#BARS #RAPPING

January 28, 2013 @ 17:38:18
Yo BlackBieber just hooked me up with the exclusive sneak peek of his new hit and wanted some constructive feedback on his modern poetry: http://pastebin.com/tTLPE7r6

move over joe budden theres a new greatest rapper of all time.
January 28, 2013 @ 17:40:08
Since he deleted the pastebin, here is what the text in it said:


Originally posted by Inactive User
Im from the continent where the birds dont flyLook to the sky hope i reconcile with the earth tonight
And get my curse to die I think i earned that right
Damn it it sure is time for a joy surge in life
Yizzir, gold like a treasure
Dun call me ur mister hoe We aint standin under a mistletoe
Why u tryna kiss me fo Jus want get dis tip n go
This rite here aint meant to blow This be jus a means to... blow
Get it, get it, i spit then i dead it
they stretch the truth like a split is Me i isnt cuz im splendid
Look The plan is to jus plant this seed...
and and then we expand it to the whole planet, and we dun jack son like janet
They do it cuz they jelly like wut jam is
Some sleep in they pyjamas when i be jammin
But watch me wake em up Wake n bake it up
Lately aint been blazin cuz It dun feel the same as much
 
Puts me in a bad mood when a nigga tryna pick it up
So lets have a break this month, n see wut a happen then
I used to wanna get dunks like shaq n em
But mama wasnt havin it
Now got a part time, i can afford mine
But i styll wanna dunk like shaq n em
Dreams of me gettin shaded under a money tree
Cept dun hav da same vision of ma future dat my mommy see
Like in a cpl months ill be, in college in her mind but b
My grades r far from B, plus wanna be the man dat married B
I mean im cool wit skool but it wont be a tool ill use
Or need, ill jus focus on makin dope shit till its news i blew
Damn i hope i make it, man i hope i make it
If i dont ill feel like i disapointed a nation
Wit the self pressure n fam dat needs accomodations
From da motherland and need a hand like playstaytion
 
Controllers, cuz man life trolled us
She relentlessy attempts to make a nigga heart colder
But she aint gonna, imma fuck her n never call her
Cuz revenge is even more of a bitch so its on bruh
Bugz versus life, my girl is nice
Yo bitch head game like she has lice
Haha dis cat never not clever
But yall aint got to thank me, its always my pleasure
January 28, 2013 @ 19:18:47
dmwalking
Why'd he delete it? If you're afraid of feedback, you ain't built for the game.

HB stands for Help Beast. Currently supporting the supportive movement.

January 28, 2013 @ 19:43:57
Why u tryna kiss me fo Jus want get dis tip n go
This rite here aint meant to blow This be jus a means to... blow
Get it, get it, i spit then i dead it
they stretch the truth like a split is Me i isnt cuz im splendid


...GOAT
January 28, 2013 @ 20:17:15
Since he deleted the pastebin, here is what the text in it said:


Originally posted by Inactive User
Im from the continent where the birds dont flyLook to the sky hope i reconcile with the earth tonight
And get my curse to die I think i earned that right
Damn it it sure is time for a joy surge in life
Yizzir, gold like a treasure
Dun call me ur mister hoe We aint standin under a mistletoe
Why u tryna kiss me fo Jus want get dis tip n go
This rite here aint meant to blow This be jus a means to... blow
Get it, get it, i spit then i dead it
they stretch the truth like a split is Me i isnt cuz im splendid
Look The plan is to jus plant this seed...
and and then we expand it to the whole planet, and we dun jack son like janet
They do it cuz they jelly like wut jam is
Some sleep in they pyjamas when i be jammin
But watch me wake em up Wake n bake it up
Lately aint been blazin cuz It dun feel the same as much
 
Puts me in a bad mood when a nigga tryna pick it up
So lets have a break this month, n see wut a happen then
I used to wanna get dunks like shaq n em
But mama wasnt havin it
Now got a part time, i can afford mine
But i styll wanna dunk like shaq n em
Dreams of me gettin shaded under a money tree
Cept dun hav da same vision of ma future dat my mommy see
Like in a cpl months ill be, in college in her mind but b
My grades r far from B, plus wanna be the man dat married B
I mean im cool wit skool but it wont be a tool ill use
Or need, ill jus focus on makin dope shit till its news i blew
Damn i hope i make it, man i hope i make it
If i dont ill feel like i disapointed a nation
Wit the self pressure n fam dat needs accomodations
From da motherland and need a hand like playstaytion
 
Controllers, cuz man life trolled us
She relentlessy attempts to make a nigga heart colder
But she aint gonna, imma fuck her n never call her
Cuz revenge is even more of a bitch so its on bruh
Bugz versus life, my girl is nice
Yo bitch head game like she has lice
Haha dis cat never not clever
But yall aint got to thank me, its always my pleasure
smh at "playstaytion"

Golden locks, emboldened cocks,
Molded frocks, alighted flocks, soaring up above
Loosened gape from big dick rape, his purple skin akin to grape
I suckled on his carnal nozzle and guzzled down his manhood
The taste of vencum was quite the joy, in his own words, "Damn, boy."
When it spurted once more into the breach, he jammed it once more into my cheeks
January 28, 2013 @ 20:23:03

Golden locks, emboldened cocks,
Molded frocks, alighted flocks, soaring up above
Loosened gape from big dick rape, his purple skin akin to grape
I suckled on his carnal nozzle and guzzled down his manhood
The taste of vencum was quite the joy, in his own words, "Damn, boy."
When it spurted once more into the breach, he jammed it once more into my cheeks
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