How To Rap

December 18, 2011 @ 01:24 AM
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December 18, 2011 @ 01:42 AM
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How to dougie too?

Don't badmind me.

February 17, 2012 @ 02:29 AM
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wow did you even watch the video or does the fact that i dance take a way my talent, get a life
February 17, 2012 @ 01:36 PM
JohnvHarrison

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Actually, it does take it away. Name one good rapper that snap dances, jerks, or dougies. Besides that, if you CAN rap, the fact that you dougie means you're a fucking tool.

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February 17, 2012 @ 03:05 PM
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Childish gambino's a comedian, drake played on Degrassi, Chris browns a pretty good rapper imo, and as far as naming one good rapper who jerks or dougies, watch my video
February 17, 2012 @ 07:03 PM
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ghay btw why are you green

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February 17, 2012 @ 07:11 PM
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This wasn't that bad, your raps aren't trash, but the video was weird and you look hella nervous and amateur. Next video just go harder
February 17, 2012 @ 07:22 PM
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uhhhh

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February 17, 2012 @ 09:01 PM
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This wasn't that bad, your raps aren't trash, but the video was weird and you look hella nervous and amateur. Next video just go harder

Ok, i appreciate the almost complement but amateur? that's a little harsh considering the fact that its a 5 minute long song that goes through 10 aspects of hip-hop, with a beat i produced myself. Im not hard, not every rapper is, but I'm good and if you don't think so I'd expect a better reason than that I look nervous
February 17, 2012 @ 09:43 PM
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The fact that you believe you need "10 aspects of hip-hop" to rap tells me you cant rap. you're obviously VERY new to this.

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February 17, 2012 @ 10:25 PM
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i said amateur because the way you keep rapping to the ground, if you gonna have a camera on you why look away at the ground while standing still, imo you could of orchestrated a better visual expierence... and i didnt say you werent good, everyones got talent kid, just gotta work on it, try checking out other music videos my g..im just be honest, rest of niggs in her could care less
February 17, 2012 @ 10:47 PM
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Childish gambino's a comedian, drake played on Degrassi, Chris browns a pretty good rapper imo, and as far as naming one good rapper who jerks or dougies, watch my video


Lol, implying Drake, Childish Gambino, and Chris Brown are good rappers.

February 18, 2012 @ 04:08 AM
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lol ok you got me, 85 bars in one take, had to look down a couple times =], thanx for the feedback real talk tho
February 18, 2012 @ 01:12 PM
@abgohard1

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yeah nigga i liked yah verse man keep spittin and expiermenting
February 18, 2012 @ 01:32 PM
JohnvHarrison

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Childish gambino's a comedian, drake played on Degrassi, Chris browns a pretty good rapper imo, and as far as naming one good rapper who jerks or dougies, watch my video


Lol, implying Drake, Childish Gambino, and Chris Brown are good rappers.



Dead

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February 18, 2012 @ 06:12 PM
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The fact that you believe you need "10 aspects of hip-hop" to rap tells me you cant rap. you're obviously VERY new to this.
I don't NEED 10 aspects of hip hop. The video is called "how to rap", i explain how to do it in 10 parts for people who might need it.
February 18, 2012 @ 07:32 PM
bzy2012

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this shit is cool homie, to be honest i dont think id stay on topic long enough to wanna do one of these, so kudos to that, and u have some hidden gems in there, fuck what a hater got to say
February 18, 2012 @ 08:05 PM
KianS

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You're confident in your lines I give you that, but not many, including myself will get into your monotone voice.
February 19, 2012 @ 12:56 AM
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this shit is cool homie, to be honest i dont think id stay on topic long enough to wanna do one of these, so kudos to that, and u have some hidden gems in there, fuck what a hater got to say
You're confident in your lines I give you that, but not many, including myself will get into your monotone voice.


Thanx & ill work on the monotone thing, Ive been rapping for 9 years and never been told that lol do you mean my delivery or just my voice in general tho?
February 19, 2012 @ 01:13 AM
damnwitless2

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smh this is terrible

All I do is smoke weed, blow lines, and listen to MF DOOM. And rap. http://www.facebook.com/SpacemanNYC

February 19, 2012 @ 01:27 AM
I.Run.Bad

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first skit is really really lame skip to 1:30, the song is really good.
February 19, 2012 @ 01:47 AM
damnwitless2

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damn thats mad real cool

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February 19, 2012 @ 01:37 PM
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smh this is terrible
lol trollin
February 19, 2012 @ 01:45 PM
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del wrote the book on it
February 19, 2012 @ 02:44 PM
damnwitless2

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smh this is terrible
lol trollin


na du

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February 19, 2012 @ 03:42 PM
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If your verse does not containg "yo", you're most likely a pop singer like lupe fiasco.

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February 19, 2012 @ 06:37 PM
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February 20, 2012 @ 10:19 PM
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If your verse does not containg "yo", you're most likely a pop singer like lupe fiasco.
ok, note to self, say "yo" in EVERY verse... lmao
February 20, 2012 @ 11:35 PM
HandsOfZeus

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I would recommend you work on your production as the biggest thing. I just wasnt really feeling it. Maybe invest in some better sounds or at least search the web for some decent free ones. Also your delivery just doesnt do it for me, its off beat, and you are extremely long winded. I've heard rappers that are worse that doesn't mean you are good either, its a hit or miss, but those first couple of bars damn near made me turn the whole thing off. I'm not hating just being honest, because it seems whenever someone says something you get defensive. Also get a thicker skin, this music shit aint easy.
February 21, 2012 @ 12:48 AM
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size down on clothes.

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