Well I could be meanÃÂ¢ÃÂÃÂ¦.but I think you're being way too influenced by the mainstream. Every single one of these designs are rip offs. I understand being inspired and moved by others before you but try to harness that passion and do different variations of what you like. Like the mozart looking statue headsÃÂ¢ÃÂÃÂ¦ doneÃÂ¢ÃÂÃÂ¦numbers on the backÃÂ¢ÃÂÃÂ¦doneÃÂ¢ÃÂÃÂ¦reptile printÃÂ¢ÃÂÃÂ¦done...more statuesÃÂ¢ÃÂÃÂ¦done. Simple serif font logo shirts, passable but done. What makes you different?
The first shirt on the top left is the best imo. Maybe if you have some super awesome marketing ideas behind all this I see it being hard to sell, but hey who knows.
definitely agree with this. it isn't a terrible thing because you're just starting out so you're still trying to figure out what you want your brand to represent but all of these shirts feature regurgitated mainstream concepts. Try to find inspiration somewhere else other than the blogs, music videos etc. Best of luck to you.
Thank you for the feedback guys! i appreciate it!
the statue head though (maybe hard to see) I have given it neck tattoos, nose piercing and tear drop tattoos. Do you think that's pretty different? I haven't seen anything like that done? (maybe there is haha).
My difficulty is that i want to start off with a casual clothing brand, thats subtly aggressive/strong.
If you had to chose any from the collection, which would they be?
I have received good feedback on a few of them, but i know you guys will tell me it straight!