November 27, 2012 at 03:48:38 Nov 27, 2012 @ 03:48
Just updating the product pics, www.kingdomclothing.com
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I didn't get to check the site yet, but you into graffiti type shirts? That's the vibe I get from the pic. I'm just not into that so I don't personally like that tee.
i think your iconic logo and crest design is your best one and you should base your future designs off of that same theme. not really feelin the skull and geisha, those two seem like a different aesthetic like a tattoo type thing. and the keep it positive designs should be reworked because when i see them i think of the red cross or some medicinal shit especially when the + is over the O lookin like a bandaid. the kcc king design also doesn't really seem to fit with the other designs. the tag design is cool though, kinda neutral. overall i think as a brand you need one aesthetic that brings everything together and get your team of illustrators on the same page
Originally posted by Inactive UserI'm personally not very into the designs but I can see them working for some people. I'd change the background of the site, I think it sets a dark mood somewhat, unless that's what you're going for. What I'd definitely look to change is the font you're using for the menu bars. Also, the presentation of the images used in the slideshow could use some work, especially regarding the text in those pictures. All this is just my opinion though. Other than that you look like you have something good going for you. I wish you the best of luck.
For the market you are trying to capture I think it looks good. Keep hustling. Maybe shorten the name "Def V" may ring better.