Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

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Little sneak peak of an upcoming hoodie design i'm dropping.


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May 01, 2012 @ 05:41:16 AM
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May 01, 2012 @ 05:49:04 AM
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effulgence drop 4 coming in May! basketball leather snapback for the playoffs!
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May 01, 2012 @ 05:54:08 AM
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Anyone know any legit fabric websites? I've been on countless but can't seem to find anything substantial
May 01, 2012 @ 12:00:09 PM
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Hey I was wondering if anyone knew where I could get some wholesale pom beanies and camp hats for my upcoming line.


google.


Of course I checked google and I couldn't find anything I liked.

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May 01, 2012 @ 12:43:03 PM
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Cobra Lord


Hey guys, I'm working with a brand called Cobra Lord. We're based out of So Cal. I'd love to hear some feedback. smokeyface

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May 01, 2012 @ 12:43:47 PM
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May 01, 2012 @ 13:05:20 PM
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May 01, 2012 @ 13:06:18 PM
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Little sneak peak of an upcoming hoodie design i'm dropping.

Was that originally hand drawn jake?

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May 01, 2012 @ 14:15:26 PM
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what types of priting methods do you guys use? print to garment? print screen?

im trying to buy a printer but just want some feedback for reliable printers.

im starting a clothing line, wake up ink. pics coming soon
May 01, 2012 @ 14:16:00 PM
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Little sneak peak of an upcoming hoodie design i'm dropping.

Was that originally hand drawn jake?


yeah, here is the sketch
May 01, 2012 @ 15:20:20 PM
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Fresher just released a new tee/tank today.

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May 01, 2012 @ 15:24:20 PM
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jakeolshan: That's an awesome sketch man, the L there is beautiful!

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May 01, 2012 @ 17:00:30 PM
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Little sneak peak of an upcoming hoodie design i'm dropping.

Was that originally hand drawn jake?


yeah, here is the sketch


The only thing I'd say for this, is try to keep your letters the same width, and on the same angle.
The L-i, doesn't really match up with the flow in the rest of the letters, and the extension coming off the t looks awkward.
May 01, 2012 @ 17:32:03 PM
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Was that originally hand drawn jake?


yeah, here is the sketch


The only thing I'd say for this, is try to keep your letters the same width, and on the same angle.
The L-i, doesn't really match up with the flow in the rest of the letters, and the extension coming off the t looks awkward.

Was that originally hand drawn jake?


yeah, here is the sketch


The only thing I'd say for this, is try to keep your letters the same width, and on the same angle.
The L-i, doesn't really match up with the flow in the rest of the letters, and the extension coming off the t looks awkward.


in the sketch the kerning is off, but in the
finished design it isn't. the extension is a lightning
bolt.
May 01, 2012 @ 18:58:26 PM
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I understand that. What I'm saying is the letters don't all fit together cohesively, and it looks weird. I know that the extension is a lightning bolt, the part where it loops off the T on the right side looks un-natural. Maybe post the finished image so I can see what it looks like after rendering?
May 01, 2012 @ 20:47:23 PM
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Little sneak peak of an upcoming hoodie design i'm dropping.

Was that originally hand drawn jake?


yeah, here is the sketch

This is dope! I really appreciate work like that.

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May 01, 2012 @ 20:59:51 PM
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I understand that. What I'm saying is the letters don't all fit together cohesively, and it looks weird. I know that the extension is a lightning bolt, the part where it loops off the T on the right side looks un-natural. Maybe post the finished image so I can see what it looks like after rendering?


I don't entirely understand what you are trying to say. The type is based off of a font, and they all go cohesive with each other. You are critiquing it from a side image. The way it loops off, that is how baseball/varsity logos look.
http://rlv.zcache.com/baseball_script_logo_in_red_card-p137320510504655703envwi_400.jpg
May 01, 2012 @ 21:00:09 PM
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Thanks Chadacadabra!
May 01, 2012 @ 21:24:58 PM
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Light looks good...i see what homie was saying bout the font sketch, but it looks all good on the finished product.

FRSHR tank is a nice colorway.....solid design...love the labels on the bottom.
May 01, 2012 @ 21:25:10 PM
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I understand that. What I'm saying is the letters don't all fit together cohesively, and it looks weird. I know that the extension is a lightning bolt, the part where it loops off the T on the right side looks un-natural. Maybe post the finished image so I can see what it looks like after rendering?


I don't entirely understand what you are trying to say. The type is based off of a font, and they all go cohesive with each other. You are critiquing it from a side image. The way it loops off, that is how baseball/varsity logos look.
http://rlv.zcache.com/baseball_script_logo_in_red_card-p137320510504655703envwi_400.jpg


What I'm saying is, you're executing it poorly. At least from what I can see in the original sketch, what you've done doesn't flow properly and doesn't feel right. You don't have to try to justify what you've done, I'm just telling you what I'm seeing. (Invalid img) For example. none of your letters are following the same flow, and therefore to me at least if feels completely off. The way that the lightning bolt comes off the bottom of the T isn't balanced with the rest of the word.


You can see it much better like this.
May 01, 2012 @ 21:33:28 PM
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faceless....i see what you mean on the sketch....

the G and H are too far apart, the cross of the T is on an off angle, the L is totally off, the stem of the I G H and T are not aligned at the same angle.

but you can tell from the product pic, that all of that seems to be corrected....the loop connecting the G and H are fixed, the T looks perfect, and the tail lightning bolt flows off the T alot better.

Looks Good.
May 01, 2012 @ 21:38:35 PM
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May 01, 2012 @ 21:42:54 PM
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faceless....i see what you mean on the sketch....

the G and H are too far apart, the cross of the T is on an off angle, the L is totally off, the stem of the I G H and T are not aligned at the same angle.

but you can tell from the product pic, that all of that seems to be corrected....the loop connecting the G and H are fixed, the T looks perfect, and the tail lightning bolt flows off the T alot better.

Looks Good.


Word, I wasn't smashing on the final design because i haven't seen it flat out. It most def looks better though. I was just giving my 2 cents on the preliminary sketch.
May 01, 2012 @ 21:47:20 PM
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dude, haha you think we didn't think of that? that is why the sketch is a sketch..
No sketch is perfect, it took about a month to finalize and render the design. We made it look great and fixed up all the revisions.

The finished product came out great, and that's what matters.
May 01, 2012 @ 21:48:01 PM
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dude, haha you think we didn't think of that? that is why the sketch is a sketch..
No sketch is perfect, it took about a month to finalize and render the design. We made it look great and fixed up all the revisions.

The finished product came out great, and that's what matters.
faceless....i see what you mean on the sketch....

the G and H are too far apart, the cross of the T is on an off angle, the L is totally off, the stem of the I G H and T are not aligned at the same angle.

agreed, and thanks man.

but you can tell from the product pic, that all of that seems to be corrected....the loop connecting the G and H are fixed, the T looks perfect, and the tail lightning bolt flows off the T alot better.

Looks Good.
May 01, 2012 @ 21:50:46 PM
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....and here is a photo of the Black tee.
May 01, 2012 @ 22:11:08 PM
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dope stuff everyone! it's taken me a few weeks, but i've read through this entire thread.

hoping to share some stuff in the very near future.

people who give "constructive criticism", should be able to take them as well. #justsaying
May 01, 2012 @ 22:19:38 PM
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dude, haha you think we didn't think of that? that is why the sketch is a sketch..
No sketch is perfect, it took about a month to finalize and render the design. We made it look great and fixed up all the revisions.

The finished product came out great, and that's what matters.
faceless....i see what you mean on the sketch....

the G and H are too far apart, the cross of the T is on an off angle, the L is totally off, the stem of the I G H and T are not aligned at the same angle.

agreed, and thanks man.

but you can tell from the product pic, that all of that seems to be corrected....the loop connecting the G and H are fixed, the T looks perfect, and the tail lightning bolt flows off the T alot better.

Looks Good.


Fair enough. For me at least, I can definetly see that some corrections were made in the final design, but because of the angle/ material stretch I can't actually see what it looks like.

"dude, haha you think we didn't think of that?" No, I didn't assume that you'd fixed all of that, because I have no idea who you are, and what type of work you do. Don't quickly jump on the offensive as soon as someone tries to give you some criticism.
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