Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Oct 16, 2013 @ 03:59
Oct 16, 2013 @ 04:10

Lorin for No Brand Logo

Oct 16, 2013 @ 04:45


On this design I got 3 ups and 2 downs. Now if anybody who thumb it down, can you give me some feedback as to why? I'm trying to put out solid shit and any help is appreciated.


I'm planning on making the graphic smaller and maybe using a different color combo.
the txt needs to be something slick and smaller
different font as well like a sloppy, handwritten looking font

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Oct 16, 2013 @ 04:58

We are based in Montreal.


SANS/COEUR is in french and it means 'heartless' (without/heart).


We play with the idea of contrast in every aspect of the brand. 

check-out our video lookbook and tell me what you think

http://vimeo.com/71557678

we got 3 t-shirts :



front and back : Truth Seekers



ABSENS HAERES NON ERIT which is Latin for "Absence does not make the heart grow fonder". Painting is the "Fruit Seller" by Vincenzo Campi.


C'est ma faute - C'est plus simple (It's my fault - It's simpler).Reads in a circle, like a snake eating it's tail.

designer at http://sans-coeur.com/ - http://sanscoeurmtl.tumblr.com

Oct 16, 2013 @ 05:40
sneak peek at the l/s we're releasing in the next month or two.
shoutout to my connect.

~

Honestly haven't liked most of the stuff you've posted so far however I see potential in this so I'll give you some crit that I think could strengthen the design.

One, the front graphic is probably the best part however I would make it smaller and have the arms extend longer, in addition, I think your logo needs to be much smaller, almost so that it is not very noticeable. I think this would better allow for the the image and correlated saying to do the work of the shirt rather than the brand name. I do like its placement though. As far as the text, I like where you're going however it sounds a bit forced and rigid in my opinion. If I were you I would try "SHOUTOUT MY CONNECT THOUGH" "SHOUTOUT MY CONNECT THO" "SHOUTOUT MY CONNECT DOE". I think any of those would allow for a more loose and potentially effortless cool look.

Just my two cents.
i vote for removing the word connected in the front, rest is fine

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Oct 16, 2013 @ 05:42

Late October 
if you haven't already had them made, i suggest you make the print on the hoodie bigger, just my opinion, other ppl might like it that way, idk
i like the first white tee with the Chinese letters, i remember u put this up waaay back. im not a fan of the rest

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Oct 16, 2013 @ 05:43

http://hypebeast.com/forums/apparel/221837

Oct 16, 2013 @ 05:44

We are based in Montreal.


SANS/COEUR is in french and it means 'heartless' (without/heart).


We play with the idea of contrast in every aspect of the brand. 

check-out our video lookbook and tell me what you think

http://vimeo.com/71557678

we got 3 t-shirts :



front and back : Truth Seekers



ABSENS HAERES NON ERIT which is Latin for "Absence does not make the heart grow fonder". Painting is the "Fruit Seller" by Vincenzo Campi.


C'est ma faute - C'est plus simple (It's my fault - It's simpler).Reads in a circle, like a snake eating it's tail.
i liike it. looks like some higher end street wear. cant wait to see what you'll do with cut and sew products

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Oct 16, 2013 @ 07:58


Just finished these as a prerelease to the SS'14 debut collection.
Japanese cotton blend.
Oct 16, 2013 @ 08:12
i like the blues ^^^^^^ 

would buy if price point is good
Oct 16, 2013 @ 14:26
Thank you guys for the honest feedback. Talking to the local printer for a late fall drop.
More shit to come y'all.

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Oct 16, 2013 @ 16:08
ITS ABOUT GXLD STORE YA BITCH!!!!!!!!!!
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Oct 16, 2013 @ 20:22
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Oct 16, 2013 @ 21:55
Messed with the graphic a bit, what yall think?


www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Oct 16, 2013 @ 22:54
thanks for the feedback.

im gonna work on the back text a little bit in the next few days.
ill put up the "final" mockup once i get around to it.

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Oct 16, 2013 @ 23:24
Good shit JR that design is looking good.

Was wondering if i could get some feedback on this. Before anyone asks seppuku is a form of suicide where a samurai would basically stab himself in the chest, and slice it open. This was considered an "honorable" suicide. 


thanks in advance 
Oct 17, 2013 @ 00:58
Messer - tnx for the feedback. I got a bit of cleaning up and it should be done.

As far as yours, I like the idea but I'm more about graphics, so I would have gone for some graphics about a person preforming the suicide. Maybe not crazy gore, but in a more honorable way.

Good luck b.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Oct 17, 2013 @ 01:07
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Expected-Seppuku-163597332

Here's some inspiration Messer.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Oct 17, 2013 @ 01:10
Messed with the graphic a bit, what yall think?

lighten up on the image tracing
Oct 17, 2013 @ 01:20
Kumasiii - I definitely gotta clean it up but I don't want to lose the rawness of it. Definite image trace, I do own the original and even considered using it but it's got a lot of colors and I'm more about simpler clothing colors.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Oct 17, 2013 @ 02:23
Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 



Fullmetal Alchemist inspired tee











let me know what you guys think. 

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Oct 17, 2013 @ 02:29
Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 





let me know what you guys think. 
like this one the best^

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Oct 17, 2013 @ 02:34
Messer - tnx for the feedback. I got a bit of cleaning up and it should be done.


As far as yours, I like the idea but I'm more about graphics, so I would have gone for some graphics about a person preforming the suicide. Maybe not crazy gore, but in a more honorable way.


Good luck b.
Good shit JR that design is looking good.

Was wondering if i could get some feedback on this. Before anyone asks seppuku is a form of suicide where a samurai would basically stab himself in the chest, and slice it open. This was considered an "honorable" suicide. 


thanks in advance 
im already working on a design like this lol :/

whoever down voting my shit is a fucking faggot that's jealous of everything about my life- Ronn_eL

Oct 17, 2013 @ 02:40
uhh sorry. I don't know what to say tbh. 
Oct 17, 2013 @ 03:19
Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 



Fullmetal Alchemist inspired tee











let me know what you guys think. 
Ronin Division

Feeling like Bishop from Juice

Oct 17, 2013 @ 03:52

We are based in Montreal.


SANS/COEUR is in french and it means 'heartless' (without/heart).


We play with the idea of contrast in every aspect of the brand. 

check-out our video lookbook and tell me what you think

http://vimeo.com/71557678

we got 3 t-shirts :



front and back : Truth Seekers



ABSENS HAERES NON ERIT which is Latin for "Absence does not make the heart grow fonder". Painting is the "Fruit Seller" by Vincenzo Campi.


C'est ma faute - C'est plus simple (It's my fault - It's simpler).Reads in a circle, like a snake eating it's tail.
Looks good - clean and simple. Just wondering what kind of blanks did u use for ur line?

www.fadebygrey.com

Oct 17, 2013 @ 03:57
uhh sorry. I don't know what to say tbh. 
haha don't gotta say anything bro, i respect you and your work, just do you.

whoever down voting my shit is a fucking faggot that's jealous of everything about my life- Ronn_eL

Oct 17, 2013 @ 06:03
Raiden Brand 

just a couple designs I made on illustrator, I want some feedback on them and I wanna know if anyone would buy these if I got some shirts/hoodies printed. My apologies for the shitty quality

This is one of the logos



Main design, may get this printed on baseball jerseys or hoodies if anyone's interested, but for now this will probably just be on tees. 



Fullmetal Alchemist inspired tee











let me know what you guys think. 
Ronin Division
i was thinking the same thing, these are still coo thoe. Not a fan of the pyrex part on the back lol i just think its too played out

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Oct 17, 2013 @ 13:42




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Oct 17, 2013 @ 15:31
Good shit JR that design is looking good.

Was wondering if i could get some feedback on this. Before anyone asks seppuku is a form of suicide where a samurai would basically stab himself in the chest, and slice it open. This was considered an "honorable" suicide. 


thanks in advance 
i like it. a couple things tho:
-the kerning in "lonely" is a little close but it's cool the way it is.
-for a type face that's supposed to look hand drawn or whatever, its kinda weird that the duplicate letters look exactly the same, especially in sAD and AnD + sePPuku. if you go into illustrator and convert them to outlines, you should edit them a little to give them some sort of variance. just my opinion tho. keep it up! i'd cop for sure

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