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April 11, 2011 @ 12:12 AM
basspro

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Join Date: Nov 2010

Location: 91

Ayo so me and my bro put in mad work with our music and trying to come wit quailty shit and push are ideas forward ...and im looking for some fuking feedback..so i post this (rough) track we did in the music thread hopeing for feedback and no one paid it no FUCKING MIND
AND I KNW I FUCKING SOUND LIKE A BIG BITCH RIGHT NOW.. BUT COT'DAMN...IM JUST A KID TRYING TO PRUSE HIS DREAMS! are you pretentious dicks to cool to peep my work?
April 11, 2011 @ 12:16 AM
hentai

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Location: ヽ༼ຈل͜ຈ༽ノ


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April 11, 2011 @ 12:19 AM
Shanklin

Post: 9593

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Link?

http://kevinshanklin.com/ IF YOU HAVE A FFFOUND.COM INVITE MSG ME

April 11, 2011 @ 12:21 AM
basspro

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April 11, 2011 @ 12:21 AM
Benny Lava

Post: 1927

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Location: Los Angeles

man, before you start rapping, perhaps you should try and master the English language. I counted 8 spelling/grammatical errors. And that was just during the first read through. I'm sure there's more. Go hone your skills, you are not yet ready.

Edit: just listened to that track. perhaps you should focus on sports or pursue another hobby like stamp collecting or building ships inside bottles.

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April 11, 2011 @ 12:22 AM
tallymebanana

Post: 253

Join Date: Feb 2009

Location: The CHI

edit: your audio quality sucks and your flow needs work. its sounds amateurish, but its not that bad just keep it up and youll probly have it down in a few years or so.
April 11, 2011 @ 12:22 AM
Iggle

Post: 1135

Join Date: Nov 2007

♥♥♥♥♥ you going to make us dig around to find your shit? post a link

i probably wont check it out anyways

edit: listened to it. threw up all over my keyboard

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April 11, 2011 @ 12:24 AM
basspro

Post: 1120

Join Date: Nov 2010

Location: 91

man, before you start rapping, perhaps you should try and master the English language. I counted 8 spelling/grammatical errors. And that was just during the first read through. I'm sure there's more. Go hone your skills, you are not yet ready.


i know your right..i was ranting and didnt read over..next rant will have zero grammatical mistakes
April 11, 2011 @ 12:27 AM
basspro

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Location: 91

threw up all over my keyboard??

FUCK
April 11, 2011 @ 12:29 AM
Shanklin

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Lmao I legit thought you were talking for almost half of the track, like one of those long ass spitta intros. I had no clue that was your flow lol. Get your quality up and work on your flow.

http://kevinshanklin.com/ IF YOU HAVE A FFFOUND.COM INVITE MSG ME

April 11, 2011 @ 12:32 AM
bulmasaur

Post: 1131

Join Date: Oct 2010

Location: Chicago

Lmao I legit thought you were talking for almost half of the track, like one of those long ass spitta intros. I had no clue that was your flow lol. Get your quality up and work on your flow.


LOLLLL same
April 11, 2011 @ 12:33 AM
basspro

Post: 1120

Join Date: Nov 2010

Location: 91

AYO THANK YOU EVERYONE, SOOO FUCKING GODDAMN MUCH!!!!!!
THIS IS JUST THE START AND BLAH BLAH ALL THAT GAY SHIT
BUT ILL BE BACK WITH ALOT MORE WORK(on beats,flow and ideas) AND COME BACK TO PROVE BENNY WRONG!!!

all praise due to allah
April 11, 2011 @ 12:42 AM
Awww SNAP

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