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September 8, 2012 @ 05:07 AM

Ryan, The Ripper

Post: 72

Join Date: Aug 2012

Location: Chicago,Illinois

My "friend' literally cries when i tell him he can't rap on one of my song. Me and my friend doesn't like his verse to this song. He has second. I have the last and my friend that can rap has second
http://www.soundcloud.com/firstxclass/outer

I made the beat

http://twitter.com/firstclasskid

September 8, 2012 @ 12:17 PM

snoopdoug

Post: 466

Join Date: Jul 2012

Location: beep.

1. the extra percs in the beat are pretty cool

2. its john gacy, not gracy

3. its your song, you decide if you want him in it or not

4. in all honesty, you guys could all use help with delivery, which comes with recording practice. even rappers with the most mediocre bars can spit em nicely cause of their delivery. so if you guys all practice together, who knows, you might end up making good music in the future without you having to put him off. you may have 'better bars' than him, but the beat sounds like it overpowered all of you guys so, vocally (not lyrically), neither of you three sounded better than the other really

beep.

September 8, 2012 @ 03:10 PM

Ryan, The Ripper

Post: 72

Join Date: Aug 2012

Location: Chicago,Illinois

1. the extra percs in the beat are pretty cool

2. its john gacy, not gracy

3. its your song, you decide if you want him in it or not

4. in all honesty, you guys could all use help with delivery, which comes with recording practice. even rappers with the most mediocre bars can spit em nicely cause of their delivery. so if you guys all practice together, who knows, you might end up making good music in the future without you having to put him off. you may have 'better bars' than him, but the beat sounds like it overpowered all of you guys so, vocally (not lyrically), neither of you three sounded better than the other really

Yo thanks for that and about john gacy when i put it in my phone it changed to gracy

http://twitter.com/firstclasskid

September 9, 2012 @ 04:09 AM