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June 17, 2007 @ 10:59 PM
romeo291

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Join Date: Oct 2006

Location: Raleigh, NC

Hey guys, this is Anh-Tuan from FYSH Clothing Co. I am planning on releasing these two shirts for this summer, but I am trying to get some feedback on how to improve the designs. Please give me your opinion on these shirts. Whether it be positive or negative, I am mainly looking for suggestions more than anything. Thank you very much in advance for looking and giving your opinion.

The shirts will retail for $20 shipped from our website, and expect them to be released in early to mid July.

NATIONAL FYSH ASSOCIATION tee:


SHARK IMPOSTER tee:
June 17, 2007 @ 11:11 PM
h.lurker

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Location: LA/NJ

Might work if you're marketing to middle school streetwear thugs.
June 17, 2007 @ 11:23 PM
Japan4

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Location: Babylon

second one i give a 7 out of 10.

rilly doe?

June 17, 2007 @ 11:58 PM
FFent Freelanc

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Location: Silver Spring, MD

^^ im with Ryan on it - the vector jobs arent bad but its still a bit cartooney without being like reminiscent or euphoric of the cartoons your target audience were raised on - and i like the whole wearing a shark hoody thing but SHARK IMPOSTER on the back doesnt do it for me
June 18, 2007 @ 12:15 AM
UCArts

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Location: Australia

1st - I think you need to put more detail on the gun & remove the writing from the back of the tee.
2nd - I Love this Design but maybe you should change "shark imposter" to just "Imposter" and move the fonts closer together because you can see small gaps between some of the letters.
June 18, 2007 @ 10:22 AM
Eggroll822

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Location: Raleigh, NC

the front of the NFA design is older the new one has highlights and such on the gun and whale. I think the back of NFA will probably change due to that we dont' people NOT to buy it just cause of the back.

back of the shark tee is up for adjusting.
June 18, 2007 @ 02:09 PM
Eggroll822

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Location: Raleigh, NC

what yall think about putting the shark on the front of a tee and the "imma fk you up on the back"
June 18, 2007 @ 03:21 PM
repda916

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Location: SAC TOWN-916

what yall think about putting the shark on the front of a tee and the "imma fk you up on the back"


i dont really like shirts that have cursing.
June 18, 2007 @ 03:54 PM
Preshus

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id recommend making the F word like 'F*CK' with the star, prob get more sales like that.
June 18, 2007 @ 04:10 PM
romeo291

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Location: Raleigh, NC

I'll probably do w/out the cussing on the back of the NFA shirt. The main focus is on the front design anyways, the text was suppose to be a comical thing to accomdate the front, but a lot of ppl are like offended or something. I didn't really think it was a big deal since I've seen so many shirts with cussing and naked girls and stuff, and they do pretty well in the market. But yeah, I don't want people to refrain from buying the shirt just because they're afraid to wear it due to the text on the back. But yeah, I'll either use something else or put the asterik somewhere.
June 18, 2007 @ 05:20 PM
deliveryboy3

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Join Date: May 2007

man those shirts are dope. but it is hard to tell where his hand is on the first one becuase it blends in with the gun... but other than that its intense!

two thumbs up!
June 18, 2007 @ 11:22 PM
CEEZER

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kind of corny i think , and dudes that can't fuck up a flea shouldn't wear that|0
June 20, 2007 @ 12:41 AM
FFent Freelanc

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Location: Silver Spring, MD

i hate shirts that have asterisks and shifted up num. key symbols in place of bad words so PLEASE change it, dont edit it, thats like releasing only an edited album lol
June 20, 2007 @ 12:49 AM
HB ruin mylife

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Join Date: Mar 2007

its nice, it's wat FYSH is all about and follows the shirts in the past,,,but all these shirts with FUCK, theres no need for that,,,i say keep it simple and put nothin in back of the first shirt, and maybe put the text of the second shirt in the front.
June 20, 2007 @ 05:03 PM
tygastyle80

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Join Date: Mar 2006

The second tee is dope without the text on the back. I think you should keep your designs simple... too much text just messes it up. The first design has just too much goin on and i don't really get what it's about... I don't see too many people coppin it just for the design.
June 21, 2007 @ 10:13 AM
RedOraNYC

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Location: New York

kind of corny i think , and dudes that can't fuck up a flea shouldn't wear that|0



lol...u right...you gotta keep in mind the "IMPOSTERS" that will uy that shirt and get a Rodney King Style Beat down...

Red Ora NYC

June 21, 2007 @ 08:03 PM
Shanklin

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I like the idea of the second.

http://kevinshanklin.com/ IF YOU HAVE A FFFOUND.COM INVITE MSG ME

July 2, 2007 @ 10:49 AM
Eggroll822

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Location: Raleigh, NC

back of both has been decided will post later
July 2, 2007 @ 12:02 PM
I CAME FROM NOTHING

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Location: Glasgow

nahh
not feeling anything on these
July 2, 2007 @ 12:13 PM
entangledvyne

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Location: Boston

the first one eh doesnt really do it for me,
i like the second one alot though! but would you need permission from bape too market that shirt you think? im not too familiar with the industry in that sort of way.. But i really like the shark one.
July 2, 2007 @ 05:16 PM
FearItSelf

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Location: Portland Oregon

def not feelin these
July 2, 2007 @ 08:54 PM
Eggroll822

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Location: Raleigh, NC

final designs colors might change on back of shark design but basically ready for printers



July 2, 2007 @ 09:05 PM
jessejessej

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Location: Down South

i didnt read any of the comments so if this is repeated im sorry...cursing for no reason ain't cool...fuck
July 2, 2007 @ 10:02 PM
Eggroll822

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Location: Raleigh, NC

yea guess you didn't see the revised backs also
July 3, 2007 @ 12:16 AM
FFent Freelanc

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Location: Silver Spring, MD

i dont like the light blue as the circle background color it looks really off.....and i liked when it said IMPOSTER for the shark shirt but like, id still cop lol the design is so funny to me LET ME COP NOW!
July 3, 2007 @ 06:20 AM
Tyler Durden

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rednecks will kill you once they see you wearing the first shirt
July 3, 2007 @ 06:20 AM
Tyler Durden

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rednecks will kill you once they see you wearing the first shirt
July 9, 2007 @ 07:03 PM
Eggroll822

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Location: Raleigh, NC

FYSH is moving to AAA shirts this summer
July 9, 2007 @ 08:13 PM
wallychamp

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Location: Los Angeles

the back lower logo with the arrow through it seems like a waste of money for that second color. overall clean designs!
July 10, 2007 @ 06:25 PM
GSTUDIOS

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Location: MPLS

yeah, to be honest, im not a fan of the art style that your logo is under.

but

the designs are cool, but not something i would wear because its not my style.

advice, take the text off of the back of each shirt. definately the first one because i think that font-logo combo is terrible

i think the first design is more catchy becaue its like, "FYSH is a symbol of America"

but, keep on keepin on, but the stuff just doesnt appeal to me

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