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January 27, 2014 @ 05:28 PM
atomic-

Post: 11

Join Date: Mar 2013



thanks for the feedback is this a improvement
January 27, 2014 @ 07:56 PM
macegod

Post: 350

Join Date: Mar 2013

I recently started up a line with one of my friends. One of the questions I cant seem to find out is where to purchase product (other than basic shirts and hoodies). I'm specifically looking or jerseys. Any feedback will be appreciated. Thanks.
January 27, 2014 @ 08:12 PM
calidreams

Post: 21

Join Date: Apr 2013

Hey HB, I'm looking for a decent quality crew necks for reasonable price. I use gildan or hanes for sampling for the most part but they just feel cheap. Any suggestions would help, thanks.
January 27, 2014 @ 08:36 PM
Queue

Post: 176

Join Date: Jun 2013

I recently started up a line with one of my friends. One of the questions I cant seem to find out is where to purchase product (other than basic shirts and hoodies). I'm specifically looking or jerseys. Any feedback will be appreciated. Thanks.
google

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January 27, 2014 @ 08:38 PM
Queue

Post: 176

Join Date: Jun 2013

Feedback ?Whether it be good or bad, please comment.
Tell me what I need to improve on.
reminds me of the brand Leaders from chicago, their slogan is similar and products are similar too..

**anyone from chicago needs to go check out lacuna artist lofts crazy creative movement happening out there

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January 27, 2014 @ 08:58 PM
FiggRow

Post: 272

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: 213

Wtf is this. U want me to judge ur font?

http://hypebeast.com/forums/apparel/215397#4366225

January 27, 2014 @ 08:58 PM
slickrick69

Post: 16

Join Date: Jun 2013

Hey guys we released these hats a few months ago but due to a delay in manufacturing these hats did not arrive until winter rolled around. We are now looking to sell these for the warmer weather in spring. Please let me know what you guys think as well as any constructive criticism. This is our second 5 panel release since our start in 2013. Thanks.

- INTO THE WILD

http://intothewildclothing.bigcartel.com/



January 27, 2014 @ 09:16 PM
Greg Harris

Post: 5

Join Date: Jan 2014

Looks like nice quality, if theres one think id suggest its to sort out a new website or even just buy a nice theme. So many people use that standard bigcartel theme and having one thats unique or just a bit different at least makes you stand out a little among the sea of other brands.
January 27, 2014 @ 09:39 PM
Queue

Post: 176

Join Date: Jun 2013

been working on this for a bit, majority of it is done nothing much to add except little details that wont effect anything you see, just deciding on whether to have the scope  or not, I felt like it made it a bit more masculine also I got the idea from researching about army/snipers something about how they are the worst romancers which lead me to think of romance comics. Overall i just like the aesthetic of the comic book style. Thinking of using this for the back of a hoodie but let me know what you guys think

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January 27, 2014 @ 09:55 PM
EnigmaApparel

Post: 553

Join Date: Mar 2013

Feedback ?Whether it be good or bad, please comment.
Tell me what I need to improve on.
its boring, it took very little creativity or thought to make, its just writing on a tee man

Feeling like Bishop from Juice

January 27, 2014 @ 09:58 PM
chads

Post: 1547

Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: Vermont

been working on this for a bit, majority of it is done nothing much to add except little details that wont effect anything you see, just deciding on whether to have the scope  or not, I felt like it made it a bit more masculine also I got the idea from researching about army/snipers something about how they are the worst romancers which lead me to think of romance comics. Overall i just like the aesthetic of the comic book style. Thinking of using this for the back of a hoodie but let me know what you guys think
Since this is actually a good design to begin with, I'll give you my real constructive criticism.

First, I like the scope, it works well and adds in your idea in even more, and the idea of your logo for the center is cool as well, a good place to put that in there, however, the other places your logo recurrs makes it busy and unnecessary, for instance, the moon in the back, I think having your logo there is totally unnecessary, however if you're set on that, I would make the cut out just a lighter shade of yellow than the current shade of the moon, the way it is now makes it too dramatic and appears misplaced. In addition, the two stamps of your logo in the upper right hand corner are absolutely unnecessary and I think detract from the well refined look of the design you have already established. Lastly, the inkling of masculinity you add with the scope, is automatically taken away by the hart, that makes the shit so childish and pre teen. I like the text but I would just take away the heart and leave the text, possibly make it a little smaller.

Overall, I really like it and its definitely well done, theres just a couple things I think you can do to make it a tad simpler and better looking, I hope you actually take this feedback into consideration.

chadacadabra.tumblr.com

January 27, 2014 @ 10:11 PM
Queue

Post: 176

Join Date: Jun 2013

been working on this for a bit, majority of it is done nothing much to add except little details that wont effect anything you see, just deciding on whether to have the scope  or not, I felt like it made it a bit more masculine also I got the idea from researching about army/snipers something about how they are the worst romancers which lead me to think of romance comics. Overall i just like the aesthetic of the comic book style. Thinking of using this for the back of a hoodie but let me know what you guys think

Since this is actually a good design to begin with, I'll give you my real constructive criticism.

First, I like the scope, it works well and adds in your idea in even more, and the idea of your logo for the center is cool as well, a good place to put that in there, however, the other places your logo recurrs makes it busy and unnecessary, for instance, the moon in the back, I think having your logo there is totally unnecessary, however if you're set on that, I would make the cut out just a lighter shade of yellow than the current shade of the moon, the way it is now makes it too dramatic and appears misplaced. In addition, the two stamps of your logo in the upper right hand corner are absolutely unnecessary and I think detract from the well refined look of the design you have already established. Lastly, the inkling of masculinity you add with the scope, is automatically taken away by the hart, that makes the shit so childish and pre teen. I like the text but I would just take away the heart and leave the text, possibly make it a little smaller.

Overall, I really like it and its definitely well done, theres just a couple things I think you can do to make it a tad simpler and better looking, I hope you actually take this feedback into consideration.
Thanks for the critique, definitely agree with you on the moon and glad you could tell it was the logo, and all your points are valid I appreciate it..The top right corner just felt empty without something there but I'll try something else and I feel like the heart in the bottom gives it that cheesy comic book style. I will consider everything youve said and give it a try to see what i like and dont. Thanks again

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January 27, 2014 @ 10:59 PM
Fola Omosanya

Post: 5

Join Date: Sep 2013

Hello!

I'm the design director at VILLÁ. I'm happy to announce that we've released our first piece has dropped its a long sleeve in black and white. Check out our website and please email me if you have any questions.
www.villatholg.com

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100% Cotton
MADE IN SWITZERLAND 
Very limited piece
January 28, 2014 @ 12:05 AM
Asure

Post: 30

Join Date: Nov 2013

Location: Los Angeles

Our lookbook for early spring is now live.
The early spring collection will release on February 1.
Tees will be $18.  Super limited.
www.connectedgoods.bigcartel.com/look-book


I'm not trying to be an asshole, but I don't know why this got any thumbs up...
Our lookbook for early spring is now live.
The early spring collection will release on February 1.
Tees will be $18.  Super limited.
www.connectedgoods.bigcartel.com/look-book


Our lookbook for early spring is now live.
The early spring collection will release on February 1.
Tees will be $18.  Super limited.
www.connectedgoods.bigcartel.com/look-book



I don't get why people like this... It's so plain to me.
Maybe it's just not my cup of tee, cause obviously some people like these designs.

January 28, 2014 @ 12:06 AM
brodylikestochill

Post: 566

Join Date: Aug 2013

Yo queue I like that design, but I agree with chads on minimizing your logo in the design. Also I think it feels much more feminine than romantic, the heart in the bottom corner feels out of place and I feel like the text would work better in the very bottom corner like an artist signature. I like it a lot how it is but I feel like there are a lot of things you could do to it still. Also I don't want to impose this idea on you cause it might just be me but I feel like this would be really impressive in black and white with just the reticle in red, just an idea though, keep up the good work

oh and @artifact, thats a slogan not a design, come on b

Seto Kaiba // UsurpInternational.com // #Freethad

January 28, 2014 @ 12:09 AM
LuminaryMinds

Post: 85

Join Date: Oct 2013

been working on this for a bit, majority of it is done nothing much to add except little details that wont effect anything you see, just deciding on whether to have the scope  or not, I felt like it made it a bit more masculine also I got the idea from researching about army/snipers something about how they are the worst romancers which lead me to think of romance comics. Overall i just like the aesthetic of the comic book style. Thinking of using this for the back of a hoodie but let me know what you guys think
nice man! diggin the comic/pop art theme
January 28, 2014 @ 12:14 AM
Asure

Post: 30

Join Date: Nov 2013

Location: Los Angeles

double post...
January 28, 2014 @ 12:19 AM
Asure

Post: 30

Join Date: Nov 2013

Location: Los Angeles

been working on this for a bit, majority of it is done nothing much to add except little details that wont effect anything you see, just deciding on whether to have the scope  or not, I felt like it made it a bit more masculine also I got the idea from researching about army/snipers something about how they are the worst romancers which lead me to think of romance comics. Overall i just like the aesthetic of the comic book style. Thinking of using this for the back of a hoodie but let me know what you guys think
This is some really nice artwork, and I really like the vibe that Pop Art gives, so I'll leave you with this.
Does this image portray the aesthetic/feel that you want your brand to have? 
January 28, 2014 @ 12:22 AM
Asure

Post: 30

Join Date: Nov 2013

Location: Los Angeles

 I put the "Nightmares" design on a hoodie. I think it looks better..
Yo, you might want to put the hoodie's back design a little further down, so that it's not covered by the hood. Just a thought. 
January 28, 2014 @ 12:26 AM
delysid co.

Post: 15

Join Date: Jun 2013

Location: SYDNEY

Hey guys, I made a couple of designs available a few weeks ago, thought I would share.

Working on a mid season release, being in the southern hemisphere it's hard to do a winter/summer release because the rest of the world is going into a different season so i'll aim to do two at least two solid releases a year with a little of each.

I'm printing it all myself so if you have a question regarding the screen printing process I'm more than happy to help where I can. just PM me

There isn't a lot of content yet but here are the links
www.delysid.bigcartel.com
IG: @delysid
www.facebook.com/delysid
delysid.tumblr.com

Also use the code "BEAST" on the store for 20% off.

January 28, 2014 @ 12:41 AM
Queue

Post: 176

Join Date: Jun 2013

been working on this for a bit, majority of it is done nothing much to add except little details that wont effect anything you see, just deciding on whether to have the scope  or not, I felt like it made it a bit more masculine also I got the idea from researching about army/snipers something about how they are the worst romancers which lead me to think of romance comics. Overall i just like the aesthetic of the comic book style. Thinking of using this for the back of a hoodie but let me know what you guys think

This is some really nice artwork, and I really like the vibe that Pop Art gives, so I'll leave you with this.
Does this image portray the aesthetic/feel that you want your brand to have? 
I really like your question and its something i always ask myself after I have completed a design. Also another reason why i am very hesitant to put out any type of graphic clothing, I dont want to make the mistake and then be stuck in a category, which kind of happened to me already because i first started producing alot of work involving camo leading to people always associating me with camo.
Back to your question in someways I do feel like it represents queue since I'm into the military style/theme, but i dont want to always just put out something directly related to that. So the graphic does stray away from that theme by being a comic about romance but it was derived from a military quote plus tying it back together with the scope and titles. I know the pop art style has it own vibe, this is just my attempt to combine my influence to it.

I am going to go back over everything people have said and make different  versions again to see what you guys think, thanks for the help so far hb fam

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January 28, 2014 @ 12:51 AM
Asure

Post: 30

Join Date: Nov 2013

Location: Los Angeles

 @queue : fusho dude. looking forward to seeing more of your work.
January 28, 2014 @ 12:53 AM
shecalledmejay

Post: 47

Join Date: Aug 2012

Our lookbook for early spring is now live.
The early spring collection will release on February 1.
Tees will be $18.  Super limited.
www.connectedgoods.bigcartel.com/look-book


I'm not trying to be an asshole, but I don't know why this got any thumbs up...
Our lookbook for early spring is now live.
The early spring collection will release on February 1.
Tees will be $18.  Super limited.
www.connectedgoods.bigcartel.com/look-book


Our lookbook for early spring is now live.
The early spring collection will release on February 1.
Tees will be $18.  Super limited.
www.connectedgoods.bigcartel.com/look-book



I don't get why people like this... It's so plain to me.
Maybe it's just not my cup of tee, cause obviously some people like these designs.

How do the shirts fit because they look extra wide, do you have a lookbook? 
January 28, 2014 @ 01:12 AM
Project Nibiru

Post: 94

Join Date: Aug 2012

Location: Long Beach, CA

Hey guys we released these hats a few months ago but due to a delay in manufacturing these hats did not arrive until winter rolled around. We are now looking to sell these for the warmer weather in spring. Please let me know what you guys think as well as any constructive criticism. This is our second 5 panel release since our start in 2013. Thanks.

- INTO THE WILD

http://intothewildclothing.bigcartel.com/



Man dude, one advice i can say is that, at least you should have chosen a better pattern or fabric that represent your brand. Since your brand is called "Into the wild", I was expecting patterns of jungle or dark grimy forest shit IMO. None this random fuckery shit that looks cool to you, you going look like a damn hypebeast from 2012. Any who friend, just be yourself, be original, if you going make camp caps do it right or make it look like the way you wanted it to be,even something that speak to the consumer or what ever fits with the collection theme. Just remember every design have a story behind it, to me it just look like it you just slap on a pattern and was like "FUCK IT MENG, THE KIDS GOING BUY BECUZ THE PRETTY FLOWERS"

http://projectnibiru.bigcartel.com Also Follow us on Instragram & Twitter @ projectnibiru

January 28, 2014 @ 01:36 AM
FiggRow

Post: 272

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: 213

Ive seen one to many floral camp caps. You woulda thought this would of died but i guess not

http://hypebeast.com/forums/apparel/215397#4366225

January 28, 2014 @ 01:38 AM
FiggRow

Post: 272

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: 213

been working on this for a bit, majority of it is done nothing much to add except little details that wont effect anything you see, just deciding on whether to have the scope  or not, I felt like it made it a bit more masculine also I got the idea from researching about army/snipers something about how they are the worst romancers which lead me to think of romance comics. Overall i just like the aesthetic of the comic book style. Thinking of using this for the back of a hoodie but let me know what you guys think
This is some really nice artwork, and I really like the vibe that Pop Art gives, so I'll leave you with this.
Does this image portray the aesthetic/feel that you want your brand to have? 
idk wtf this is because i dont feel like reading the shit but it looks cool man. I really like the colors and vintage look, hope u made it yourself

http://hypebeast.com/forums/apparel/215397#4366225

January 28, 2014 @ 01:45 AM
Asure

Post: 30

Join Date: Nov 2013

Location: Los Angeles

Does anyone know of a well done look book that they can share here?
January 28, 2014 @ 02:02 AM
-Y-

Post: 106

Join Date: Apr 2013


Centered 
Do you got a website?
January 28, 2014 @ 02:26 AM
chads

Post: 1547

Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: Vermont

been working on this for a bit, majority of it is done nothing much to add except little details that wont effect anything you see, just deciding on whether to have the scope  or not, I felt like it made it a bit more masculine also I got the idea from researching about army/snipers something about how they are the worst romancers which lead me to think of romance comics. Overall i just like the aesthetic of the comic book style. Thinking of using this for the back of a hoodie but let me know what you guys think

Since this is actually a good design to begin with, I'll give you my real constructive criticism.

First, I like the scope, it works well and adds in your idea in even more, and the idea of your logo for the center is cool as well, a good place to put that in there, however, the other places your logo recurrs makes it busy and unnecessary, for instance, the moon in the back, I think having your logo there is totally unnecessary, however if you're set on that, I would make the cut out just a lighter shade of yellow than the current shade of the moon, the way it is now makes it too dramatic and appears misplaced. In addition, the two stamps of your logo in the upper right hand corner are absolutely unnecessary and I think detract from the well refined look of the design you have already established. Lastly, the inkling of masculinity you add with the scope, is automatically taken away by the hart, that makes the shit so childish and pre teen. I like the text but I would just take away the heart and leave the text, possibly make it a little smaller.

Overall, I really like it and its definitely well done, theres just a couple things I think you can do to make it a tad simpler and better looking, I hope you actually take this feedback into consideration.
Thanks for the critique, definitely agree with you on the moon and glad you could tell it was the logo, and all your points are valid I appreciate it..The top right corner just felt empty without something there but I'll try something else and I feel like the heart in the bottom gives it that cheesy comic book style. I will consider everything youve said and give it a try to see what i like and dont. Thanks again
Word. Glad you are actually taking something from the stuff people are telling you. I looked at this design for a hot minute because I actually liked it and wanted to help.

Ima throw you some more ideas to address some of what you said because obviously you're not just gonna do exactly what people tell you, you gotta follow your gut. For the top right corner, I feel you on that, I was thinking as I typed initially that it might look blank without something but I didn't like the way it was. In order to fill the void, possibly with your logo, I think you could still do that same emblem, right side up and I think it would look better in a tonal darker blue rather than a purple or pink so that it doesn't contrast so harshly with the sky. As for the heart, I feel you on your point and the vibe you're going for I just think the size of it now is a bit too much. I honestly don't like the heart much at all but I think it could work if you just made the heart/text combo smaller altogether and more towards the corner so that it doesn't cover his tie. At its current position, I think it interferes and distracts the viewer from the primary scene that I think you want them too see.

Look forward to seeing the changes you make!

chadacadabra.tumblr.com

January 28, 2014 @ 02:27 AM
chads

Post: 1547

Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: Vermont

Does anyone know of a well done look book that they can share here?
I know of plenty of well done cookbooks but what sort of vibe are you going for. Are you looking for reference material? If so are you looking for photo composition or styling?

chadacadabra.tumblr.com


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