I'll turn this over to my friend, since he's better at this than I am.
Alright, well I am a writer for an Electronic Music Blog and the owner of this account just showed me this. Um.. Here are a few tips for you as you work on your production:
1) Please, please, PLEASE DONT LABEL THINGS AS DRUM N BASS JUST CUZ THEY HAZ A DRUM AND a BASS. Cum on man. nawt kewl.
2) You should probably invest in better drums.. Over bit crushed snares, half assed sine waves, and a weird click thingy that im assuming youre using as a highhat? yh m8. fix dat ish,
3) You've nailed the whole 'sub bass' thing. It really is a sub. But, theres nothing else. It cant be JUST SUB.
4) Wtf is going on with the weird slidey things. Ever seen the slide whistle episode of spongebob? Yeah, tats you.
Alright. I hope you take these hints into consideration, and please understand that my engrish isnt dah best so kindly hop off when reading this.
No really, I would start over. Before you put something out, you need criticism.. and not the whole "OH MAI GAWD YU SO PRO!!!! I'LL DO YOU ANYTIME CUZ OF DIS M00SIC" criticism. You need to be told that you suck, before you can rise up and produce quality material
<- "You just chewed my ass out and then ended it with a smile?" Yes, I did.
Also. Next time you want to post a track that you did, at least make sure it ends up in the right section. Not everyone thinks of music as a "General Discussion" topic. Its kinda like red wine. Some people enjoy it, others don't. It's an acquired taste. kthxbye.