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July 23, 2012 @ 03:55:28
I said constructive criticism. meaning tell me what i need to work on. im not one of those " im so dope if you dont like me your a hater" type of niggas. Tell me what i need to work on. im an amateur. just saying im wack wont help me.
July 23, 2012 @ 04:03:02
@ darianagrande son u good lyrics and flow r straight..maybe at some point u could try to mix it better..i have the same issue too if i record at my house. some of my stuff is not mixed and before i got a better mic my stuff sounded different.
July 23, 2012 @ 04:03:24
Personally being told I'm wack is what made me revamp everything and go way harder. Constructive criticism gives you a tint of who you're getting the criticism from. And it crutches you to wait for people to tell you what's wrong.

But for starters you definitely need to project. The muddiness,and sound quality will also get better from that.

And be more specific "reflect on how shit was good just a week ago" if you went into why it was better a week ago it'd be more compelling to listen to.

For now I'd just say to work on delivery because you could write some plain shit and have it sound crazy if the delivery's hot.

Beyond all that I'd be gettin too specific.
July 23, 2012 @ 04:09:44
Thanks kaayo. i dont even know how to mix. but ill try to figure it out.

Dots. i kinda want a more chilled, laid back flow so idk. but i know what you mean as far as connecting my raps more. like in my song "reflections" i get it. im going to keep writing and pushing. thanks.
July 23, 2012 @ 04:20:26
I understand the chill thing,but you're still rapping under your breath kinda. As if you don't want to make too much noise in the house. Plus, you need skills like projecting under your belt, just cus it aint your style or your thing don't mean you shouldn't perfect it anyway.
July 23, 2012 @ 04:25:08
yea you right. im at the crib tryin not to be too loud. lol. and i get it. maybe project certain words different to have a better delivery hows the flow/lyrics tho?
July 23, 2012 @ 08:34:05
PHRED DIAMOND [HiLL WiLL]- Power of the P [prod. Chuck Inglish]



Tell me what ya think. Feedback is encouraged, positive or negative.Follow @hillwill6113pdb & @phredDIAMOND
July 23, 2012 @ 12:49:21
CHECK THIS http://hypebeast.com/forums/music/176690/
July 23, 2012 @ 16:31:05
yea you right. im at the crib tryin not to be too loud. lol. and i get it. maybe project certain words different to have a better delivery hows the flow/lyrics tho?

Lyrics were iigh,but you weren't really saying anything.
July 23, 2012 @ 18:45:26
^^i disagree i think he covered multiple topics on a short song..

phreddiamond i thought the hook on your song was well done.
July 24, 2012 @ 00:37:39
Well i wont be making music anymore. at least not anytime soon. i just lost my fucking job.smh
July 24, 2012 @ 02:00:17
a friend of mine's first video

do u view me? do u see my maneuvers?

July 24, 2012 @ 02:03:18
1 thing fa sho 2 hoes how we roll smokeyface
July 24, 2012 @ 02:08:23
@phreddiamond I'm digging the song bro. You tell a story with substance while maintaning just enough punchlines to spice it up. Pretty cool in my opinion.
July 24, 2012 @ 03:27:46
Check our first video. Everybody Sucks But Us
July 24, 2012 @ 03:38:16
^^i actually like this joint..video is pretty interesting as well.
July 24, 2012 @ 05:51:53
Gentlemen....some live rock...just some samples of the songs played...

July 24, 2012 @ 06:15:54
Gentlemen....some live rock...just some samples of the songs played...



doesnt seem like alot of rock gets posted on here..good look..how long have yall been performing?
July 24, 2012 @ 14:04:58


Heres a lil visual for the first single from The Buddy Chronicles "Take Notes"...
July 24, 2012 @ 17:09:49
@phreddiamond
I thought I wasn't going to like it just judging by the thumbnail but its nice lol

@buddybud
I fux with it
July 24, 2012 @ 20:46:49
@buddybud

nice! got an early 90's feel
July 24, 2012 @ 21:08:50
@Kaayo
Originally posted by Inactive User
doesnt seem like alot of rock gets posted on here..good look..how long have yall been performing


You are right ,not much rock around here...should be more..

And this band had been playing since highschool...wich is a long time ago...still dedicated to their music....because they love to play and write songs...

Do you reckon you will still be writing and producing songs say,in about 20 years from now?blushing
July 25, 2012 @ 00:21:31
^^i actually like this joint..video is pretty interesting as well.


Thanks dude, much appreciated!
July 25, 2012 @ 01:52:45
@Kaayo
Originally posted by Inactive User
doesnt seem like alot of rock gets posted on here..good look..how long have yall been performing


You are right ,not much rock around here...should be more..

And this band had been playing since highschool...wich is a long time ago...still dedicated to their music....because they love to play and write songs...

Do you reckon you will still be writing and producing songs say,in about 20 years from now?blushing

wow thats dedication.. i hope to be still writing 20yr from now.i want to learn more about producing as well.
July 25, 2012 @ 02:35:58
Just dropped a new set of beats for fun y'all:

http://soundcloud.com/blakkkmanjones/sets/tc-vol-1
July 25, 2012 @ 06:29:01
okay figured i post another one. me and my boy Kray off our fallenkingstape rapping over eminens ft lil wayne No Love beat..see what ya think smokeyface

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z5BbaU3r2Wo
July 26, 2012 @ 18:08:14
Kray def. has the presence of a leader.

Here's another song I'm working on.
http://soundcloud.com/anonymousnigger/anonymous-narcissism-snippet
July 26, 2012 @ 21:57:56
New Donny Murakami

http://soundcloud.com/donnymurakami/rolex-prod-by-blakkk?utm_source=soundcloud&utm_campaign=share&utm_medium=twitter&utm_content=http://soundcloud.com/donnymurakami/rolex-prod-by-blakkk
July 27, 2012 @ 02:31:27
Brett Tyler - Think Fast
http://soundcloud.com/brett-tyler/brett-tyler-think-fast
July 27, 2012 @ 04:23:14
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JeZwRUNfKM4
Quick lil rap over a Mr Boss beat
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