Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

May 01, 2012 @ 21:24
Light looks good...i see what homie was saying bout the font sketch, but it looks all good on the finished product.

FRSHR tank is a nice colorway.....solid design...love the labels on the bottom.
May 01, 2012 @ 21:25
I understand that. What I'm saying is the letters don't all fit together cohesively, and it looks weird. I know that the extension is a lightning bolt, the part where it loops off the T on the right side looks un-natural. Maybe post the finished image so I can see what it looks like after rendering?


I don't entirely understand what you are trying to say. The type is based off of a font, and they all go cohesive with each other. You are critiquing it from a side image. The way it loops off, that is how baseball/varsity logos look.
http://rlv.zcache.com/baseball_script_logo_in_red_card-p137320510504655703envwi_400.jpg


What I'm saying is, you're executing it poorly. At least from what I can see in the original sketch, what you've done doesn't flow properly and doesn't feel right. You don't have to try to justify what you've done, I'm just telling you what I'm seeing. (Invalid img) For example. none of your letters are following the same flow, and therefore to me at least if feels completely off. The way that the lightning bolt comes off the bottom of the T isn't balanced with the rest of the word.


You can see it much better like this.
May 01, 2012 @ 21:33
faceless....i see what you mean on the sketch....

the G and H are too far apart, the cross of the T is on an off angle, the L is totally off, the stem of the I G H and T are not aligned at the same angle.

but you can tell from the product pic, that all of that seems to be corrected....the loop connecting the G and H are fixed, the T looks perfect, and the tail lightning bolt flows off the T alot better.

Looks Good.
May 01, 2012 @ 21:38


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May 01, 2012 @ 21:42
faceless....i see what you mean on the sketch....

the G and H are too far apart, the cross of the T is on an off angle, the L is totally off, the stem of the I G H and T are not aligned at the same angle.

but you can tell from the product pic, that all of that seems to be corrected....the loop connecting the G and H are fixed, the T looks perfect, and the tail lightning bolt flows off the T alot better.

Looks Good.


Word, I wasn't smashing on the final design because i haven't seen it flat out. It most def looks better though. I was just giving my 2 cents on the preliminary sketch.
May 01, 2012 @ 21:47
dude, haha you think we didn't think of that? that is why the sketch is a sketch..
No sketch is perfect, it took about a month to finalize and render the design. We made it look great and fixed up all the revisions.

The finished product came out great, and that's what matters.

http://www.distantlight.co

May 01, 2012 @ 21:48
dude, haha you think we didn't think of that? that is why the sketch is a sketch..
No sketch is perfect, it took about a month to finalize and render the design. We made it look great and fixed up all the revisions.

The finished product came out great, and that's what matters.
faceless....i see what you mean on the sketch....

the G and H are too far apart, the cross of the T is on an off angle, the L is totally off, the stem of the I G H and T are not aligned at the same angle.

agreed, and thanks man.

but you can tell from the product pic, that all of that seems to be corrected....the loop connecting the G and H are fixed, the T looks perfect, and the tail lightning bolt flows off the T alot better.

Looks Good.

http://www.distantlight.co

May 01, 2012 @ 21:50


....and here is a photo of the Black tee.
May 01, 2012 @ 22:11
dope stuff everyone! it's taken me a few weeks, but i've read through this entire thread.

hoping to share some stuff in the very near future.

people who give "constructive criticism", should be able to take them as well. #justsaying
May 01, 2012 @ 22:19
dude, haha you think we didn't think of that? that is why the sketch is a sketch..
No sketch is perfect, it took about a month to finalize and render the design. We made it look great and fixed up all the revisions.

The finished product came out great, and that's what matters.
faceless....i see what you mean on the sketch....

the G and H are too far apart, the cross of the T is on an off angle, the L is totally off, the stem of the I G H and T are not aligned at the same angle.

agreed, and thanks man.

but you can tell from the product pic, that all of that seems to be corrected....the loop connecting the G and H are fixed, the T looks perfect, and the tail lightning bolt flows off the T alot better.

Looks Good.


Fair enough. For me at least, I can definetly see that some corrections were made in the final design, but because of the angle/ material stretch I can't actually see what it looks like.

"dude, haha you think we didn't think of that?" No, I didn't assume that you'd fixed all of that, because I have no idea who you are, and what type of work you do. Don't quickly jump on the offensive as soon as someone tries to give you some criticism.
May 01, 2012 @ 22:49


Fair enough. For me at least, I can definetly see that some corrections were made in the final design, but because of the angle/ material stretch I can't actually see what it looks like.

"dude, haha you think we didn't think of that?" No, I didn't assume that you'd fixed all of that, because I have no idea who you are, and what type of work you do. Don't quickly jump on the offensive as soon as someone tries to give you some criticism.


i'm always open for criticism, but i was just confused on why you were critiquing a sketch when the design was finished. I mean, of coarse a sketch are gonna have it's faults, it's the sketch and the beggining of the concept. the picture of the sketch was just showing someone who asked if it was hand drawn or not. wasn't really open for critique since the design was already finished.
i appreciate the feedback anyways though.

http://www.distantlight.co

May 01, 2012 @ 23:27
"wasn’t really open for critique since the design was already finished."
- Jake

whoa...are you saying that if someone post a finished design, then it is not open for crit?
May 01, 2012 @ 23:34
"wasn’t really open for critique since the design was already finished."
- Jake

whoa...are you saying that if someone post a finished design, then it is not open for crit?


nope, saying that i already had finished the design so critiquing a primilinary sketch is uselss. with the assumption the revisions are fixed of coarse (which they were)

http://www.distantlight.co

May 02, 2012 @ 00:11
Just launched part one of our Spring/Summer line today.
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May 02, 2012 @ 00:25
simple and clean, pretty cool.
one shirt made this instantly pop into my mind
http://shoplgnds.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/lgnds-anchor-grey1.jpg

http://www.distantlight.co

May 02, 2012 @ 01:42
Sworn Sailor is an ill brand name, and the "S" Crewneck is an awesome take on the nautical theme (which totally gets lost in your preview photos).

Right on.

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May 02, 2012 @ 05:11
Do u guys know what blanks undftd uses for hoodies??

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May 02, 2012 @ 05:21
Do u guys know what blanks undftd uses for hoodies??


I'm pretty sure those are custom cut & sew hoodies. that's why they are pricey, but quality is superb!

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May 02, 2012 @ 05:37
Do u guys know what blanks undftd uses for hoodies??


I'm pretty sure those are custom cut & sew hoodies. that's why they are pricey, but quality is superb!


I remember from some source that UNDFTD uses Alternatives.
http://www.independenttradingco.com/
May 02, 2012 @ 05:47
I'm pretty sure those are custom cut & sew hoodies. that's why they are pricey, but quality is superb!


I remember from some source that UNDFTD uses Alternatives.
http://www.independenttradingco.com/


i printed my hoodies on independent. i'm not sure if Undefeated does, but I know brands like Diamond and Obey do. Truly some of the most comfortable hoodies out there.

http://www.distantlight.co

May 02, 2012 @ 08:21


http://shop.wdnation.com/

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May 02, 2012 @ 15:39
^ i Like
May 03, 2012 @ 01:13


Little sneak peak of an upcoming hoodie design i'm dropping.


This is the tits. When does SS drop Jake? Excited to see it!
May 03, 2012 @ 01:27


Available online soon!

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May 03, 2012 @ 01:49


Little sneak peak of an upcoming hoodie design i'm dropping.


This is the tits. When does SS drop Jake? Excited to see it!


Thanks dude. It drops June 8th!

http://www.distantlight.co

May 03, 2012 @ 15:06
So do you guys hand draw your designs out?

"I keep myself so lifted I'm accustom to new heights."

May 03, 2012 @ 16:10


This is the tits. When does SS drop Jake? Excited to see it!


Thanks dude. It drops June 8th!


lmao @ the tits! It really is tho. Dope design!

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May 03, 2012 @ 16:13
Dirty Razkal. We actually got Christina Milian rocking it! She rocks this green hoody faithfully! Anyone know any dope blogs or anywhere else I can get this pic over to, to get a nice buzz going? Other than here obviously lol


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May 03, 2012 @ 16:26
Hey guys, been a little quiet lately, but I've been working on dropping this release and getting the workmanship lined up.

Released my first pocket tee using silk to inaugurate the first of many to come. Would appreciate your support if you're feelin it!



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May 03, 2012 @ 19:14
^^^^^

honestly from that picture i wouldnt think of ever buying it becasue you photoshopped the pocket onto the shirt...

and i dont like how you have the BUY NOW on every shirt that makes me not wanna buy it...feels like your saying buy my clothes dont just look
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