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August 16, 2011 @ 11:31:40 AM
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I know the quality isnt too good but you have to admire the penmanship. 2nd verse is mine please give any kind of feedback and constructive criticism you can. Thank you.

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August 16, 2011 @ 15:01:02 PM
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no.
August 16, 2011 @ 18:44:22 PM
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Fair enough hahah

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August 16, 2011 @ 19:21:49 PM
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Location: Guelph, Ontario

two of em x hs shit

August 16, 2011 @ 19:44:14 PM
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Location: Pittsburgh, PA
i lol'd.


I did too. I ain't even mad haha

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August 16, 2011 @ 20:03:16 PM
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The first guy was ehhh. Your verse dope.
August 16, 2011 @ 20:14:59 PM
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Location: Pittsburgh, PA
The first guy was ehhh. Your verse dope.


Thank you means a lot. I just think I need to tweak my delivery a bit. Still at an experimental stage

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August 16, 2011 @ 20:17:31 PM
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yeah, I'm the same way. lately I've been just accepting my flaws as my signature. my delivery changes on some ADHD shit when writing lol
August 16, 2011 @ 20:44:08 PM
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Location: Pittsburgh, PA
yeah, I'm the same way. lately I've been just accepting my flaws as my signature. my delivery changes on some ADHD shit when writing lol


Yeah me too. I have very eclectic taste in music so the music I make is often the same way. Im a good writer tho just gotta put the rest together

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August 16, 2011 @ 20:51:38 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2011
Location: Konohagakure
Yeah, having a skill for writing is good especially if you can keep the ideas flowing. I usually write random shit and get writers block only to be hit with a flood of inspiration and rhymes days and weeks later.
August 16, 2011 @ 23:28:06 PM
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hard to get past the quality..
August 16, 2011 @ 23:30:04 PM
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Join Date: May 2011
not tryna clown either. I'd say look for a semi-legit place to record. I rap and I run a studio so since I'm an artist, I know how much it sucks to pay for studio time so I usually only charge when the artist sucks. If there's potential in the track, I cut them a deal or let them record on me.
August 16, 2011 @ 23:30:35 PM
August 16, 2011 @ 23:37:24 PM
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Location: Bay Area
first dude sucks dick. I enjoyed your verse

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August 17, 2011 @ 00:35:46 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: ATLville.
i think if yall were in an actually studio to have this recorded it may have came out dope af. wasn't as bad as everybody was making it out to be. i think what yall did for the hook was dope, oooh no hahaha. who started with the tyler verse hahaha smh smh. i was still listening and typing but it's cool man
August 17, 2011 @ 02:37:45 AM
Post: 176
Join Date: Jun 2011
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
I do have access to a studio. A couple diff ones actually. Just did this one at my home set up and fucked up the mixing a bit haha. The only reason I posted this one and not a diff one is the the response locally was pretty decent. That was me on the 3rd verse with the tyler start. I wanted to do a a diff spin on it whilst paying tribute. Yeah I didnt need to know that the quality sucks cause I said that on the original post. I just wanted some feedback on my verse cause Im trying to get better just want to know what me weaknesses are. Thank you all for your responses

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August 17, 2011 @ 03:08:16 AM
Post: 176
Join Date: Jun 2011
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
not tryna clown either. I'd say look for a semi-legit place to record. I rap and I run a studio so since I'm an artist, I know how much it sucks to pay for studio time so I usually only charge when the artist sucks. If there's potential in the track, I cut them a deal or let them record on me.


No joke, but a guy who runs a local label and studio around where i live just hmu the other day about giving me real cheap time and is considering signing me to the label. Idk about a label but ill take the cheap stu time. I do some shit another studio but i have to pay a bit more hence why i also record shit on the side at my house set up

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