Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Feb 10, 2014 @ 19:12
Its ok I can do my own. I just gotta do some tweaks and have different options. Still in progress
Feb 10, 2014 @ 19:13
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Feb 10, 2014 @ 19:27
Starting a Brand called Fictitious...


Just got a logo made. /Critique please.



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Feb 10, 2014 @ 22:06
Originally posted by Inactive User
Starting a Brand called Fictitious...


Just got a logo made. /Critique please.


Feels like ive seen it before somewhere. And it doesn't feel like it fits the name that well to me.

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Feb 10, 2014 @ 23:48
Originally posted by Inactive User
Starting a Brand called Fictitious...


Just got a logo made. /Critique please.


Feels like ive seen it before somewhere. And it doesn't feel like it fits the name that well to me.
its also from three fucking years ago

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Feb 11, 2014 @ 00:13
Hey Everyone, 
I know i haven't posted in a while but I wanted to share a new project me and a friend have started called the F.A.R. Collective. The site is a online magazine dedicated to Fashion Art, and providing tips to those entrepreneurs who are interested in starting their own clothing brand. Feel free to check it out and let me know what you think. 
 http://thefarcollective.com/ 

We're hoping to feature some of the new brands in the forum and even review the products that you may have. 

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Feb 11, 2014 @ 00:59
Critique on this one
Front or back


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Feb 11, 2014 @ 01:14
yeah or nah for a logo tee 
Feb 11, 2014 @ 02:09
yeah or nah for a logo tee 
hell nah

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Feb 11, 2014 @ 03:31
Working on this brand called VNDLS with a friend. Let me know what you guys think.
Instagram: @VNDLSSQUAD
Twitter: @VNDLSSQUAD
Website: http://vndlssquad.com/
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twitter: @jasonxmartinez

Feb 11, 2014 @ 03:42
which class should i sign up for.. the branding class or the introduction for sales and sourcing? just looking for an opinion because I'm definitely not a fully "established" brand and im pretty sure theirs alot of info in the branding class that i dont know but im looking at the sourcing and getting interested in that one more since i really want to get to the point to be able to produce/source my own cut n sew garments... basically.. which one did you do or was their even that option when you signed up?
Cant sale a company and product w/o first knowing what company your making. The branding class is a "prerequsite" to the sales and sourcing.  I've taken the 1st class (I am not established yet). It taught me a lot. Real cool ppl. Check the projects and you'll see what steps Jeff will show you: http://www.skillshare.com/classes/fashion/A-Staple-of-Branding-How-to-Start-Your-Fashion-Company/915436837/projects
ohhhh i understand now .. im going to look more into it,  it looks fun. lot of the projects that im looking at look like well (structured) brands im sure i could learn a lot. thanks. 
Suggest you just take both classes. For the price it's the best advice and knowledge you're going to get, unless you have a homie/mentor who can help you with a ton of knowledge. The first class was sick and getting top 10 was worth it for sure. Not going to enter the second contest, but there are a ton of more videos in the second class. You can still submit your brand for the second class to win a spot in Reed Space. It's worth the $20-30. 

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Feb 11, 2014 @ 05:42
Originally posted by Inactive User

nah.
If you really want a king design to use. I have one I made I can sell to you.
Just inbox me and I'll send show you how it looks.
already vectored and ready for print. I can edit the font how you please as well.
So...you're not going to give the guy any advice or criticism, but you're gonna sell him one of your designs to use instead? I don't like being mean, but instead of selling your design to him, maybe you should hire someone to design stuff for you. 
Feb 11, 2014 @ 05:48
Goodkill Capsule Collection Now Available | KCUFTHEPOPULATION.COM

There's so much wrong with this...

1. You're parodying Goodwill? Really, GOODWILL? 
2. These pictures look like they were taken on a disposable Kodak from the 90s
3. Your model

I'm sorry, but to me this is another example of not putting a lot of effort into your brand and putting out a mediocre (at best) product. 
Feb 11, 2014 @ 05:55
Originally posted by Inactive User
Critique on this one
Front or back

Can't really tell what that's supposed to be shooting through the B...but I'd definitely go with the second one. Although, the front of it looks kinda like this... http://www.karmaloop.com/product/The-Poche-B-Logo-in-Black/399612
Feb 11, 2014 @ 05:58
yeah or nah for a logo tee 
Well, if this is your logo, you might want to go back to the drawing board. This is just plain awful. 
Feb 11, 2014 @ 06:06
Working on this brand called VNDLS with a friend. Let me know what you guys think.
Instagram: @VNDLSSQUAD
Twitter: @VNDLSSQUAD
Website: http://vndlssquad.com/
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I feel like your designs lack originality. Just another Black Scale rip off brand. Also, how the heck do you make ANY money if you sell your shirts for so cheap?
Feb 11, 2014 @ 06:17
@legacy

chill bru, in the future compact all your feedback to one post and just @ the people you are talking about 

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Feb 11, 2014 @ 06:55
Originally posted by Inactive User
Working on this brand called VNDLS with a friend. Let me know what you guys think.
Instagram: @VNDLSSQUAD
Twitter: @VNDLSSQUAD
Website: http://vndlssquad.com/
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I feel like your designs lack originality. Just another Black Scale rip off brand. Also, how the heck do you make ANY money if you sell your shirts for so cheap?
they have been out for a while already, just trying to move product. thanks for the input

twitter: @jasonxmartinez

Feb 11, 2014 @ 07:07
Cant sale a company and product w/o first knowing what company your making. The branding class is a "prerequsite" to the sales and sourcing.  I've taken the 1st class (I am not established yet). It taught me a lot. Real cool ppl. Check the projects and you'll see what steps Jeff will show you: http://www.skillshare.com/classes/fashion/A-Staple-of-Branding-How-to-Start-Your-Fashion-Company/915436837/projects
ohhhh i understand now .. im going to look more into it,  it looks fun. lot of the projects that im looking at look like well (structured) brands im sure i could learn a lot. thanks. 
Suggest you just take both classes. For the price it's the best advice and knowledge you're going to get, unless you have a homie/mentor who can help you with a ton of knowledge. The first class was sick and getting top 10 was worth it for sure. Not going to enter the second contest, but there are a ton of more videos in the second class. You can still submit your brand for the second class to win a spot in Reed Space. It's worth the $20-30. 
So is Jeff doing the same thing this year with the contest and does that start now? I wasn't sure if the classes meant the contest is starting again. 
Feb 11, 2014 @ 10:26
Originally posted by Inactive User
I've seen a lot of bad things come from this forum, but on the other hand I have seen a ton of improvement and development from several brands. Along with several people that come here with original ideas and greats starts. So it has surprised me that nobody has done a collaboration with a brand from this forum, out of all the people that chat back and forth, tossing each other ideas and such I would expect that someone would do a collaboration. I see it as a great way to save a little money, and be able to release a product that each brand could benefit from in forms of exposure and product expansion. It is just an idea, thought about starting a new thread for it, but figured I'd test the idea with you all. 
Great idea you already know i support
This is a great Idea. Just so you know, I am from Indonesia. Production cost is so cheap here. Not as cheap as china though, but I guarantee the indonesian made is better in quality than chinese made. If anyone of you interested in making some business with me, contact me in private. You can see examples on my brand's website: http://applecoastindonesia.com/
Feb 11, 2014 @ 10:41
MARK YOUR CALENDARS.
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Feb 11, 2014 @ 17:55
With my first drop coming less than a month away, I was thinking, what if I add a "story/comic/zine" type of thing with each order?


I'm currently writing 3 different fictional stories and I think at least one of them will reach my target market. The story is a log record from a soldier after an apocalypse type of event has taken place. Like I said, I have a few more, so I can pick and choose which one to use.

I just think it will be a little extra as a way to connect with the buyer...

What y'all think? Good idea, bad idea, stupid??

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Feb 11, 2014 @ 18:06
Originally posted by Inactive User
With my first drop coming less than a month away, I was thinking, what if I add a "story/comic/zine" type of thing with each order?


I'm currently writing 3 different fictional stories and I think at least one of them will reach my target market. The story is a log record from a soldier after an apocalypse type of event has taken place. Like I said, I have a few more, so I can pick and choose which one to use.
tight idea just execute it well i kinda had the same idea but i wanted to make a manga then i realized i suck at making manga, at least the story part.. haha. if you want to send it my way i'll give it a look. critique it and whatnot. lemme kno.

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Feb 11, 2014 @ 18:07
double post..

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Feb 11, 2014 @ 18:12
Originally posted by Inactive User
Originally posted by Inactive User

nah.
If you really want a king design to use. I have one I made I can sell to you.
Just inbox me and I'll send show you how it looks.
already vectored and ready for print. I can edit the font how you please as well.
So...you're not going to give the guy any advice or criticism, but you're gonna sell him one of your designs to use instead? I don't like being mean, but instead of selling your design to him, maybe you should hire someone to design stuff for you. 

Why?


If someone lacks skill in sketching there

really isn't any critique you can give them other than "hire someone to do

your designs" which was what I offered him. Me on the other hand although

not a professional went to school for design and spend a lot of time practicing as well as know how to draw. I just

offered a service like any other person who knows how to do something
would do.

And as for the comparison to black scale by the placement of a B...That's standard designing, no ripping or comparison on that one. Anybody can download the Pittsburgh Pirates font and put it on a shirt which is what Black Scale did. There is no "designing" to that.



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Feb 11, 2014 @ 18:16
@julioescala -- I can't draw for shit but I can write. This one is a sole survivor recalling the events of a chemical apocalypse. Not sure if I wanna go all zombie - that's how it started out - but def the same type of feel.


The other story is about a teen girl that can walk into anyone's dream and manipulate them. And now she has to face her dead mothers' nightmares.


And the last one, which is already written as a short script, is a new age take on the "newspaper from the future" idea. That one I wanted fi shoot and produce as a 12-16min short film, but fuck me if life gets too complicated sometimes...


PM me your email address and I'll hit you up.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Feb 11, 2014 @ 19:38
This is my first peice I will be releasing to my New Brand Conquer Apparel.

Let me know your feed back thanks


Feb 11, 2014 @ 19:55
You guys might hate me for this but bare with me.

What do you guys think of this



With this on both sleeves.


I tried to make a mock up of it but i couldn't.

And yeah you might hate it, but i just want some feedback and maybe some ideas.
Feb 11, 2014 @ 20:10

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Feb 11, 2014 @ 20:16
Working on this brand called VNDLS with a friend. Let me know what you guys think.
Instagram: @VNDLSSQUAD
Twitter: @VNDLSSQUAD
Website: http://vndlssquad.com/
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