Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Apr 23, 2013 @ 13:42
yah man i gotta agree, it just looks sloppy. no hate, just bein honest.


No offense taken...if you dont mind me asking...what is sloppy about it?
Personally, I think the actual embroidery of the hands is lackluster and doesn't show enough detail. I think it is a hard design to truly pull off well. Some of the fingers look fat and weird due to the extra embroidery that was put in there in attempt to add depth to the hand. I just doesn't look clean I guess is really what I'm saying.

Also, obviously a few other people mentioned your Eric Daniel tag on the side. I think first an foremost as most said it too large but secondly you gotta get a logo man. I know you wanna use your name for your brand and that's gravy but I sure ass hell wouldn't want it plastered all over my stuff if I bought from you. Louis Vitton has the LV but you just have your name, you gotta get on your logo game.

To each his own I guess though. Regardless, keep grindin G.
Apr 23, 2013 @ 17:35
So.
Many.
Weed.
References.

"I keep myself so lifted I'm accustom to new heights."

Apr 23, 2013 @ 18:14
So.
Many.
Weed.
References.
Now that it is becoming more socially acceptable, everyone is hopping on the weed wagon,
but HUF straight killed it and it needs to stop.

ThePreciseLife.com

Apr 23, 2013 @ 19:41
just had a quick go at some logo designs.. wanna keep it clean but atm i feel they're not really unique enough.. what do ya'll think?


Apr 23, 2013 @ 20:18
Originally posted by Inactive User
SS 13 Pt. 2 Lookbook May 13 // SS 13 Pt. 2 May 17 --- aldenteco.com 

Instagram: aldente1985

AHH this is so well done fuck
omg just perfect.

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Apr 23, 2013 @ 20:20
Originally posted by Inactive User
OneThreeFive Natives Longsleeve tee's
"We Were Here First."
Philadelphia-based brand





http://onethreefive.bigcartel.com/  
fux widit
damn how many did you guys print..

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Apr 23, 2013 @ 21:02
So.
Many.
Weed.
References.
Now that it is becoming more socially acceptable, everyone is hopping on the weed wagon,
but HUF straight killed it and it needs to stop.
Then everybody's going to hop on the "let's-make-fun-of-the-weed-graphics-of-yesteryear" wagon. It's kinda like how people would ironically hashtag posts, so many people do it now, the people they're mocking are growing fewer and fewer.

hot water

Apr 23, 2013 @ 21:45
Now that it is becoming more socially acceptable, everyone is hopping on the weed wagon,
but HUF straight killed it and it needs to stop.
Then everybody's going to hop on the "let's-make-fun-of-the-weed-graphics-of-yesteryear" wagon. It's kinda like how people would ironically hashtag posts, so many people do it now, the people they're mocking are growing fewer and fewer.
idk how you can really make fun of that. 

ThePreciseLife.com

Apr 23, 2013 @ 22:24
Check us out 2moro- http://trialsandtriumph.com/


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Apr 23, 2013 @ 23:15
Then everybody's going to hop on the "let's-make-fun-of-the-weed-graphics-of-yesteryear" wagon. It's kinda like how people would ironically hashtag posts, so many people do it now, the people they're mocking are growing fewer and fewer.
idk how you can really make fun of that. 
The weed graphics? Here was my attempt at it:

hot water

Apr 24, 2013 @ 00:15

http://www.trialsandtriumph.com | Several different stories|

Apr 24, 2013 @ 00:49
idk how you can really make fun of that. 
The weed graphics? Here was my attempt at it:
are those air horns?

ThePreciseLife.com

Apr 24, 2013 @ 01:45
The weed graphics? Here was my attempt at it:
are those air horns?
Crack pipes, actually, although you did bring up a main fear I had with the design. A pot leaf is pretty much universally recognizable, while a crack pipe's silhouette apparently isn't.

hot water

Apr 24, 2013 @ 02:30
A final touch to our packages before another shipment.


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Apr 24, 2013 @ 03:18
handle all logistics, design, graphics, direction and website interface design of my company First Twelve, I put about 8  hours in a day aside from school, i can't stop! It would be much appreciated if you can recognize and give it a look, thank you in advance everyone!  also, im new to this, what's the best way to insert a picture? i cant pull from flickr for some reason

http://www.firsttwelveclothing.com/Default.asp
Apr 24, 2013 @ 06:21
wow............................

Cheap Casual Dresses

Apr 24, 2013 @ 07:05
just had a quick go at some logo designs.. wanna keep it clean but atm i feel they're not really unique enough.. what do ya'll think?


why so many down votes? 
Apr 24, 2013 @ 11:44
What are your honest thoughts on these? I'll post a new design concept later, just want to know what everyone's opinions are.


SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

Apr 24, 2013 @ 13:14
^^^ the black tee with the helmet dude looks line he's wearing a metal dick... I would not wear it. The white one is ok but others have already used the dollar graphics/design. The babe is hot btw.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Apr 24, 2013 @ 16:26
A final touch to our packages before another shipment.

Now this is dope!

"I keep myself so lifted I'm accustom to new heights."

Apr 24, 2013 @ 16:29
handle all logistics, design, graphics, direction and website interface design of my company First Twelve, I put about 8  hours in a day aside from school, i can't stop! It would be much appreciated if you can recognize and give it a look, thank you in advance everyone!  also, im new to this, what's the best way to insert a picture? i cant pull from flickr for some reason

http://www.firsttwelveclothing.com/Default.asp
its alright, cheesy hover effects on the nav menu though

ThePreciseLife.com

Apr 24, 2013 @ 18:30


a design i did inspired by the anime berserk

http://www.dangerers.bigcartel.com

Apr 24, 2013 @ 18:38


a design i did inspired by the anime berserk
its spelled, dangerous. just saying.

ThePreciseLife.com

Apr 24, 2013 @ 18:47


a design i did inspired by the anime berserk
its spelled, dangerous. just saying.
dangerers is from a manga 

http://www.dangerers.bigcartel.com

Apr 24, 2013 @ 21:01
its spelled, dangerous. just saying.
dangerers is from a manga 
theres more people that will think it is a misspelled word rather than a manga term.
and the shirt is weak man, old english is not the business. not trying to burst your bubble
just being honest

ThePreciseLife.com

Apr 24, 2013 @ 21:06
Here's a preview of the debut Spring Collection of The Invisible Clothing Brand, a streetwear brand based out of Vancouver. With the launch of the brand we've opened a Pop Up Shop located at 434 Columbia Street in Chinatown, which will be open until May 1st. The webstore is available to view the rest of the collection at http://www.becomeinvisible.ca/ 



About the Brand: http://www.becomeinvisible.ca/pages/about-us
Instagram: @theinvisibleclothingbrand
Twitter: @invsblebrand

Feedback is appreciated.

Thanks.
I can see the West Coast Lifestyle piece getting some buzz. It has a recognizable element but has is tweaked enough to put your own stamp on it. I think more could be done with the Marilyn image but like the slogan. The last quadrant image doesn't really do much for me.

Great job keep it up!

www.2CommaKid.com

Apr 24, 2013 @ 23:14
Doing a big $200 giveaway on our fan page today, heres the link if you wanna check it out https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=449280938492610&set=a.139515699469137.36494.126317067455667&type=1&theater


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Apr 24, 2013 @ 23:30
handle all logistics, design, graphics, direction and website interface design of my company First Twelve, I put about 8  hours in a day aside from school, i can't stop! It would be much appreciated if you can recognize and give it a look, thank you in advance everyone!  also, im new to this, what's the best way to insert a picture? i cant pull from flickr for some reason

http://www.firsttwelveclothing.com/Default.asp
its alright, cheesy hover effects on the nav menu though
thanks? lol
Apr 24, 2013 @ 23:43
Opinions? Something I designed in Illustrator: 
Apr 25, 2013 @ 03:55
Opinions? Something I designed in Illustrator: 
Did you blur out the face of the guy in center? Makes the design look sloppy to me.

hot water

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