Video to my song "Tables do turn" pg-13

July 8, 2011 @ 01:57 AM
ChicagoStyles

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Did the best i could on this one, even got me a nice looking mami for this one, it's a story telling track on getting cheated on, so let me know was good, bad or good, im down for the criticism!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=9_jd4P4xbB4

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July 8, 2011 @ 02:04 AM
bassprodailo

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ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
July 8, 2011 @ 02:05 AM
hooperr

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even got me a nice looking mami


confused
July 8, 2011 @ 02:08 AM
3 Stripes

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better
July 8, 2011 @ 02:09 AM
ChicagoStyles

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thank you, im taking all your opinions very well into consideration, and i thank yall for that

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July 8, 2011 @ 02:27 AM
KoreanJesus

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I really did not enjoy this. I'm not sure exactly what it was about it, but I thought it was bland and corny overall. Your flow is really really bad.
The car was nice though.
July 8, 2011 @ 02:29 AM
Ape

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Lmao fitted with your name on it?

Thats always a no no

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July 8, 2011 @ 02:34 AM
Ape

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Son why you gotta yawn and make a yawning sound when the lyrics say you wake up, same when you said you was angry

You don't gotta make a physical move for every punchline

You OD corny son

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July 8, 2011 @ 02:35 AM
Handsome

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Ok no more spamming your content. Take it to the Music section.
July 8, 2011 @ 02:51 AM
ChicagoStyles

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i was going according to what i was saying, didn't see anything wrong with it

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July 8, 2011 @ 09:46 AM
ChicagoStyles

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anyway..

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July 8, 2011 @ 10:11 AM
trevxv3

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its good that your open to criticism.

You really need to start working on developing an identity. Something that makes you seperate from every other dude who wants to rap. Its impossible to watch this video and not get passed the fact that there is a guido lookin guy trying to spit, idk it just doesnt work. You still dont look comfortable in front of the camera, actually the whole cast didnt look natural in front of the camera. Storied videos are harder to make, but nothing about that video was believable, not for a second. Also, if your still producing your own videos GO TO FILM SCHOOL!!!! You really need some training because it clearly doesnt come natural. Also, I would recomend filming alloootttt more tape. What I mean is that it seems like you only film the scenes you use, you dont ever cut anything (besides the extra takes for the same scene) and because of that the camera is staying in one place alot and it gets boring as fuck.

so in a nutshell:
1)Practice looking better in front of the camera (get your swagger up)
2)Go to film school or find/get a producer
3)Get an identity

SATIRE GANG OR MOW YOUR LAWN FOR FREE

July 8, 2011 @ 10:37 AM
PlugTunin

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you should have used a more convincing gun as a prop. And when your rapping about love, don't have a shirt that says love on it. comes off as corny. Still though, this video was better than your previous ones.

This new layout is a disappointment

July 8, 2011 @ 10:38 AM
Constellations

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lmfaooooooo @ the gun scene

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July 8, 2011 @ 10:45 AM
ChicagoStyles

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@Plug- actually the shirt says "Love is Lame", shoulda captured it all on cam lol

@Trev- That's probably some of the best advice i've gotten on this board, i prob should go to film school since doing videos all of a sudden interest me, i know lighting has everything to do with it, or more or less the KEY to having a good video, but i appreciate that!

>sad

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July 8, 2011 @ 11:55 AM
ᴊᴜᴀɴ

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Fall back from music/videos for a while and LEARN more shit. IF you actually cared about the art form and not just making money you would see how bad it is and make corrections.....

Fuck Trey Songs

July 8, 2011 @ 04:06 PM
ChicagoStyles

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well, ill work more on that then

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July 8, 2011 @ 04:18 PM
KidGhost

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im not gon lie, the gun made me lol.

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July 8, 2011 @ 04:30 PM
HYPELO

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how the hell you have so much time to create a full song and record stupid ass videos to go with it on the daily

wtfmah♥♥♥♥♥
July 8, 2011 @ 04:32 PM
JimmyRS

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First, who was the woman? That's extremely critical to my critique....
July 8, 2011 @ 04:50 PM
sharky

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Did the best i could on this one, even got me a nice looking mami for this one, it's a story telling track on getting cheated on, so let me know was good, bad or good, im down for the criticism!

www.youtube.com/watch?v=9_jd4P4xbB4


July 8, 2011 @ 07:17 PM
ᴊᴜᴀɴ

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^Moar of these lol

Fuck Trey Songs

July 8, 2011 @ 07:34 PM
FORTE ASHLEY OLSEN

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^Moar of these lol


This.

Lol at two t.v. remotes taped together to make a gun. This is what I said before, PRIDE in your work. "Close enough" doesn't cut it.
July 8, 2011 @ 09:05 PM
eholt3p

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i think the story in the song is dope
July 9, 2011 @ 12:10 AM
ChicagoStyles

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the girl is a good friend of mine who happens to be a model

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July 9, 2011 @ 12:13 AM
sion

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lol .. who makes songs about cheaters
July 9, 2011 @ 01:16 AM
AlwayS_DreSSeD

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lmfao at the gun

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July 9, 2011 @ 08:09 AM
Acclaimed

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Deaded.


Lol, this is hilarious. Thanks.
July 9, 2011 @ 09:40 AM
ChicagoStyles

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what do u mean "who makes a song about cheaters"?? lol Ghostface does it all the time, and actually this song was influenced by Nas's Undying love, always loved that joint!

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July 9, 2011 @ 10:27 AM
Youth In Asia

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Damn them eggs looked GOOD.

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