Join Date: Aug 2006
I've been recording for about a year now, and I was so much worse when I first started recording (I had just turned 16), not that my opinion is any better than anyone else's but I'll try to help you out.
When you put songs out, you have as many chances as you want to record them, don't put it out if you have a part where your off beat or mess up a line, Just re-do it (right after the 8 mile line). Your voice is much better than Cryptick, but yeah it does have that touch of hispanic in it, not that its bad.
Another thing, I dont know if you read that off paper or memorized it, but try to memorize your verses cuz its easier to spit it with emotion that way or just focus on bringing a bit more energy. Try doubling and ad-libbing a bit on your songs, see if you like how it comes out, it can make it better. But keep it up man, Your good.
Thats all i got off the top of my head, I hated when people wouldn't give me thorough responses for my songs so I felt like i should go into detail.