Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Oct 16, 2013 @ 22:54
thanks for the feedback.

im gonna work on the back text a little bit in the next few days.
ill put up the "final" mockup once i get around to it.

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Oct 16, 2013 @ 23:24
Good shit JR that design is looking good.

Was wondering if i could get some feedback on this. Before anyone asks seppuku is a form of suicide where a samurai would basically stab himself in the chest, and slice it open. This was considered an "honorable" suicide. 


thanks in advance 
Oct 17, 2013 @ 00:58
Messer - tnx for the feedback. I got a bit of cleaning up and it should be done.

As far as yours, I like the idea but I'm more about graphics, so I would have gone for some graphics about a person preforming the suicide. Maybe not crazy gore, but in a more honorable way.

Good luck b.

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Oct 17, 2013 @ 01:07
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Expected-Seppuku-163597332

Here's some inspiration Messer.

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Oct 17, 2013 @ 01:10
Messed with the graphic a bit, what yall think?

lighten up on the image tracing
Oct 17, 2013 @ 01:20
Kumasiii - I definitely gotta clean it up but I don't want to lose the rawness of it. Definite image trace, I do own the original and even considered using it but it's got a lot of colors and I'm more about simpler clothing colors.

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Oct 17, 2013 @ 02:23
Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 



Fullmetal Alchemist inspired tee











let me know what you guys think. 

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Oct 17, 2013 @ 02:29
Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 





let me know what you guys think. 
like this one the best^

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Oct 17, 2013 @ 02:34
Messer - tnx for the feedback. I got a bit of cleaning up and it should be done.


As far as yours, I like the idea but I'm more about graphics, so I would have gone for some graphics about a person preforming the suicide. Maybe not crazy gore, but in a more honorable way.


Good luck b.
Good shit JR that design is looking good.

Was wondering if i could get some feedback on this. Before anyone asks seppuku is a form of suicide where a samurai would basically stab himself in the chest, and slice it open. This was considered an "honorable" suicide. 


thanks in advance 
im already working on a design like this lol :/

whoever down voting my shit is a fucking faggot that's jealous of everything about my life- Ronn_eL

Oct 17, 2013 @ 02:40
uhh sorry. I don't know what to say tbh. 
Oct 17, 2013 @ 03:19
Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 



Fullmetal Alchemist inspired tee











let me know what you guys think. 
Ronin Division

Feeling like Bishop from Juice

Oct 17, 2013 @ 03:52

We are based in Montreal.


SANS/COEUR is in french and it means 'heartless' (without/heart).


We play with the idea of contrast in every aspect of the brand. 

check-out our video lookbook and tell me what you think

http://vimeo.com/71557678

we got 3 t-shirts :



front and back : Truth Seekers



ABSENS HAERES NON ERIT which is Latin for "Absence does not make the heart grow fonder". Painting is the "Fruit Seller" by Vincenzo Campi.


C'est ma faute - C'est plus simple (It's my fault - It's simpler).Reads in a circle, like a snake eating it's tail.
Looks good - clean and simple. Just wondering what kind of blanks did u use for ur line?

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Oct 17, 2013 @ 03:57
uhh sorry. I don't know what to say tbh. 
haha don't gotta say anything bro, i respect you and your work, just do you.

whoever down voting my shit is a fucking faggot that's jealous of everything about my life- Ronn_eL

Oct 17, 2013 @ 06:03
Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 



Fullmetal Alchemist inspired tee











let me know what you guys think. 
Ronin Division
i was thinking the same thing, these are still coo thoe. Not a fan of the pyrex part on the back lol i just think its too played out

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Oct 17, 2013 @ 13:42




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Oct 17, 2013 @ 15:31
Good shit JR that design is looking good.

Was wondering if i could get some feedback on this. Before anyone asks seppuku is a form of suicide where a samurai would basically stab himself in the chest, and slice it open. This was considered an "honorable" suicide. 


thanks in advance 
i like it. a couple things tho:
-the kerning in "lonely" is a little close but it's cool the way it is.
-for a type face that's supposed to look hand drawn or whatever, its kinda weird that the duplicate letters look exactly the same, especially in sAD and AnD + sePPuku. if you go into illustrator and convert them to outlines, you should edit them a little to give them some sort of variance. just my opinion tho. keep it up! i'd cop for sure

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Oct 17, 2013 @ 16:32
Originally posted by Inactive User
uhh sorry. I don't know what to say tbh. 
haha don't gotta say anything bro, i respect you and your work, just do you.
yeah i just know how it is man 
Oct 17, 2013 @ 16:34
Good shit JR that design is looking good.

Was wondering if i could get some feedback on this. Before anyone asks seppuku is a form of suicide where a samurai would basically stab himself in the chest, and slice it open. This was considered an "honorable" suicide. 


thanks in advance 
i like it. a couple things tho:
-the kerning in "lonely" is a little close but it's cool the way it is.
-for a type face that's supposed to look hand drawn or whatever, its kinda weird that the duplicate letters look exactly the same, especially in sAD and AnD + sePPuku. if you go into illustrator and convert them to outlines, you should edit them a little to give them some sort of variance. just my opinion tho. keep it up! i'd cop for sure
thanks for the feedback im going to look into this 
Oct 17, 2013 @ 18:19
My new brand combining beachwear/streetwear fashion treads. It's called Cali Beach Clothing.

Link: http://calibeachclothing.com/

WInter Collection: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/598636091/cali-beach-clothing-winter-collection?ref=live
Oct 17, 2013 @ 18:44
My new brand combining beachwear/streetwear fashion treads. It's called Cali Beach Clothing.

Link: http://calibeachclothing.com/

WInter Collection: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/598636091/cali-beach-clothing-winter-collection?ref=live
death to any brands that have cali in them

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Oct 18, 2013 @ 02:21
My new brand combining beachwear/streetwear fashion treads. It's called Cali Beach Clothing.

Link: http://calibeachclothing.com/

WInter Collection: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/598636091/cali-beach-clothing-winter-collection?ref=live
death to any brands that have cali in them
Guess someone doesn't like California.
Oct 18, 2013 @ 03:39
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Check out my site www.nobodyspecialco.com. Thanks for your support and feedback. Looking to drop Winter stuff in November, stay tuned! 

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Oct 18, 2013 @ 04:03
anybody know any sweatshirts wholesale besides independent 
Oct 18, 2013 @ 04:14
ayo! we're in the process of making hand made baseball and hockey jerseys. I have graphic templates for them that i made. shoot me a PM and i'll send over the vectors. just trying to help out namean



anyway, need some feedback on these:

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and maybe this on a pocket tee??

http://www.thehiddencharacters.com

Oct 18, 2013 @ 04:29
Originally posted by Inactive User
ayo! we're in the process of making hand made baseball and hockey jerseys. I have graphic templates for them that i made. shoot me a PM and i'll send over the vectors. just trying to help out namean



anyway, need some feedback on these:

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and maybe this on a pocket tee??
I love the Bijuu shirts, I like the black one the most, but I don't know about the purple head on the sleeve though. let me know if you ever get these printed. I'm a fan of the sage of the sixth paths
Oct 18, 2013 @ 04:43
Originally posted by Inactive User
I love the Bijuu shirts, I like the black one the most, but I don't know about the purple head on the sleeve though. let me know if you ever get these printed. I'm a fan of the sage of the sixth paths
Thanks. and yea we're not putting the head on it. i made this mock up a while ago i forgot to take it out. Thanks for the feedback ! Im glad you know where its from ahah. i'll definitely let you know when i release them

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Oct 18, 2013 @ 07:40

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Oct 18, 2013 @ 07:42
I can appreciate the rinnegan eyes shirt aka the sage of the 6 paths/obito design but the whole under the neck line is kinda weak. Like in all honesty if you just did the eyes on the upper front chest and the eyes on the back with a phrase is might look iller. 

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Oct 18, 2013 @ 07:53
Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 



Fullmetal Alchemist inspired tee











let me know what you guys think. 
The name is sick. I like the back design of the 3rd shirt down and the white shirt design. I know you're a fan of Ronin and Dangeres but try to create your own lane. Not saying using the Asian/Japanese culture as an influence is bad, just think you need a little something extra. As far as designs go I've seen more dudes on the past couple pages who actually made product that looks worst then this so at least you're onto something. Just think you need to take a little more time in developing a brand instead of some "shirts to sell". That'll go along way. For example, that's what we did for Divided Minds. It was just "We should make a brand" and for the first year it was just a couple shirts each season. For the past year that hasn't been the case, but it's like we set ourselves behind by not being calculated and doing it right from the jump. I could see the first design your "logo" as a design on a hoody with a front placement. I would stay away from the name/number on the back of the shirt stee. Use that for an actual jersey or even 3/4 sleeve. If you need any help or advice feel free to shoot me a pm. Best of luck. 

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Oct 18, 2013 @ 08:24
throwing trendy font, asian language, and skulls around in a way that doesn't do it better than others who have already pioneered that aesthetic, to me, is desperate

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