1st song pretty much a snippet, please give me constructive criticism, also feel free to be harsh I'm just trying to get better.
Tips on rhymes, editing, anything you got.
Beat: ILLA J - DFTF
Sample : Downtown 81
Recorded off my laptop's internal mic.
I wasn't sure what I was gonna get but it's pretty cool. the vocal quality is fucking with the overall sound for me so I can't give a solid critique on the flow but it sounds smooth. I really want to hear a proper recording from you though, it's got a dope feel.
Thank you man, but yeah I have nothing else to record with lol but I'm saving up for a nice ass mic that I should be able to purchase in a couple weeks.
Originally posted by Inactive Userno offense but most of you guys suck and im better than all of you
heres a songand a freeverse of proof
if you know anything about lyricism you can see that im nice as fuck
plus i make my own beats and t shirts
heres my EP http://www.mediafire.com/?1d30cibvgw82k35
i dont care if it isnt super studio quality im the best dude with a mic on this forum and im not a rapper
good luck to all you niggers tho
all my shit
You sound EXACTLY like Perrion, like god damn.