been working on this for a bit, majority of it is done nothing much to add except little details that wont effect anything you see, just deciding on whether to have the scope or not, I felt like it made it a bit more masculine also I got the idea from researching about army/snipers something about how they are the worst romancers which lead me to think of romance comics. Overall i just like the aesthetic of the comic book style. Thinking of using this for the back of a hoodie but let me know what you guys think
Since this is actually a good design to begin with, I'll give you my real constructive criticism.
First, I like the scope, it works well and adds in your idea in even more, and the idea of your logo for the center is cool as well, a good place to put that in there, however, the other places your logo recurrs makes it busy and unnecessary, for instance, the moon in the back, I think having your logo there is totally unnecessary, however if you're set on that, I would make the cut out just a lighter shade of yellow than the current shade of the moon, the way it is now makes it too dramatic and appears misplaced. In addition, the two stamps of your logo in the upper right hand corner are absolutely unnecessary and I think detract from the well refined look of the design you have already established. Lastly, the inkling of masculinity you add with the scope, is automatically taken away by the hart, that makes the shit so childish and pre teen. I like the text but I would just take away the heart and leave the text, possibly make it a little smaller.
Overall, I really like it and its definitely well done, theres just a couple things I think you can do to make it a tad simpler and better looking, I hope you actually take this feedback into consideration.