I did a write up on the NIggas In Paris Encore controversy check it out HB fam

December 21, 2011 @ 03:09 AM
H. Drew

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Join Date: Jul 2007

Location: Denton, Tx

Check it out please. And the site itself. It's in it's infantile stages right now though.

http://theurbanerenaissance.tumblr.com/post/14540308824/in-defense-of-the-infamous-encores

http://theurbanerenaissance.com/ http://theurbanerenaissance.tumblr.com/

December 21, 2011 @ 03:15 AM
ksj

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Join Date: Sep 2009

To be honest.

Sentences are awkwardly formed, mainly caused by poor choice of adjectives. You need to expand on your thoughts, it is superficially undeveloped.
December 21, 2011 @ 03:22 AM
im_shy

Post: 281

Join Date: Sep 2009

Location: the mushroom kingdom

lol are you trollin^. i didnt think it was an amazing post, but it aint even close to bad either.
December 21, 2011 @ 03:39 AM
H. Drew

Post: 719

Join Date: Jul 2007

Location: Denton, Tx

Thanks for the input. Admittedly, I felt I could have edited it better. I have a problem with comma splices. That's probably never going to change at this point though.

I also know I could have expanded more, but I feel like the stage I have set now benefits from brevity.

http://theurbanerenaissance.com/ http://theurbanerenaissance.tumblr.com/

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