aspiring artist *feedback* thread (contribute thought then share work)

August 16, 2012 @ 02:27 AM

philli' phil'

Post: 114

Join Date: Apr 2010

Location: out chea

the "ASPIRING ARTISTS THREAD POST YOUR MUSIC HERE (and nowhere else)" thread is a mess...

* DO NOT post your (or your friends) work here unless you can add constructive criticism to a previous users post... leavin' positive & negative feedback on others work is fine too

help each other out y'all...

August 16, 2012 @ 07:28 PM

snoopdoug

Post: 466

Join Date: Jul 2012

Location: beep.

^this guy had a great idea.

My boys Ghost Row just dropped their tape today, for anyone whos heard their music on the other thread, Page. 26. This is so ill, check it out.

http://ghostrow.bandcamp.com/

free downloads N'Im sayinn

beep.

August 16, 2012 @ 08:22 PM

Ishyaboi™

Post: 695

Join Date: Aug 2012

Location: babylon

Ill be pulling out a full LP soon.

diamonds are forever.

August 16, 2012 @ 08:47 PM

Noah Caine

Post: 211

Join Date: Feb 2010

Location: Southside, Jamaica Q...

Ill be pulling out a full LP soon.

Dope, production sounds like it could be used for scores given the added vocals over it.

Here's my contribution:

Your Mother.

August 16, 2012 @ 10:16 PM

Allah

Post: 78

Join Date: Mar 2012

ayyyeeee whatup HB dropped a new beat this week lemme know if yall messing w. it... lotta yall got ill shit im just too lazy to quote niggas...yall know who you are..

SOUNDCLOUD LINK

if anything i fucks w/ this... here's my contribution

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August 18, 2012 @ 12:30 AM

Ishyaboi™

Post: 695

Join Date: Aug 2012

Location: babylon

Ill be pulling out a full LP soon.

Dope, production sounds like it could be used for scores given the added vocals over it.

Here's my contribution:

Yeah I was going for a score type style for the second one, not with the second one... thats just a beat.

diamonds are forever.

August 18, 2012 @ 02:31 AM

kkasaye

Post: 60

Join Date: Mar 2012

Location: your auntie\'s sailb...

that distant track is awesome dude. congrats

B|

August 20, 2012 @ 06:52 PM

philli' phil'

Post: 114

Join Date: Apr 2010

Location: out chea

^this guy had a great idea.

My boys Ghost Row just dropped their tape today, for anyone whos heard their music on the other thread, Page. 26. This is so ill, check it out.

http://ghostrow.bandcamp.com/

free downloads N'Im sayinn

does the featured dude eric zolan contribute acoustic guitar while you boy is rapping? if so, are the lyrics recited over a prerecorded track or is it all done in one take? the joints "glass film" & "arbok" sound right to me

August 20, 2012 @ 09:33 PM

Benny Lasco

Post: 75

Join Date: Mar 2011

http://twitter.com/bennylasco
http://soundcloud.com/bennylasco
http://bennylasco.tumblr.com/

August 20, 2012 @ 11:51 PM

snoopdoug

Post: 466

Join Date: Jul 2012

Location: beep.

does the featured dude eric zolan contribute acoustic guitar while you boy is rapping? if so, are the lyrics recited over a prerecorded track or is it all done in one take? the joints "glass film" & "arbok" sound right to me

glad you caught that. yea, EZ is a guitarist. and no it was recorded along with the rest of the song. each track being done separate

Colorplus is the producer
and Chefren is the rapper

beep.

August 20, 2012 @ 11:56 PM

DarianaGrande

Post: 3712

Join Date: Jan 2009

Location: Los Angeles

http://twitter.com/bennylasco
http://soundcloud.com/bennylasco
http://bennylasco.tumblr.com/

I like the first link
Check out my Soundcloud and tell me what you think
http://soundcloud.com/anonymousnigger

http://soundcloud.com/anonymousnigger

August 21, 2012 @ 01:08 AM

Lucy and The Daze

Post: 71

Join Date: Feb 2012

Location: whoreland, USA

@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ireally fuck with ur use of kanye dialogue.

soundcloud.com/lucyandthedaze

August 21, 2012 @ 01:13 AM

DOUGDoesMusic

Post: 39

Join Date: Sep 2011

Location: Los Angeles

Produced and Performed by me.

August 21, 2012 @ 02:05 AM

Ishyaboi™

Post: 695

Join Date: Aug 2012

Location: babylon

@lucyandthedaze thank you mosucka. i've been thinking about making instrumental mixtapes and the just putting interviews and dialogue to it. release that shit for free.

diamonds are forever.

August 28, 2012 @ 11:25 PM

philli' phil'

Post: 114

Join Date: Apr 2010

Location: out chea

almost off to a good start... keep the opinions & work comin' hb

August 29, 2012 @ 01:20 AM

leazure

Post: 33

Join Date: Nov 2011

Location: Canada

Produced and Performed by me.

IM DIGGING THOSE DRUMS MUH FUCKAAAAA
YUNG TALIB KWALI
CATCH THESE BEATS

August 29, 2012 @ 03:45 AM

abyss

Post: 59

Join Date: May 2012

Alot of great ideas here. Good sampling work.

If you guys dig trap, check out my new track. Its trap with a twist... I come from an electronic music background.

http://soundcloud.com/byens-o/trapper-keeper

August 29, 2012 @ 06:54 AM

kaayo

Post: 86

Join Date: Jun 2012

mannnn i had the idea of startin a new thread for aspiring artists at the beginning of summer than some senior hypebeast member douche said i was spamming the forums lol.. but yeah nobody listens to shit on that other one anyway but i have a feeling this one is gonna end up like the other one soon enough

August 29, 2012 @ 06:59 AM

kaayo

Post: 86

Join Date: Jun 2012

@leazure like that north camp beat. it has an oldschool kind of sound but still fits with the sound of today..i could hear a 90's group like pharcyde on that beat or a today artist like oddisee on it..you leasing beats?

August 29, 2012 @ 12:52 PM

philli' phil'

Post: 114

Join Date: Apr 2010

Location: out chea

mannnn i had the idea of startin a new thread for aspiring artists at the beginning of summer than some senior hypebeast member douche said i was spamming the forums lol.. but yeah nobody listens to shit on that other one anyway but i have a feeling this one is gonna end up like the other one soon enough

damn cousin, you can miss me w/ all that pessimism

August 29, 2012 @ 01:32 PM

chocopacaso

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http://soundcloud.com/chxcxlatepaca-o

August 29, 2012 @ 01:33 PM

chocopacaso

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August 29, 2012 @ 01:45 PM

chocopacaso

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dope track @ noah cain

August 29, 2012 @ 02:27 PM

leazure

Post: 33

Join Date: Nov 2011

Location: Canada

@kaayo thanks man, and yeah i lease beats. if you're interested hit me at campnorthdawg@gmail.com

August 29, 2012 @ 08:33 PM

kaayo

Post: 86

Join Date: Jun 2012

mannnn i had the idea of startin a new thread for aspiring artists at the beginning of summer than some senior hypebeast member douche said i was spamming the forums lol.. but yeah nobody listens to shit on that other one anyway but i have a feeling this one is gonna end up like the other one soon enough

damn cousin, you can miss me w/ all that pessimism

.. your missed...

August 29, 2012 @ 08:34 PM

kaayo

Post: 86

Join Date: Jun 2012

@kaayo thanks man, and yeah i lease beats. if you're interested hit me at campnorthdawg@gmail.com

cool thanks man

August 30, 2012 @ 12:04 AM

robotjns

Post: 31

Join Date: Mar 2012

Location: Atlanta

as a listener, one thing i hate is a good concept but bad executiion and im hearing a lot of that on here. more time could be spent polishing up beats and lyrics. it could be from better instrumentation to better word choice. so far only noah caine has both a good concept and a good execution. just my opinion.

August 30, 2012 @ 12:19 AM

thiskidfromWA

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Location: tacoma

August 30, 2012 @ 12:36 AM

DarianaGrande

Post: 3712

Join Date: Jan 2009

Location: Los Angeles

as a listener, one thing i hate is a good concept but bad executiion and im hearing a lot of that on here. more time could be spent polishing up beats and lyrics. it could be from better instrumentation to better word choice. so far only noah caine has both a good concept and a good execution. just my opinion.

How bout mine? just curious

http://soundcloud.com/anonymousnigger

August 30, 2012 @ 01:03 AM

Djarum

Post: 328

Join Date: Sep 2010

Location: Dirty Souf

so many people are already posting stuff without leaving feedback for other people... wow