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October 15, 2013 @ 12:16 PM
messer

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Join Date: Jul 2012



On this design I got 3 ups and 2 downs. Now if anybody who thumb it down, can you give me some feedback as to why? I'm trying to put out solid shit and any help is appreciated.



I'm planning on making the graphic smaller and maybe using a different color combo.
I personally didn't rate this but the design is good. I'm just going to insist that you change the font of your brand name it looks really blocky. 

Edit: At the same time the font isn't bad, it is just going to depend on your audience. This seems like it would appeal to a more punk audience. 

Something about the font or the box it is in just looks off. 
October 15, 2013 @ 12:23 PM
HWYS - Joey

Post: 758

Join Date: Mar 2012

Messer - thanks for the feedback. That logo is not actually a logo for the brand. The brand is called "TRAPJAW", that was just the name of the design. So maybe change that around so it's more a part of it?

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

October 15, 2013 @ 05:42 PM
jamsukkah

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October 15, 2013 @ 06:37 PM
Frank_

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On this design I got 3 ups and 2 downs. Now if anybody who thumb it down, can you give me some feedback as to why? I'm trying to put out solid shit and any help is appreciated.


I'm planning on making the graphic smaller and maybe using a different color combo.
the txt needs to be something slick and smaller
October 16, 2013 @ 03:59 AM
DannyHH

Post: 553

Join Date: Dec 2006

Location: United States

October 16, 2013 @ 04:10 AM
lorinrobb24

Post: 75

Join Date: Jan 2012

Location: Detroit, MI,US

Nice drop. VW 

Lorin for No Brand Logo

October 16, 2013 @ 04:45 AM
mrteebonilla

Post: 5759

Join Date: Mar 2012

Location: 440/216



On this design I got 3 ups and 2 downs. Now if anybody who thumb it down, can you give me some feedback as to why? I'm trying to put out solid shit and any help is appreciated.



I'm planning on making the graphic smaller and maybe using a different color combo.
the txt needs to be something slick and smaller
different font as well like a sloppy, handwritten looking font

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October 16, 2013 @ 04:58 AM
CHAO

Post: 62

Join Date: Apr 2008

Location: Montreal


We are based in Montreal.


SANS/COEUR is in french and it means 'heartless' (without/heart).


We play with the idea of contrast in every aspect of the brand. 

check-out our video lookbook and tell me what you think

http://vimeo.com/71557678

we got 3 t-shirts :



front and back : Truth Seekers



ABSENS HAERES NON ERIT which is Latin for "Absence does not make the heart grow fonder". Painting is the "Fruit Seller" by Vincenzo Campi.


C'est ma faute - C'est plus simple (It's my fault - It's simpler).Reads in a circle, like a snake eating it's tail.

designer at http://sans-coeur.com/ - http://sanscoeurmtl.tumblr.com

October 16, 2013 @ 05:40 AM
FiggRow

Post: 272

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: 213

sneak peek at the l/s we're releasing in the next month or two.
shoutout to my connect.

~

Honestly haven't liked most of the stuff you've posted so far however I see potential in this so I'll give you some crit that I think could strengthen the design.

One, the front graphic is probably the best part however I would make it smaller and have the arms extend longer, in addition, I think your logo needs to be much smaller, almost so that it is not very noticeable. I think this would better allow for the the image and correlated saying to do the work of the shirt rather than the brand name. I do like its placement though. As far as the text, I like where you're going however it sounds a bit forced and rigid in my opinion. If I were you I would try "SHOUTOUT MY CONNECT THOUGH" "SHOUTOUT MY CONNECT THO" "SHOUTOUT MY CONNECT DOE". I think any of those would allow for a more loose and potentially effortless cool look.

Just my two cents.
i vote for removing the word connected in the front, rest is fine

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October 16, 2013 @ 05:42 AM
FiggRow

Post: 272

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: 213


Late October 
if you haven't already had them made, i suggest you make the print on the hoodie bigger, just my opinion, other ppl might like it that way, idk
i like the first white tee with the Chinese letters, i remember u put this up waaay back. im not a fan of the rest

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October 16, 2013 @ 05:43 AM
FiggRow

Post: 272

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: 213

i see the dom 

http://hypebeast.com/forums/apparel/215397#4366225

October 16, 2013 @ 05:44 AM
FiggRow

Post: 272

Join Date: Jul 2013

Location: 213


We are based in Montreal.


SANS/COEUR is in french and it means 'heartless' (without/heart).


We play with the idea of contrast in every aspect of the brand. 

check-out our video lookbook and tell me what you think

http://vimeo.com/71557678

we got 3 t-shirts :



front and back : Truth Seekers



ABSENS HAERES NON ERIT which is Latin for "Absence does not make the heart grow fonder". Painting is the "Fruit Seller" by Vincenzo Campi.


C'est ma faute - C'est plus simple (It's my fault - It's simpler).Reads in a circle, like a snake eating it's tail.
i liike it. looks like some higher end street wear. cant wait to see what you'll do with cut and sew products

http://hypebeast.com/forums/apparel/215397#4366225

October 16, 2013 @ 07:58 AM
Kanedai

Post: 17

Join Date: Mar 2013

Location: United Kingdom



Just finished these as a prerelease to the SS'14 debut collection.
Japanese cotton blend.
October 16, 2013 @ 08:12 AM
Frank_

Post: 1222

Join Date: Jan 2009

i like the blues ^^^^^^ 

would buy if price point is good
October 16, 2013 @ 02:26 PM
HWYS - Joey

Post: 758

Join Date: Mar 2012

Thank you guys for the honest feedback. Talking to the local printer for a late fall drop.
More shit to come y'all.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

October 16, 2013 @ 04:08 PM
gxldstoresupply

Post: 74

Join Date: Mar 2013

ITS ABOUT GXLD STORE YA BITCH!!!!!!!!!!
http://gxldstoresupply.storenvy.com
October 16, 2013 @ 08:22 PM
Brigade

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Join Date: Jun 2013

Location: USA

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October 16, 2013 @ 09:55 PM
HWYS - Joey

Post: 758

Join Date: Mar 2012

Messed with the graphic a bit, what yall think?


www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

October 16, 2013 @ 10:54 PM
≈ nash ≈

Post: 109

Join Date: Mar 2013

Location: Pennsylvania

thanks for the feedback.

im gonna work on the back text a little bit in the next few days.
ill put up the "final" mockup once i get around to it.

Connected Goods // www.connectedgoods.bigcartel.com

October 16, 2013 @ 11:24 PM
messer

Post: 42

Join Date: Jul 2012

Good shit JR that design is looking good.

Was wondering if i could get some feedback on this. Before anyone asks seppuku is a form of suicide where a samurai would basically stab himself in the chest, and slice it open. This was considered an "honorable" suicide. 


thanks in advance 
October 17, 2013 @ 12:58 AM
HWYS - Joey

Post: 758

Join Date: Mar 2012

Messer - tnx for the feedback. I got a bit of cleaning up and it should be done.

As far as yours, I like the idea but I'm more about graphics, so I would have gone for some graphics about a person preforming the suicide. Maybe not crazy gore, but in a more honorable way.

Good luck b.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

October 17, 2013 @ 01:07 AM
HWYS - Joey

Post: 758

Join Date: Mar 2012

http://www.deviantart.com/art/Expected-Seppuku-163597332

Here's some inspiration Messer.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

October 17, 2013 @ 01:10 AM
kumasiii

Post: 144

Join Date: Dec 2012

Messed with the graphic a bit, what yall think?

lighten up on the image tracing
October 17, 2013 @ 01:20 AM
HWYS - Joey

Post: 758

Join Date: Mar 2012

Kumasiii - I definitely gotta clean it up but I don't want to lose the rawness of it. Definite image trace, I do own the original and even considered using it but it's got a lot of colors and I'm more about simpler clothing colors.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

October 17, 2013 @ 02:23 AM
kiran h

Post: 396

Join Date: Jan 2013

Location: 306

Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 



Fullmetal Alchemist inspired tee












let me know what you guys think. 

https://soundcloud.com/kiranh306 | https://soundcloud.com/queencitystoopkids | twitter: @_kiranh

October 17, 2013 @ 02:29 AM
mrteebonilla

Post: 5759

Join Date: Mar 2012

Location: 440/216

Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 








let me know what you guys think. 
like this one the best^

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October 17, 2013 @ 02:34 AM
street lights

Post: 616

Join Date: Oct 2012

Location: creepin'

Messer - tnx for the feedback. I got a bit of cleaning up and it should be done.


As far as yours, I like the idea but I'm more about graphics, so I would have gone for some graphics about a person preforming the suicide. Maybe not crazy gore, but in a more honorable way.


Good luck b.
Good shit JR that design is looking good.

Was wondering if i could get some feedback on this. Before anyone asks seppuku is a form of suicide where a samurai would basically stab himself in the chest, and slice it open. This was considered an "honorable" suicide. 


thanks in advance 
im already working on a design like this lol :/

i got nothing to do but shoot my mouth off - john 3:16

October 17, 2013 @ 02:40 AM
messer

Post: 42

Join Date: Jul 2012

uhh sorry. I don't know what to say tbh. 
October 17, 2013 @ 03:19 AM
reggendary

Post: 553

Join Date: Mar 2013

Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 



Fullmetal Alchemist inspired tee












let me know what you guys think. 
Ronin Division

Feeling like Bishop from Juice

October 17, 2013 @ 03:52 AM
Jegz

Post: 147

Join Date: Sep 2013

Location: VANCOUVER


We are based in Montreal.


SANS/COEUR is in french and it means 'heartless' (without/heart).


We play with the idea of contrast in every aspect of the brand. 

check-out our video lookbook and tell me what you think

http://vimeo.com/71557678

we got 3 t-shirts :



front and back : Truth Seekers



ABSENS HAERES NON ERIT which is Latin for "Absence does not make the heart grow fonder". Painting is the "Fruit Seller" by Vincenzo Campi.


C'est ma faute - C'est plus simple (It's my fault - It's simpler).Reads in a circle, like a snake eating it's tail.
Looks good - clean and simple. Just wondering what kind of blanks did u use for ur line?

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