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Just a initial design I drew. I need to change some things but I personally like the way it turned out. 1) Any thoughts appreciated. 2) Which color scheme is the best?

Thanks.

Just a initial design I drew. I need to change some things but I personally like the way it turned out. 1) Any thoughts appreciated. 2) Which color scheme is the best?





Thanks.

Ahh Idk man it looks really sloppy... Not sure if that's what you are going for tho.
Who are you targeting?

Bottoms Up MFG Initial Five Panel Camp Cap releases in five styles.

Grey colorways releasing in a couple weeks.

Spring Catalog Line Launch May 1, 2012.


Now available at:

Bottoms Up MFG Online Store

Yo this is mad dope...how do you print on your leather labels though

Just a initial design I drew. I need to change some things but I personally like the way it turned out. 1) Any thoughts appreciated. 2) Which color scheme is the best?





Thanks.

Ahh Idk man it looks really sloppy... Not sure if that's what you are going for tho.
Who are you targeting?

Yea, I know what you are saying. The UN and ordinary aren't very uniform. I still am testing though so I'm not sure if I want the design to be more or less uniform. but thanks for quick feedback. I'm just trying to target trendy young adults. I get some inspiration for my tees from Mishka because they are a company that has a unique style different than most streetwear brands. For example they have an eyeball as their logo.

For a unordinary brand you wouldn't want a orginary font. Hand drawn is fine in my opinion

Heres my logo for my line Bryan Lank its a urban preppy line.

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Heres a model in a cardigan sweater
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Got these buttons in as well.

Got these buttons in as well.

Buttons are sick. I'll be lookin' out for DL in the future.

Did you design your logo / design in-house, or did you outsource?

Just wondering.

Just a initial design I drew. I need to change some things but I personally like the way it turned out. 1) Any thoughts appreciated. 2) Which color scheme is the best?





Thanks.

For a unordinary brand you wouldn't want a orginary font. Hand drawn is fine in my opinion

Unordinary is a cool brand name in my opinion, BUT if I were you, there's a million other ways to say unordinary, or you could simply create a brand name that is.... not ordinary.

I agree with Vega. Check out stussy's font, it's a good example of a REALLY unique font (I've never seen another like it used in the streetwear industry).

Thanks for all the feedback guys. I've decided that I want to lean more on to the graphic hand-drawn non-uniform side of design. Also about the stussy font; I agree it is very unique and I love that brand but for some reason some aspects of the font are too "intense". I feel that for someone new to the brand, its hard to come to a realization that the logo stands for "Stussy" but I guess there's no need since there at the stage where people buy shirts to wear their logo haha!

Also; to add a note; the UN ordinary is going to be a design, not a logo, for my logo I definitely will incorporate a fully uniform distinct image. And of course, I still need to add a graphic design or something because having just unordinary won't sell especially when I'm an unknown brand.

About the sloppiness and non-uniformity of my design: I personally just like designs like this:

and this:


As opposed to this:

or


Also about the stussy weird unique font: I just did a trial


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Not getting the feedback that I'm looking for in the Brands section so I'm looking to all of you in here for some criticism. This is my Spring stuff and I'm pretty proud of it. Tell me what you like/dislike please

made this for my web design collective. just a temporary graphic.

made this for my web design collective. just a temporary graphic.

Btw I like your D lightning button, very ingenius. Simple yet great for a logo.

made this for my web design collective. just a temporary graphic.

jake, you're killing me bro. everything you post is usually very well designed but half of it is nothing more than completely unmodified fonts from http://www.losttype.com/ ...but then again i guess it's only people like me who will notice shit like that (professional web designer for several years now)

made this for my web design collective. just a temporary graphic.

Do you have developers on board currently?

Heres my logo for my line Bryan Lank its a urban preppy line.

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Heres a model in a cardigan sweater
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NICE LOGO. But the font itself doesn't say "preppy". I see you have a TM next to it. Did you really trademark it? If not I would probably use a less urban font since your logo alreayd ha a urban feel to it. You would want to create the prep side with the font IMO.

By the way where did you get the cardigans?
I have had the hardest time finding a good cardigan and I don't want to use Jerzees cardigans when I do my stitch stuff

If you didn't trademark, and you put TM on anything. That is illegal, just an FYI.

Some info on that, some people get confused with the difference.


When can I use the ®

Many people are confused on this subject and use "TM" or “®” incorrectly with their brand or logo.

When you use your trademark, logo or brand you can claim rights to it and you may use the “TM” (trademark) or “SM” (service mark) designation to alert the world to your claim of ownership of the brand. You may do so whether you have filed an application with the United States Patent and Trademark Office (USPTO).

However, you may only use the federal registration symbol “®” after the USPTO actually registers a mark, and not while an application is pending.

what about ©

"Treeman" Crewneck & "District" Hooded Sweatshirt.

From a scrapped project. Just looking for critiques, thoughts, think constructive.