to give advise with crayon drawings but they seem kinda childish to me. maybe that i what you want but that is the vibe i get from them. Not saying you have to be another person to make a box logo but could at least make a better sketch with straight lines and measured lengths and thicknesses

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Feb 04, 2012 @ 04:56
Daniel Steez - This isn't hating or anything but the quality of the crewneck sweatshirts look pretty poor. Obviously I'm only going off a couple of pictures but so will your online customers. Can I ask which sweatshirts you use?

Really feeling the Grafitti Tee in Black though!


They were some Hanes crewnecks (I forgot the style number) and we weren't really content with the quality either but luckily there aren't many left..thanks for your feedback!
I'm glad you were feeling the graffiti tee!

@GullySteez; All Things Dope.

Feb 04, 2012 @ 05:58
Hey guys! Im back and have scratched my original design, thanks to everyone's words of wisdom.
I have now put alot of thought, time, and design into my new brand and name.

Please let me know what you guys think about these logos i drew up.






Eh, its hard to give advise with crayon drawings but they seem kinda childish to me. maybe that i what you want but that is the vibe i get from them. Not saying you have to be another person to make a box logo but could at least make a better sketch with straight lines and measured lengths and thicknesses


Yo I think the concept is cool and even if you don't stick with those logos which I really like, just need to be polished (straight lines, equal measurements) with a professionals touch add some color & I think you could be on to something. I like the feel and the whole sketch, for what it is (prototype/preliminary design), and I hope you stick with it. Clean it up put it into photoshop or illustrator vector it up and run it back, I actually can't wait to see it.
Feb 04, 2012 @ 06:15
A client is looking for something like this as a sample

Tell me what you guys think.



damn this piece is clean! i'm really diggin your designs
Feb 04, 2012 @ 17:57
Hey guys! Im back and have scratched my original design, thanks to everyone's words of wisdom.
I have now put alot of thought, time, and design into my new brand and name.

Please let me know what you guys think about these logos i drew up.

the no vowels thing *ie : fndhmntl & using a triangle for the letter A is played out. i would stay away from that stuff.
Feb 04, 2012 @ 22:17
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Feb 04, 2012 @ 23:42
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the splash page is really annoying and your logo made me cringe.

http://www.distantlight.co

Feb 05, 2012 @ 00:17
Hey guys! Im back and have scratched my original design, thanks to everyone's words of wisdom.
I have now put alot of thought, time, and design into my new brand and name.

Please let me know what you guys think about these logos i drew up.

the no vowels thing *ie : fndhmntl & using a triangle for the letter A is played out. i would stay away from that stuff.

It would be awesome minus the hood and in a black colour.
The design kinda reminds me of the Nokia game "snakes"
http://p.d.ovi.com/p/g/store/2423312/TertiaryScreenShot_256x256_02-192x192.jpg?q=WhFn4xmmWRJZbyNnyU09VEqgu4aY8dx*&c=ovi_store
Feb 05, 2012 @ 01:08
Originally posted by Inactive User
I wasn't referring to what you said to me with telling people to scratch their brands...you basically just hit me with that one liner about the pigeon. But I was looking through this thread and there were a couple of comments that I thought could really have been more helpful.

I'm all about the criticism though and thank you for it. I respect that you're not feeling our designs. Everybody has their own taste.

Your concept for the brand is dope..the whole reason behind the name sounds deep so it's definitely something that will build your perception. I think naming your brand is probably the hardest thing to do and realizing why you really want to do this is as well. I respect that you have that defined. I am interested in viewing the logo so I'll be emailing you..we're all part of the new wave of street wear so it's important that we help each other out.


The name, branding, and the finding the message behind the brand is definitely the hardest part. It is all so critical to your brand. takes a lot of time and patience.

and my email is jake.olshan@gmail.com



You two motherfuckers need to stop writing books back and fourth to each other and focus on your design/market/buis skill sets, especially design. Post your shit, then go back to work, stop wasting your time with the attention seeking non sense. Unless of course, what you actually want to do, is become writers, in that case write on.

blackmfg.co fitted goods

Feb 05, 2012 @ 02:47
Looking for feedback on company's logo / mascot.




www.stillwild.co / online store that celebrates nature!

Feb 05, 2012 @ 03:22
Wsup hypebeast. After surveying from a couple other forums, we have finalized our new design for our crewneck sweatshirt that'll be releasing in March. Here is your sneakpeek to my new design, lemme know what you think..




^ The cities in the graphic is actually SF (Top) and LA (bottom).
Photos above are not the actual product**
Feb 05, 2012 @ 04:31
Looking for feedback on company's logo / mascot.




What are they supposed to say. That is so wack...

chadacadabra.tumblr.com

Feb 05, 2012 @ 05:14
I'll accept your opinion; but it seems that criticism in this thread is rarely constructive.

The logo says "Twenty Eight Grams."

www.stillwild.co / online store that celebrates nature!

Feb 05, 2012 @ 05:29
Looking for feedback on company's logo / mascot.





1st logo is hard to read try adding a outline on the writing.

2nd logo is hard to read too. add a different color for each word
Feb 05, 2012 @ 05:30
http://twentyeightgrams.com/post/16860582074/save-the-trees
^this would make as a cooler logo/design idea than the trees face i think.
Feb 05, 2012 @ 05:36
^Im not hating, I actually like it better than most other stuff on this thread, I just couldnt read it. I agree, i like the trees.

chadacadabra.tumblr.com

Feb 05, 2012 @ 05:45
Thanks for the feedback!

www.stillwild.co / online store that celebrates nature!

Feb 05, 2012 @ 07:22
The name, branding, and the finding the message behind the brand is definitely the hardest part. It is all so critical to your brand. takes a lot of time and patience.

and my email is jake.olshan@gmail.com



You two motherfuckers need to stop writing books back and fourth to each other and focus on your design/market/buis skill sets, especially design. Post your shit, then go back to work, stop wasting your time with the attention seeking non sense. Unless of course, what you actually want to do, is become writers, in that case write on.


i can tell your a little bit retarded. i dont even know what you mean by that.
may b if i typed lyk this u wood be more understanding? ok.

http://www.distantlight.co

Feb 05, 2012 @ 16:12
Wsup hypebeast. After surveying from a couple other forums, we have finalized our new design for our crewneck sweatshirt that'll be releasing in March. Here is your sneakpeek to my new design, lemme know what you think..




^ The cities in the graphic is actually SF (Top) and LA (bottom).
Photos above are not the actual product**


the lifted minds design is alright if you get rid of the smaller text, and totally scrap that sweatshirt model pic - it's really obvious you used the clone stamp tool over it. and then the second design has way too much shit going on, that'll never translate onto a shirt well. i also don't tihnk a tag connected to the collar is a good look

Owner/Creator: nopeclothing.com / fypblog.com

Feb 05, 2012 @ 16:21
Yeah, the collar tag has to go.
Feb 05, 2012 @ 16:28
Hey guys! Im back and have scratched my original design, thanks to everyone's words of wisdom.
I have now put alot of thought, time, and design into my new brand and name.

Please let me know what you guys think about these logos i drew up.





those look all REALLY good, im liking this last one especially. im guessing these are sketches so try and get em done in illustrator while trying to keep the hand drawn feel, and it'll definitely look super neat.fully backed.

EDIT:
I tried doin it in illustrator out of boredom and i think it came out pretty decent, hope you dont mind me doin this

if you want to use it just let me know and ill send you the illustrator file, just post me a tshirt if you ever get em printed ahaha

sleepingtherapy.tumblr.com

Feb 05, 2012 @ 21:29
Wsup hypebeast. After surveying from a couple other forums, we have finalized our new design for our crewneck sweatshirt that'll be releasing in March. Here is your sneakpeek to my new design, lemme know what you think..




^ The cities in the graphic is actually SF (Top) and LA (bottom).
Photos above are not the actual product**


the lifted minds design is alright if you get rid of the smaller text, and totally scrap that sweatshirt model pic - it's really obvious you used the clone stamp tool over it. and then the second design has way too much shit going on, that'll never translate onto a shirt well. i also don't tihnk a tag connected to the collar is a good look


Thanks for the comment! Yeah, I blurred off the original sweatshirt graphic of the model pic just to get a feel of how it'll look with our graphic on a sweatshirt since we don't have the actual product produced at this moment...:b As for the collar, I'll keep that in mind in the future; we've already ordered the tags altogether and it would be a waste if we don't use them..:x More comments are welcome..:]
Feb 05, 2012 @ 23:01
If any of you guys need Google+ pages for your brands, let me know, I'll be happy to help.
http://hypebeast.com/forums/general-fashion-discussion/165311/
Feb 06, 2012 @ 01:00
UCI BBA rocking our shirt during school cypher..blushing


Enjoyyyy..:]
Feb 06, 2012 @ 02:39
Hey everyone.
1st post here.

Im launching a brand, Blk&Clr Co. (Black And Colour Co.) on the 10th of this month.
Running and designing this alone, one girl brand ah.

The first line is quite dark, it's not the set stone for the brand though.

Hope you're into the first line thats dropping soon!




You can follow the brand at-
blkandclrbrand.tumblr.com

The girl @ blkandclr.com

Feb 06, 2012 @ 03:25
[quote=BlackAndColour;http://hypebeast.com/forums/post/3308655

Your brand has a great aesthetic appeal!

www.stillwild.co / online store that celebrates nature!

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