March 3, 2014 @ 10:57 AM
roscoegrand

Post: 41

Join Date: Mar 2013

Hey guys, This is the logo for my label Moncton, please give me some feedback on it, if you think it looks good or not, and any reasons if you dont think it looks good. it aims to reflect a premium quality streetwear brand.


the Line work need some depth. Use different style lines to give the face more perspective rather then just the basic line.
I don't know what Moncton means and if I have to Google search to find out I'm already turned off and you lost a potential customer.
If you are going for the whole Luxury/Greek/Vintage look I mean yes it is scene but other than that, I don't know what to say. You can probably create a bunch of stuff with that theme but what about when that trend dies, will your company go along with it.
Just something to think about.
But go with your gut. If you really like it and want that as a logo, use it. Just clean up the lines.
If you need help fixing the lines I'll do it for free in Illustrator
Thank you for the feedback bro. 

As for the meaning of Moncton, surely you dont judge a label by the meaning of the name? Most labels have names that dont mean anything, LV, Armani, Carhartt, Adidas, they're just names, just like Moncton.

No i'm not going for greek or vintage thing. I am aiming for a logo that represents what the brand represents, i.e. what Alexander represents as a figure. At the same time, in a hundred years, that logo won't look cheap, because it is a balanced mix of simplicity and complexity.

If you 'cleaned' it up or simplified it anymore, i think it could look cartoony. But please do if you can bro, i'd love to see it!!

Thanks again.

lol


send me the original image you copied it from and the file for the image you created
brokenbankclothing@gmail.com
Would love to see your take on this BrokenBank. Quickly did a version myself.

EDIT, found the reworked design, sorry. Here ya go



Didn't finish it, but this might give you an idea of what this could be with differerent line thickness.

You must be right, this is not timeless at all, and really  cartoony.

Compared to this:


On  a side note, your logo kinda reminds me of this:




Furthermore: "LV, Armani, Carhartt, Adidas, they're just names," they're not just random brandnames, they are the founders' names:

LV founded by Louis Vuitton Malletier
Adidas founded by Adolf Dassler
Armani founded by Giorgio Armani
Carhartt founded by Hamilton Carhartt
March 3, 2014 @ 01:53 PM
sonnyu35

Post: 2

Join Date: Mar 2014

March 3, 2014 @ 03:07 PM
jamsukkah

Post: 27

Join Date: Oct 2013

A few graffiti oriented pieces I've come up with.
March 3, 2014 @ 05:39 PM
twincolumn

Post: 269

Join Date: Nov 2012

selling a silkscreening kit, everything you need to print your own designs...

also have blanks from Alstyle and Independent (brand new, in box since purchase) that I am letting go for cost

I got lawyer fees and tuition to pay so need these gone quick

help a fellow HB member out and get a great deal at the same time

PM if interested, thanks

TwinColumn.com @TwinColumnCult Facebook.com/TwinColumn

March 3, 2014 @ 10:31 PM
ndrew

Post: 1947

Join Date: Jul 2010

Location: socal

to get our name across we are doing 2 giveaways

Tumblr Giveaway 


Instagram


http://www.headhunterla.com/

thanks!

www.headhunterla.com

March 3, 2014 @ 11:41 PM
solitairism

Post: 255

Join Date: Jun 2013

Location: Futurism

Motiv Co.
 
March 3, 2014 @ 11:50 PM
RUN.

Post: 28

Join Date: Aug 2013

Headhunter x Native? 
March 3, 2014 @ 11:53 PM
RUN.

Post: 28

Join Date: Aug 2013

I actually really like the simplicity of Native.
March 3, 2014 @ 11:54 PM
RUN.

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Join Date: Aug 2013

Actually. I might cop some headhunter if I get that reblog win. haha
March 3, 2014 @ 11:54 PM
RUN.

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Thoughts on BRK: Needs a little work. Less loud I would say.
March 4, 2014 @ 12:14 AM
RUN.

Post: 28

Join Date: Aug 2013

That Never USA though.. ahha
March 4, 2014 @ 12:16 AM
RUN.

Post: 28

Join Date: Aug 2013

Lol Outsider. That jacket fit. uhhhh I keep on posting because I always see something to talk about on other pages.
March 4, 2014 @ 12:17 AM
RUN.

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Join Date: Aug 2013


Going to be releasing these soon in limited quantities 
Uhhhh
March 4, 2014 @ 12:18 AM
RUN.

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it looks very bland, give depth and a feeling towards your design 
It says SUS like wha.
March 4, 2014 @ 12:18 AM
RUN.

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What do you guys think of this? 
Could be aight if it was a little less loud I think.
March 4, 2014 @ 12:19 AM
RUN.

Post: 28

Join Date: Aug 2013

1's All Over Crewneck in gray - what do you guys think?
check us out instagram: @uno_and_company // unoandco.com - you can use promo code "HYPEBEAST" at checkout for 20% off everything on our site.  

Dig the sweater. Not the company name. 
March 4, 2014 @ 12:19 AM
RUN.

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Join Date: Aug 2013

Not any better than last time sorry man. needs new vision.
March 4, 2014 @ 12:20 AM
RUN.

Post: 28

Join Date: Aug 2013

Hats with photos used for design instead of logos or graphics.  Thoughts?
Negative
March 4, 2014 @ 12:20 AM
RUN.

Post: 28

Join Date: Aug 2013

Outsider 

Spring/Summer 2014 Look Book 






Jo Pita x Outsider 2 Piece Collab 
1 Tee x 1 Bomber Jacket 



Webstore will be updated on 2/28 @ 12 PM EST
American-Outsider.Com 
ooooooo saw the bros over at http://kroseii.us/ do that different metal font tee first.....
Seriously.
March 4, 2014 @ 12:20 AM
RUN.

Post: 28

Join Date: Aug 2013

this whole page is trash!!!
Lol. Concur.
March 4, 2014 @ 12:21 AM
RUN.

Post: 28

Join Date: Aug 2013

Having fun with this clothing shit. Made some Hotwing Socks. Release this weekend.
&Im only 17
Hot wings doe.
March 4, 2014 @ 12:24 AM
julioescala

Post: 194

Join Date: Jun 2013

Location: Pompano Beach, FL

RUN got a lot to say everyone

www.theheatedenvironment.com

March 4, 2014 @ 12:27 AM
julioescala

Post: 194

Join Date: Jun 2013

Location: Pompano Beach, FL

how'd you go from what you were previously trying to create to animewave?  

www.theheatedenvironment.com

March 4, 2014 @ 12:28 AM
solitairism

Post: 255

Join Date: Jun 2013

Location: Futurism

how'd you go from what you were previously trying to create to animewave?  
Re imagined what i wanted my brand to be themed around and listened to advice regarding cohesiveness.
March 4, 2014 @ 02:04 AM
anon.

Post: 19

Join Date: Mar 2014

http://s1113.photobucket.com/user/anon169/media/incomplete_zps854b08a3.jpg.html

this is incomplete but could you guys give some feedback? 
 
thank you
March 4, 2014 @ 02:17 AM
jono301

Post: 18

Join Date: Mar 2013

This piece was inspired by messages of A Tribe Called Quest. As a 15 year old, i took bits and pieces of the whole album into consideration and put my tweaks and tastes into it.. Any feedback?

"Let the ones who wait suffer, as you climb" www.Theoriginalsco.com

March 4, 2014 @ 02:33 AM
solitairism

Post: 255

Join Date: Jun 2013

Location: Futurism

This piece was inspired by messages of A Tribe Called Quest. As a 15 year old, i took bits and pieces of the whole album into consideration and put my tweaks and tastes into it.. Any feedback?
You seriously named your line "The Originals" ?
March 4, 2014 @ 03:04 AM
zacarycaine

Post: 65

Join Date: Dec 2013

Location: USA

how'd you go from what you were previously trying to create to animewave?  
Re imagined what i wanted my brand to be themed around and listened to advice regarding cohesiveness.
So you re imagined your brand because you just wanted to follow the hype?
March 4, 2014 @ 03:15 AM
solitairism

Post: 255

Join Date: Jun 2013

Location: Futurism

how'd you go from what you were previously trying to create to animewave?  
Re imagined what i wanted my brand to be themed around and listened to advice regarding cohesiveness.
So you re imagined your brand because you just wanted to follow the hype?
I don't follow any so called "Hype"

I just make what I want and what I think is cool.
March 4, 2014 @ 03:31 AM
zacarycaine

Post: 65

Join Date: Dec 2013

Location: USA

how'd you go from what you were previously trying to create to animewave?  
Re imagined what i wanted my brand to be themed around and listened to advice regarding cohesiveness.
So you re imagined your brand because you just wanted to follow the hype?
I don't follow any so called "Hype"

I just make what I want and what I think is cool.
I respect that, don't get me wrong dude the stuff is pretty cool, I've just been seeing a lot of brands do this "animewave" stuff lately.

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