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April 13, 2013 @ 05:31 AM
BLo

Post: 118

Join Date: Dec 2010

Location: LA2SF

My friend David just started doing stand-up comedy and he is looking for some honest feedback

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qIormjY6zo0

please comment your opinion or anything you think he needs to work on

Thank you!
April 13, 2013 @ 05:38 AM
unemployed

Post: 1440

Join Date: Feb 2012

Location: CANADA EH!

i thought it was drew at first
April 13, 2013 @ 06:32 AM
AndreLutherKing

Post: 3407

Join Date: Feb 2012

Location: Hansumville

The jokes were funny but you could notice his nervousness. If he works on that he can do far.

Chicks barely dancin, glancin every chance they get, like - oh shit, he's so HANSUM

April 13, 2013 @ 03:53 PM
Hellah Fresh

Post: 4068

Join Date: Dec 2006

If you want Stand-up Comedy just look in the mirror.
April 13, 2013 @ 06:08 PM
Soul Rize

Post: 2123

Join Date: Dec 2010

Location: Houston

at most it made me smile  . but as for laughs. it wasn't to good. 

Cmon get down with a real nigga wussup

April 13, 2013 @ 06:19 PM
guyitsmathew

Post: 1107

Join Date: May 2012

Location: Miami

could've been funnier if he had acted more and moved around on the stage rather than just standing in one place

http://www.guyitsmathew.net/

April 13, 2013 @ 07:57 PM
No Fuxx Given

Post: 602

Join Date: Nov 2011

Location: Canada

He was alright 

Fly on little wing

April 13, 2013 @ 08:20 PM
zilla

Post: 333

Join Date: Sep 2012

i listen to like a million comedian-hosted podcasts and it seems like the consensus is that you'll suck for a couple years and 10 seems to be the sweet spot as far as blowin up
April 13, 2013 @ 08:23 PM
Beach2theBay

Post: 3388

Join Date: Apr 2009

Location: Long Beach,CA

I went to SFSU!

His "comedy" aint poppin though. He needs to work on his story telling and his presentation too. That shit was just an awkward ass, unfunny story.
April 13, 2013 @ 08:27 PM
Captain Al

Post: 1754

Join Date: Feb 2013

I thought it was funny. his voice is kinda shaky though, imo.

tumblr: bankpaper.tumblr.com Instagram: @bankpaper

April 14, 2013 @ 07:15 AM
sharky

Post: 1228

Join Date: Feb 2010

Location: gta

it was aite
he cud improve the story more. theres a lot more relatable shit that he cudv mentioned about being an awkward high schooler trynna get ur dick wet
April 14, 2013 @ 11:12 PM
++Phil

Post: 975

Join Date: Jan 2007

Location: CA all day

i listen to like a million comedian-hosted podcasts and it seems like the consensus is that you'll suck for a couple years and 10 seems to be the sweet spot as far as blowin up
Do you listen to Red Bar Radio? 
April 15, 2013 @ 12:05 AM
KwanzaJuice

Post: 135

Join Date: Aug 2012

Location: icehouse

i listen to like a million comedian-hosted podcasts and it seems like the consensus is that you'll suck for a couple years and 10 seems to be the sweet spot as far as blowin up
Deathsquad? JRE

"if God made somthin bretter than pussy he keepin it fo himself" - Mike Tyson

April 18, 2013 @ 06:01 AM
BLo

Post: 118

Join Date: Dec 2010

Location: LA2SF

Here is another video you could critique: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pP5WVIRTRRs starts at 1:00
April 18, 2013 @ 06:10 AM
dorothy016

Post: 3

Join Date: Apr 2013

All i can say he is pretty good.

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