If you are still out for feedback, let me give you my thoughts on what you've shown us:Here are my clothing lines again! Simple, but stylish.
lademivie.tumblr.comI didn't even hear of them till now, but ok thanks.UPDATED COLLECTION ONE. Thoughts.Designs are pretty similar to DYNT. Still looks nice though
http://lademivie.tumblr.com/image/56184139036 [ZOOMABLE IMAGE]
*Half Life is a new clothing brand promoting the idea of cheap luxury. We view this as giving out our best products at flat rate prices, no over charging, who would pay hundreds for basic clothing? Ask about any concepts behind the brand, or leave any feedback positive/negative, we build off the people, not the money.*
"Half Life is a new clothing brand promoting the idea of cheap luxury. We view this as giving out our best products at flat rate prices, no over charging, who would pay hundreds for basic clothing?"
I think you are struggling to define a concept. You should not use the words "cheap" and "luxury" together, specially when a few lines down you say that your pieces are "basic clothing".
Think about someone who's interested in buying cheap clothes and will try to pick a nice brand in google, instagram or tumblr whatever. If the search term is "cheap clothes", the user will probably avoid or get suspicious about the results with the word "luxury". Same thing goes for the opposite way, as luxury audience will run away from the word CHEAP like a devil from the cross. If you are very passionate about this controversial concept i think you can try better terms (i.e. Affordable Excellence), or simply drop it.
It took me a few seconds to get the right brand name (half life or lademivie, and even though i loved the tye dye hoodies, LADEMIVIE is a lot stronger than HALF LIFE. Just do a google experience. You will find a sea of half life results coming from the classic 1st person shooting game, and by adding the word "clothing" you will find that there is already another active brand with this name - https://www.facebook.com/thehalflifeclothing / http://thehalflifeclothing.bigcartel.com/
You can still use HALF LIFE in the designs but if i were you i would try to make LADEMIVIE the frontline brand name.
The tye-dye collection is gold!
Wish you all the best.