whether you like it or not, he asked for suggestions. Do not be a hindrance in this persons progress, please, and give him some constructive feedback. Positive or negative.
Wanted some feed back on this design, wanted to do a team l/s but I thought I might try something a little different.
How do y'all think it looks on white? The original image, red/white on black really pops but im not to sure about the inverted version on white.
is the no.91 over done?
also if any one knows where I can find some decent templates for shirts/crews please pm me.
Damn, I guess no one on hypebeast likes putting some kind of effort in constructive critism now. Shit is basically becoming an advertising board for niggas. Anywho, just to go into this design, I've seen something sort of similar to this. Go to this link and you'll see it:
Now this brand that had something that reminded me of your design. From a quick glance it looks like snake skin. Only difference is you let it pop out compared to them and you didn't use a bunch of random color combos on your shit. The design isn't bad, it's certainly is overdone if I found someone else that did it as well. I dont know why your using that image behind the text, right now it my sort of fits since it's black and white, but the image has a abstract elements involved within itself so you have to be very careful with that. Now, your word choice is a bit wierd, but since I'm assuming your just practicing on the design i'll let that shit slide, but I dont know what that shit means. Now to get off from this randomness, I suggest if your trying to do this kind of jersey you should try to make it look as stylish as you can. Complimentary colors could work out great if your were experimenting with colors. but you shouldn't make them too bright. If your original was red and white, you could have done a low toned red with a black stroke over it to make that sit out on the white in the back. If you could I would copy this kind of layout:
Well I guess that could be a template. I dont know if you wanted a baby steps template or something, but shit...that shit should be good enough. Use probably 3 or 4 colors, for example, white, light grey, and black. Now using that sort of layout should be beneficial but since your doing a long sleeve that's where your creativity needs to come in. Now you can make up some stripes that have the image you choose and put that image underneath the text in order to make it fit in with the lettering. make the stripes a decent size that fits with the lettering, be sure not to make it so big. If you do that I think it will look much better and it may look like something has been done everywhere on the shirt. But that's just my opinion, keep expirmenting, and don't make it look too simple as you did on here. I'm cutting you slack since it looks like a prototype of an idea. It looks like your trying to approach a jersey design in a different manner to be original but your having a lot of trouble right now. Anyway good luck, hope you got something out that.