Broken ankle - Lewis Clark
Just fucking around. Wont be quitting my day job anytime soon.
1st song pretty much a snippet, please give me constructive criticism, also feel free to be harsh I'm just trying to get better.
Tips on rhymes, editing, anything you got.
Beat: ILLA J - DFTF
Sample : Downtown 81
Recorded off my laptop's internal mic.
I wasn't sure what I was gonna get but it's pretty cool. the vocal quality is fucking with the overall sound for me so I can't give a solid critique on the flow but it sounds smooth. I really want to hear a proper recording from you though, it's got a dope feel.
no offense but most of you guys suck and im better than all of you
heres a songand a freeverse of proof
http://soundcloud.com/fred-j-riley/the-ripping-friends
http://soundcloud.com/fred-j-riley/lucky-charms
if you know anything about lyricism you can see that im nice as fuck
plus i make my own beats and t shirts
heres my EP http://www.mediafire.com/?1d30cibvgw82k35
i dont care if it isnt super studio quality im the best dude with a mic on this forum and im not a rapper
good luck to all you niggers tho
all my shit
1st song pretty much a snippet, please give me constructive criticism, also feel free to be harsh I'm just trying to get better.
Tips on rhymes, editing, anything you got.
Beat: ILLA J - DFTF
Sample : Downtown 81
Recorded off my laptop's internal mic.
I wasn't sure what I was gonna get but it's pretty cool. the vocal quality is fucking with the overall sound for me so I can't give a solid critique on the flow but it sounds smooth. I really want to hear a proper recording from you though, it's got a dope feel.
Thank you man, but yeah I have nothing else to record with lol but I'm saving up for a nice ass mic that I should be able to purchase in a couple weeks.
no offense but most of you guys suck and im better than all of you
heres a songand a freeverse of proof
http://soundcloud.com/fred-j-riley/the-ripping-friends
http://soundcloud.com/fred-j-riley/lucky-charms
if you know anything about lyricism you can see that im nice as fuck
plus i make my own beats and t shirts
heres my EP http://www.mediafire.com/?1d30cibvgw82k35
i dont care if it isnt super studio quality im the best dude with a mic on this forum and im not a rapper
good luck to all you niggers tho
all my shit
You sound EXACTLY like Perrion, like god damn.
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We just gotta try to sound unique, instead of just putting words together over beats. In this sea of millions of wannabe rappers, most of them are just rhyming over beats, nothing else.
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if you know anything about lyricism you can see that im nice as fuck
i dont care if it isnt super studio quality im the best dude with a mic on this forum and im not a rapper
good luck to all you niggers tho
http://yellow-stuff.com/ nigger
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