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April 15, 2012 @ 22:29:45


Broken ankle - Lewis Clark

Just fucking around. Wont be quitting my day job anytime soon.
April 15, 2012 @ 22:51:15
1st song pretty much a snippet, please give me constructive criticism, also feel free to be harsh I'm just trying to get better.
Tips on rhymes, editing, anything you got.



Beat: ILLA J - DFTF
Sample : Downtown 81
Recorded off my laptop's internal mic.


I wasn't sure what I was gonna get but it's pretty cool. the vocal quality is fucking with the overall sound for me so I can't give a solid critique on the flow but it sounds smooth. I really want to hear a proper recording from you though, it's got a dope feel.


Thank you man, but yeah I have nothing else to record with lol but I'm saving up for a nice ass mic that I should be able to purchase in a couple weeks.

Originally posted by Inactive User
no offense but most of you guys suck and im better than all of you
heres a songand a freeverse of proof
http://soundcloud.com/fred-j-riley/the-ripping-friends
http://soundcloud.com/fred-j-riley/lucky-charms
if you know anything about lyricism you can see that im nice as fuck
plus i make my own beats and t shirts
heres my EP http://www.mediafire.com/?1d30cibvgw82k35
i dont care if it isnt super studio quality im the best dude with a mic on this forum and im not a rapper
good luck to all you niggers tho

all my shit


You sound EXACTLY like Perrion, like god damn.
April 15, 2012 @ 23:17:15


Wrote a quick rap to tunnelno5's beat.
April 16, 2012 @ 00:26:30
1st song pretty much a snippet, please give me constructive criticism, also feel free to be harsh I'm just trying to get better.
Tips on rhymes, editing, anything you got.



Beat: ILLA J - DFTF
Sample : Downtown 81
Recorded off my laptop's internal mic.


I wasn't sure what I was gonna get but it's pretty cool. the vocal quality is fucking with the overall sound for me so I can't give a solid critique on the flow but it sounds smooth. I really want to hear a proper recording from you though, it's got a dope feel.


Thank you man, but yeah I have nothing else to record with lol but I'm saving up for a nice ass mic that I should be able to purchase in a couple weeks.

Originally posted by Inactive User
no offense but most of you guys suck and im better than all of you
heres a songand a freeverse of proof
http://soundcloud.com/fred-j-riley/the-ripping-friends
http://soundcloud.com/fred-j-riley/lucky-charms
if you know anything about lyricism you can see that im nice as fuck
plus i make my own beats and t shirts
heres my EP http://www.mediafire.com/?1d30cibvgw82k35
i dont care if it isnt super studio quality im the best dude with a mic on this forum and im not a rapper
good luck to all you niggers tho

all my shit


You sound EXACTLY like Perrion, like god damn.


who the fuck is a Perrion?

EDIT: i just heard his shit what the fuck are you talking about? i sound nothing like him and im way better than him haha you must be high
April 16, 2012 @ 01:01:18
We just gotta try to sound unique, instead of just putting words together over beats. In this sea of millions of wannabe rappers, most of them are just rhyming over beats, nothing else.
April 16, 2012 @ 03:35:31
We just gotta try to sound unique, instead of just putting words together over beats. In this sea of millions of wannabe rappers, most of them are just rhyming over beats, nothing else.


I try to make music for myself instead of others, if that has anything to do with what you're saying. It seems like a lot of people make music to try to appeal to others and it seems so wrong. I was raised up to enjoy music as an outlet..

EDIT: On that note, can anyone give me criticism on the song i just posted?
April 16, 2012 @ 06:25:49
Atlas is a buddy of mine. Here's my nigga EP "Atlas is the Getaway Driver"check him out http://www.mediafire.com/?irbdbcdo0ba3rkl

April 16, 2012 @ 13:05:30
http://youtu.be/9E2p2lDl81E
Hope you like it. English is my second language.
More information in the video's description and all over the Internet.
April 17, 2012 @ 05:08:33
Originally posted by Inactive User
if you know anything about lyricism you can see that im nice as fuck

i dont care if it isnt super studio quality im the best dude with a mic on this forum and im not a rapper
good luck to all you niggers tho


If you know anything about music you can HEAR it's not only one element that attracts us to an artist or song. It's a medley of sounds combined to peak an emotion felt when the music is played. I know you're being kinda sarcastic from what I'm picking up, but obviously text doesn't convey emotion so I can't tell. But you're not the best with a mic on this forum, and porbably not even the thread.
With that said. Once I get a set up let's collab, and skate fool!
April 17, 2012 @ 09:51:13
haha nah i only meant lyrically i didnt mean actually liking my music thats 2 different things shit J Cole was good as fuck but i didnt buy the niggas album, yes i was being an asshole about it everyone in this thread obviously doesnt suck but i really am that tight watch when i drop new shit but thanks yo
April 18, 2012 @ 05:27:02
Got a new remixtape dropping 4/20.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=3cu3vHMJAXQ

Peep game. Download it on 4/20. Spread the word. Enjoy.
April 18, 2012 @ 14:47:22
very pleased that this thread is surviving and thanks to everyone who actually takes the time to listen to others people shit instead of just posting their own

facebook.com/lazyjp LazyJP.tumblr.com @LazyJP1 soundcloud.com/lazyjp

April 18, 2012 @ 19:53:19
April 18, 2012 @ 20:10:45
Check out my beats www.soundcloud.com/kearnjus.com
April 18, 2012 @ 22:43:29
filthypaw that beat was tight in a high on acid sort of way and i decided to rap on that xxl cypher beat because they all sucked on it so here judge me like a bitch
April 18, 2012 @ 22:54:21
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April 19, 2012 @ 01:54:23



http://www.mediafire.com/?79ky0vd280m0vem

or check out some tracks via Soundcloud

http://soundcloud.com/jsynystr
April 19, 2012 @ 15:30:25
bit of a switch up, no rap in this post. didn't know if it belonged here but the title said nowhere else!

I play in two bands:

Pilot:X - prog/post-rock kinda stuff. check out some tracks at http://soundcloud.com/pilotxmusic. we got stuff on itunes/spotify aswell if you wanna peep that.

and

As Gods - more prog but leaning towards the metal side. getting some hype from a lot of people atm so hopefully 2012 is a good year for us. link will take you to the soundcloud, coupla tracks up there.

facebook.com/asgods facebook.com/pilotxmusic

April 19, 2012 @ 23:43:27
http://soundcloud.com/blakkkmanjones/1992-1

http://soundcloud.com/blakkkmanjones/da-euphoric
April 20, 2012 @ 00:16:21

Al Gramz is a homie of mine, check him out
April 20, 2012 @ 00:17:24
http://soundcloud.com/blakkkmanjones/under-the-shade

http://soundcloud.com/blakkkmanjones/l-o-c-2
April 20, 2012 @ 01:45:59
hey izuna been peeping your soundcloud shit is tight mane

washpahpin.com

April 20, 2012 @ 02:09:45
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qm_7Vv7c5n0&feature=youtu.be
April 20, 2012 @ 08:06:11
dblpst
April 21, 2012 @ 23:40:38


Tell me what ya think. Feedback is encouraged, positive or negative. Follow @hillwill6113pdb & hillwill6113pdb
April 21, 2012 @ 23:55:59
A remix I did of Zoras Domain from Ocarina of Time http://soundcloud.com/gold-silver/zora
April 22, 2012 @ 00:15:44
Listen To My Rap Group Kwad
Youtube " Kwadli
Bandcamp " Kwadkidswithadream.com
Twitter.com @K_W_A_D Or @MarixSweat

Yeah We Workin On A Mixtape n Shit . Any feedback would be cool .
April 22, 2012 @ 01:55:57
this verse is like OD good imo
http://soundcloud.com/fred-j-riley/scyther
April 22, 2012 @ 15:38:17
Man, I just got some semi-good news about this song. I'm excited & I'll keep you guys updated.

All me(Vocals&Beat)
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