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August 16, 2011 @ 11:31 AM
LazyJP412

Post: 189

Join Date: Jun 2011

Location: Pittsburgh, PA

I know the quality isnt too good but you have to admire the penmanship. 2nd verse is mine please give any kind of feedback and constructive criticism you can. Thank you.

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August 16, 2011 @ 03:01 PM
bonemarrow

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Location: eastcoast

no.

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August 16, 2011 @ 06:44 PM
LazyJP412

Post: 189

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Location: Pittsburgh, PA

Fair enough hahah

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August 16, 2011 @ 07:21 PM
KevBd

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Location: Guelph, Ontario

no.


i lol'd.

two of em x hs shit

August 16, 2011 @ 07:44 PM
LazyJP412

Post: 189

Join Date: Jun 2011

Location: Pittsburgh, PA

i lol'd.


I did too. I ain't even mad haha

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August 16, 2011 @ 08:03 PM
Izuna

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The first guy was ehhh. Your verse dope.

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August 16, 2011 @ 08:14 PM
LazyJP412

Post: 189

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Location: Pittsburgh, PA

The first guy was ehhh. Your verse dope.


Thank you means a lot. I just think I need to tweak my delivery a bit. Still at an experimental stage

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August 16, 2011 @ 08:17 PM
Izuna

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yeah, I'm the same way. lately I've been just accepting my flaws as my signature. my delivery changes on some ADHD shit when writing lol

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August 16, 2011 @ 08:44 PM
LazyJP412

Post: 189

Join Date: Jun 2011

Location: Pittsburgh, PA

yeah, I'm the same way. lately I've been just accepting my flaws as my signature. my delivery changes on some ADHD shit when writing lol


Yeah me too. I have very eclectic taste in music so the music I make is often the same way. Im a good writer tho just gotta put the rest together

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August 16, 2011 @ 08:51 PM
Izuna

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Yeah, having a skill for writing is good especially if you can keep the ideas flowing. I usually write random shit and get writers block only to be hit with a flood of inspiration and rhymes days and weeks later.

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August 16, 2011 @ 11:28 PM
SUBMiTMusic

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hard to get past the quality..
August 16, 2011 @ 11:30 PM
SUBMiTMusic

Post: 122

Join Date: May 2011

not tryna clown either. I'd say look for a semi-legit place to record. I rap and I run a studio so since I'm an artist, I know how much it sucks to pay for studio time so I usually only charge when the artist sucks. If there's potential in the track, I cut them a deal or let them record on me.
August 16, 2011 @ 11:30 PM
CrackPipeLips

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August 16, 2011 @ 11:37 PM
WCDon

Post: 1180

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Location: Bay Area

first dude sucks dick. I enjoyed your verse

THIS CANDYLAND NIGGA

August 17, 2011 @ 12:35 AM
eholt3p

Post: 456

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Location: ATLville.

i think if yall were in an actually studio to have this recorded it may have came out dope af. wasn't as bad as everybody was making it out to be. i think what yall did for the hook was dope, oooh no hahaha. who started with the tyler verse hahaha smh smh. i was still listening and typing but it's cool man
August 17, 2011 @ 02:37 AM
LazyJP412

Post: 189

Join Date: Jun 2011

Location: Pittsburgh, PA

I do have access to a studio. A couple diff ones actually. Just did this one at my home set up and fucked up the mixing a bit haha. The only reason I posted this one and not a diff one is the the response locally was pretty decent. That was me on the 3rd verse with the tyler start. I wanted to do a a diff spin on it whilst paying tribute. Yeah I didnt need to know that the quality sucks cause I said that on the original post. I just wanted some feedback on my verse cause Im trying to get better just want to know what me weaknesses are. Thank you all for your responses

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August 17, 2011 @ 03:08 AM
LazyJP412

Post: 189

Join Date: Jun 2011

Location: Pittsburgh, PA

not tryna clown either. I'd say look for a semi-legit place to record. I rap and I run a studio so since I'm an artist, I know how much it sucks to pay for studio time so I usually only charge when the artist sucks. If there's potential in the track, I cut them a deal or let them record on me.


No joke, but a guy who runs a local label and studio around where i live just hmu the other day about giving me real cheap time and is considering signing me to the label. Idk about a label but ill take the cheap stu time. I do some shit another studio but i have to pay a bit more hence why i also record shit on the side at my house set up

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