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June 3, 2008 @ 04:22 PM
cyclonearts

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Join Date: Jun 2008

[EDIT FROM PREVIOUS FIRST POST]
Check out my upcoming label. Working on the summer collection so I'm looking for some feedback. Let me know which one(s) you'd wear and which one(s) you wouldn't wear. Any constructive criticism welcome:
June 3, 2008 @ 06:33 PM
I CAME FROM NOTHING

Post: 1296

Join Date: Apr 2007

Location: Glasgow

cool local mall tees...
June 4, 2008 @ 01:40 AM
Allurre

Post: 659

Join Date: Nov 2007

Location: L.A, BANGKOK, COAST...

what up.. designs are clean & solid. It doesn't really fit my personality though, but I'm sure there's a big market out there for this. Keep up the good work.
June 4, 2008 @ 02:31 AM
krayzeez

Post: 471

Join Date: Mar 2008

Pretty nice designs but not my style.
June 4, 2008 @ 03:52 AM
UCArts

Post: 497

Join Date: Apr 2007

Location: Australia

Some nice Designs there!
June 4, 2008 @ 08:08 AM
dkor

Post: 84

Join Date: Mar 2007

Location: germoney

cool local mall tees...


what a bunch of bullshit...
you call it wack because of its not the typical "streetwear" garbage usually posted in here like crappy non-makin sense sentences all over shirts and wacko cutout movie stars?

whats the shit about being able to sell your stuff in malls and make alot of $$$?
those companies just made it dude.

this shit here is technically way way better than 90% of the other shit posted here.

i like it... even if i wouldn wear it becaus it aint fits my style.
June 4, 2008 @ 08:27 AM
PAYPER757

Post: 22

Join Date: May 2008

Mall Tees
I agree with everything dkor said.
My only thing is the name of the brand....I mean Its cool if you only want to make t-shirts but I think its def something to worry about if you ever plan on doing cut & sew.....
but yeah-
I really like the designs and I'm sure that you will prosper...

Myspace.com/PaypeRoute

cool
June 4, 2008 @ 06:25 PM
cyclonearts

Post: 28

Join Date: Jun 2008

Hey thanks for the feedback. The line is gonna be just t-shirts since its what I've been doing for years and what I also have an online mag about. Also, what "T-Shirt Gang" represents is the unorthadox new generation of business in which you don't need to get in a suit or work for a big corporation to get that paper. Alot of businesses are popping up that started with a group of regular t-shirt wearing kids that stayed on the grind till it paid off. The T-Shirt Gang--me, you, anybody gettin their hustle on.
June 4, 2008 @ 07:35 PM
sarcastik

Post: 131

Join Date: May 2008

Location: Oakland, Ca

Nice designs...got a web link to your magazine and shirt site?
June 4, 2008 @ 11:10 PM
evers

Post: 91

Join Date: Mar 2008

Location: Philly

its like damn i wish the message was something else because the design is proper. you can go ahead and expect big things though.
June 5, 2008 @ 03:57 AM
I CAME FROM NOTHING

Post: 1296

Join Date: Apr 2007

Location: Glasgow

THE CASH ( CLASH ) tees looks cool,

the red Young Entr... tee is so messy its unbelivable, type allover the place, the monkey illi looks okay

peace
June 5, 2008 @ 05:30 AM
tckZANALEE.

Post: 1

Join Date: May 2008

Location: Sydney.

i like it.
i'd wear the ones with the cartoons.
the walking hand with cash is cool.
June 5, 2008 @ 06:23 AM
@KRAEZYClothing

Post: 143

Join Date: Feb 2008

Location: East London

Yo
I think you got somew tight shit son. Id rock some of your shirts .

krae

CREATIVE HUSTLERS TRADING PLACES

June 5, 2008 @ 09:04 AM
cyclonearts

Post: 28

Join Date: Jun 2008

Sarcastik- My site is T-Shirt Magazine and my shop site is still in the works.
Kustom- The red one is a flip of a magazine cover. They're always filled with a bunch of type all over the place and look jumbled:

Thanks for the comments.
June 5, 2008 @ 10:47 AM
I CAME FROM NOTHING

Post: 1296

Join Date: Apr 2007

Location: Glasgow

Sarcastik- My site is T-Shirt Magazine and my shop site is still in the works.
Kustom- The red one is a flip of a magazine cover. They're always filled with a bunch of type all over the place and look jumbled:

Thanks for the comments.


yeah dude, ive done many fliers like that b4, magazie style

hey its all good
June 5, 2008 @ 08:05 PM
PYO-FTF

Post: 91

Join Date: Apr 2008

Location: LONDON, WHERE IT RAI...

NOW YOUR SHIT REALLY IS DOPE, Couple people on HB sucking each otha dicks, even tho there designs suck! >sad
June 7, 2008 @ 12:53 PM
cyclonearts

Post: 28

Join Date: Jun 2008

Thanks for the positive feedback, here's the entire first batch I'll be releasing. I'd like to know out of the whole collection (not including the ones featured in the first post of this thread) which one(s) do you think could be improved/what about it could be better? Take a look, lemme know:
June 7, 2008 @ 02:35 PM
ex's

Post: 141

Join Date: Sep 2007

what a bunch of bullshit...
you call it wack because of its not the typical "streetwear" garbage usually posted in here like crappy non-makin sense sentences all over shirts and wacko cutout movie stars?

whats the shit about being able to sell your stuff in malls and make alot of $$$?
those companies just made it dude.

this shit here is technically way way better than 90% of the other shit posted here.

i like it... even if i wouldn wear it becaus it aint fits my style.



it is typical "streetwear" garbage.
June 8, 2008 @ 01:47 PM
cyclonearts

Post: 28

Join Date: Jun 2008

Streetwear is what I'm going for so if it falls into that category its all good. Thanks
June 8, 2008 @ 02:02 PM
613Bulletproof

Post: 81

Join Date: Dec 2007

i guess their alright designs
June 8, 2008 @ 05:05 PM
antilabs

Post: 110

Join Date: May 2008

your shirts are better than 95% of the bullshit people get dap for in here.
June 8, 2008 @ 08:24 PM
PYO-FTF

Post: 91

Join Date: Apr 2008

Location: LONDON, WHERE IT RAI...

your shirts are better than 95% of the bullshit people get dap for in here.


Damn right! >sad
June 10, 2008 @ 12:54 PM
UnUsualGeek78

Post: 19

Join Date: Mar 2008

even though it doesnt fit my style.. its unique.. and im a unique person.. so i would definitely would rock when out handling business or even performing.. HOT SHYT.. and im 1000% backing up Dkor comment..
June 10, 2008 @ 08:36 PM
cyclonearts

Post: 28

Join Date: Jun 2008

Thanks for the support. Tees should be in within a week and I'm shootin the lookbook soon so I'll post more pics.
June 13, 2008 @ 12:11 PM
Kaffeb

Post: 18

Join Date: Jun 2008

To be honest. These designs are mediocore. The ideas aren't bad, but the execution is poor. It looks like you've just spend 5-10 mins on each design.

But still it isn't the worst work i've seen in here.
June 13, 2008 @ 01:29 PM
shitfaced

Post: 73

Join Date: Feb 2008

Location: Brooklyn

ur designs and ideas arent horrible but they still need work.

one piece of advice:

Warping type unless you are trying to create perspective is a definite no-no (you did this in the top of "taking over the world" and most of "all about our business" designs)
you can make text fit into different spaces without warping them, u can use different point sizes for each letter, adjust placement, kearning, and baseline shift etc... learn to use good typography before trying to warp type
June 14, 2008 @ 02:59 PM
antilabs

Post: 110

Join Date: May 2008

...your type looks straight homie. don't trip.
June 16, 2008 @ 10:29 PM
Zero Sky

Post: 13

Join Date: Sep 2007

Location: Orange County, CA

I like the cash shirt

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