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August 31, 2007 @ 05:19 PM

Inactive

Infamous, like i said...use your mic more before I kill u. Not bad...
August 31, 2007 @ 05:26 PM
FearItSelf

Post: 3103

Join Date: Dec 2006

Location: Portland Oregon

pretty nice, i respect your flow
August 31, 2007 @ 08:48 PM
RUBYRHODSOHIP

Post: 1771

Join Date: Dec 2006

Location: MD/DC area

So....I gotta check this out, please dont dissapoint...Like how I spelled that right...
August 31, 2007 @ 09:05 PM

Inactive

great song.

minus the n!gga at the end
August 31, 2007 @ 09:20 PM
ackbar

Post: 665

Join Date: Mar 2006

pretty bad.. to be expected i guess

your homie is really struggling to get on beat
August 31, 2007 @ 11:42 PM
realignant

Post: 1639

Join Date: Jan 2007

i think it was dope, as it is your first ever.
September 1, 2007 @ 07:29 PM

Inactive

You sound like a black dude trying to be hispanic.
September 1, 2007 @ 10:15 PM
philly the kid

Post: 196

Join Date: May 2007

Location: puget sound, WA

your flow's off from the beat.....I'd say it's a good effort for your first track.
September 1, 2007 @ 10:26 PM
iDANYO

Post: 6323

Join Date: Sep 2006

Location: 510,Bay Area

I liked it
September 2, 2007 @ 12:37 AM
Yova

Post: 20

Join Date: Aug 2006

Location: VA

I've been recording for about a year now, and I was so much worse when I first started recording (I had just turned 16), not that my opinion is any better than anyone else's but I'll try to help you out.

When you put songs out, you have as many chances as you want to record them, don't put it out if you have a part where your off beat or mess up a line, Just re-do it (right after the 8 mile line). Your voice is much better than Cryptick, but yeah it does have that touch of hispanic in it, not that its bad.

Another thing, I dont know if you read that off paper or memorized it, but try to memorize your verses cuz its easier to spit it with emotion that way or just focus on bringing a bit more energy. Try doubling and ad-libbing a bit on your songs, see if you like how it comes out, it can make it better. But keep it up man, Your good.

Thats all i got off the top of my head, I hated when people wouldn't give me thorough responses for my songs so I felt like i should go into detail.
September 2, 2007 @ 02:40 PM
RUBYRHODSOHIP

Post: 1771

Join Date: Dec 2006

Location: MD/DC area

LOL...It was OK kinda slow and dull for me, was your man in the beginning with the 1st verse white?
He dropped the N-word "many of times" and he seems like he is HEAVILY influenced by Tupac.
September 2, 2007 @ 03:19 PM
Orpami

Post: 1611

Join Date: Nov 2006

Location: Miami, Fl

Not bad hommie, just keep recording you'll only get better if you keep at it.

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