Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Yaaawh, me and some friends are starting a streetwear brand called Overdeauxis. We've got a design for our first varsity jacket,we would appreciate it if u would drop some knowledge on us, good or bad off course!

Floral is just trending right now so that won't be relevant at all in a couple years. In my opinion you want to try to make something that is timeless and/or something that you know you will like for a long time.
Also, I think the logo looks cool but please explain the noose because I honestly would feel like shit wearing that on me.

The noose lies within the concept of Overdeauxis:Overdose and Death in general. There will be written "Devil's Breath" on the back of the varsity. It refers to the flower on the sleeves, cuz the flower (Angel Trumpets) is the base of a drug called Burundanga or Devil's Breath.

Bless

Hey guys! After a year or so of a whole lot of research, planning, designing and headaches, we finally launched our first Spring 2012 collection in our online store. Just wanted to officially get the Project XXIV name out here in the Hypebeast forums because many of you have been such a source of knowledge and inspiration for me. If you have a few minutes, stop by www.projectxxiv.com and hit me up with some feedback. We've only been open for a little over a month, so it's a big time for the brand as we continue to get the name out and grow into our future collections. We have some big projects lined up so we hope some of you will stay tuned. Completely open to any feedback you guys could offer! I'm a newcomer to posting in the forums, but definitely looking forward to being part of the Hypebeast community. Thanks!

http://www.projectxxiv.com/
http://www.facebook.com/projectxxiv
http://www.twitter.com/projectxxiv

the tees and hoodies should be at the top with the beanies on the bottom.

New line of crewneks and a long sleeve shirt from Overdeauxis. appreciate some criticism
from y'all before were goin into production.

Personally not a fan. In my opinion, plastering things to do with liquor and weed consumption on t-shirts, unless done in a tasteful manner, just asks for negative attention and speaks immaturity. But yo, do your thing.

Peace

Yaaawh, me and some friends are starting a streetwear brand called Overdeauxis. We've got a design for our first varsity jacket,we would appreciate it if u would drop some knowledge on us, good or bad off course!

Floral is just trending right now so that won't be relevant at all in a couple years. In my opinion you want to try to make something that is timeless and/or something that you know you will like for a long time.
Also, I think the logo looks cool but please explain the noose because I honestly would feel like shit wearing that on me.

The noose lies within the concept of Overdeauxis:Overdose and Death in general. There will be written "Devil's Breath" on the back of the varsity. It refers to the flower on the sleeves, cuz the flower (Angel Trumpets) is the base of a drug called Burundanga or Devil's Breath.

Bless

Damn. Thats actually a really cool explanation behind the jacket. I kinda dig it now!

Aii glad u like it

Starting a new line PACK
Facebook.com/PACKapparel is our page.
PACKapparel on instagram

Here are some samples of designs, any and all feedback/suggestions are appreciated

PACK Monster
(Printing soon)


PACK'lympics


PACK Monster Dodger


PACK Kills


PACK CHOMP

Starting a new line PACK
Facebook.com/PACKapparel is our page.
PACKapparel on instagram

Here are some samples of designs, any and all feedback/suggestions are appreciated

PACK Monster
(Printing soon)


PACK'lympics


PACK Monster Dodger


PACK Kills


PACK CHOMP

Bumping for opinions/suggestions

Setting up my Fall Line. Working along the lines of Broken Bank University. With the theme " Learn from the best takers"
Came up with it because Colleges and Universities are the best at taking money legally other then banks.

And this is the mascot I came up with.

What do you think?
working on a seal and some other School related designs. Letterman Jackets etc.
Should be pretty fun

in regards to content...drugs and alcohol related tees don't seem to be a problem at all in streetwear.

Starting a new line PACK
Facebook.com/PACKapparel is our page.
PACKapparel on instagram

Here are some samples of designs, any and all feedback/suggestions are appreciated

PACK Monster
(Printing soon)


PACK'lympics


PACK Monster Dodger


PACK Kills


PACK CHOMP

Bumping for opinions/suggestions

in regards to content...drugs and alcohol related tees don't seem to be a problem at all in streetwear.

Setting up my Fall Line. Working along the lines of Broken Bank University. With the theme " Learn from the best takers"
Came up with it because Colleges and Universities are the best at taking money legally other then banks.

And this is the mascot I came up with.

What do you think?
working on a seal and some other School related designs. Letterman Jackets etc.
Should be pretty fun

if that'll be the final quality of the graphic - it looks bad.
I like the overall posing of the mascot but not the mascot's design.
ill colorway though.

im diddnt post those tees to imply that we should all make weed and drink tees.....or to say that these brands are only about weed and drink....

Subject matter is not exclusive!

content is not exclusive!

for example....If you decide to make a tee about weed...are you in the shadow of Huf? if that's the case, then all brands are in each others shadow..because they all use similar subject matter, content and references! ( design execution and creativity will vary)

but in the end......the consumer doesn't make a big deal about it. the stores don't make a big deal about it.....the brands don't make a big deal about it.

do you see these brands/stores saying " oh shit...huf made a weed related tee...let's pull ours off the shelf'......there cant be any more weed related tees in streetwear ever now, in fear that someone may say that we are living in the shadow of HUF" ?

the things that you guys try to make significant....really isn't.

Hey guys I'm starting this new brand called Visual Oddity. Here are some recent designs. Let me know what you think, honest advice appreciated! good or bad!
Thanks!

I think the last 3 shirts are the best. Fairly unique. Although I'm not sure it'll have much mass crowd appeal if that's what you're aiming for.
The 2nd one needs to go though. I feel like i've seen brands redo the Dodgers logo "in their own creative way" about a million too many times...