@ ekong the drums are dope, the switch up in the hooks good too. the verses are too repetitive, i wouldnt even say it has a melody, just that synth sound playing over & over. see if you can add something to it.
@ black star the melody idea you have in there i think is good, but the vsts you used are just horrible. the piano sounds lame, and the other synths are bad & sound offkey at times. i would suggest getting a better piano vst. i use Akoustik Keyz by DSK, its a freeware & after you put some reverb on it, it sounds pretty damn good.
also, my newest rap beat : http://soundcloud.com/thethirddubstep/liquid-hate
Ya im still new to the sampling game. This is the first song i posted where I sampled.
Really appreciate the feedback