Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Jul 15, 2013 @ 18:29
Originally posted by Inactive User
My brand released 6 new items and a new website. Check it out and let me know what you think:
http://www.distantlight.co
http://www.distantlight.co
 


Really digging the Lightning Bolt Mascot!

effulgencesf.com

Jul 15, 2013 @ 18:32
We just launched our first collection this morning.

Here's a look at what we are offering.







You can check out our lookbook and read what our brand is all about @ http://prevailco.com/

Thank you guys
Jul 15, 2013 @ 19:15
designs look WAAAY too simp. 
Like, not even half-assed simp, MS PAINT SIMPLE. You're charging $60 for a circle with text. That's it??

Dope video structure none-the-less.

nostalgic 64 - shinobi steelo

Jul 15, 2013 @ 19:57
its actually chinese my dude probably should have said that but …冒牌者 this is it rite here. on "google translate" it means pretender, i feel as though translate is sometimes wrong so i will verify it with a friend that lives there at the moment. the reason for the Chinese writing for 1 it looks way better than writing out pretender (opinion) and i throughout the past 2 years have made friends and contacts with people that live there building an eBay electronics "business or store" its the only source of my money i had ever really had so it has a big impact on my life.
(at where it says (ace) or with those weird symbols is where i pasted the Chinese for some reason its not letting it be viewed)

You do know that Chinese and Japanese use the same characters right? And you do know that MANY Chinese lexicons are present in Japanese too, right? Listen I'm not trying to be overly critical I'm just saying that the structure of the Kanji looks Japanese. But hey it is Chinese as you say it just seems like it doesn't need to be there.
alright soo you obviously have your shit together when it comes to Chinese and Japanese writing,i think i might just stay away from other languages writing since you're the 3rd person now to ask why it is even there to begin with. I'm thinking it could be more straight forward or executed better, instead of hiding the true meaning in back of a language that nobody really knows. thank you for your input though it kinda does seem like it was just placed there in all but just ignorance.

www.theheatedenvironment.com

Jul 15, 2013 @ 20:49




Everything available now in the online shop http://shop.theundg.net   Twitter.com/theundg
http://shop.theundg.net/
Jul 15, 2013 @ 20:53
Double post
Jul 15, 2013 @ 21:48
Originally posted by Inactive User
THIS IS MY LINE SHION WE WILL RESTOCK ON SOME OF THIS ITEMS SOON

Really love this, do you have a website I can buy some clothes off of?
Jul 15, 2013 @ 22:04
Please check out our online shop. Would really like to hear how you guys feel about the designs. Also any questions about the brand will be answered. Thanks hope you guys seem something you like. 


http://www.leaderofcoolmoons.com/
Jul 15, 2013 @ 22:14












Check out our newest t-shirts added to our online shop. The t-shirts are perfect for the summer season and are made from 100% cotton. Check the full collection from our online store

SWGNT.com 
Jul 15, 2013 @ 22:25
Check out our newest t-shirts added to our online shop. The t-shirts are perfect for the summer season and are made from 100% cotton. Check the full collection from our online store

SWGNT.com 
hate your band name with a burning passion but some of these are p cool
Jul 15, 2013 @ 22:45
Hey Everyone im the owner of Cake Clothing out in Boise idaho!!! ive been trying to push my brand for a year now and im only 16 years old can everyone check out my new shirts maybe pick one up too! also it would be cool to get some feedback on the brand! Thanks

www.CaliforniaAndKings.com
Jul 15, 2013 @ 22:52

i really have doubt about (pistol grip) tbh just update so you could see art better on (wolf in sheep skin) critique me though im open to any comments 
I dig this, is it available yet? Id love to put it up on a page. whats your email?

http://instagram.com/strictlystreet https://twitter.com/strictlyxstreet

Jul 15, 2013 @ 22:58
Originally posted by Inactive User
THIS IS MY LINE SHION WE WILL RESTOCK ON SOME OF THIS ITEMS SOON
i fuck with this, love the art. email me asap strictlystreet13@yahoo.com

http://instagram.com/strictlystreet https://twitter.com/strictlyxstreet

Jul 15, 2013 @ 23:12
My page Strictly Street is having a instagram giveaway with @timelessthrills make sure to check it out.

http://instagram.com/strictlystreet

Inquiries for features:

strictlystreet13@yahoo.com

http://instagram.com/strictlystreet https://twitter.com/strictlyxstreet

Jul 15, 2013 @ 23:14



                                                         Summer Collection 2013 Now available
                                                             
                                                                           Abe New York
                                                                     www.abenewyork.com
Jul 16, 2013 @ 01:45
Did a lookbook video for our summer range. Shot and edited by me. Its my second video ever so I got lots of improvement.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=awcIvy8F16U

The whole collection is at www.sinkorswimbrand.com

Sink or Swim Brand / www.sinkorswimbrand.com / Holiday 15 out now

Jul 16, 2013 @ 04:12
Originally posted by Inactive User
THIS IS MY LINE SHION WE WILL RESTOCK ON SOME OF THIS ITEMS SOON
that Black Ghost hoodie is a must have, very nice work man

Feeling like Bishop from Juice

Jul 16, 2013 @ 06:23
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Jul 16, 2013 @ 08:54
How do I post pics from my Iphone?? Help please would really like to upload some pics for you guys. Thanks.
Jul 16, 2013 @ 15:29
Originally posted by Inactive User
THIS IS MY LINE SHION WE WILL RESTOCK ON SOME OF THIS ITEMS SOON
Cool graphics and all but that logo is a mess. A logo needs to be visible and read no matter what size it is. You shrink that down and its going to look just like a blob. Maybe focus on refining the lines a bit more or enclosing it in a circle to give it more of a solid look. Either way the shirts look cool man!
Jul 16, 2013 @ 17:57
Originally posted by Inactive User
Catch the All-New 6 & custom 7 Panel this Friday 7/12.
www.foregroundclothing.com

 I'll try and give a little constructive criticism of what I think about this brand. Mainly based on the website and the hats you guys have put out so far for people. At first glance the two hats look okay, which they really are just okay. I must say, from what you guys posted on here with these two shots, I see how nice the quality of that camera is, some fancy shit going on there. However, The background shots look misplaced, random, and awkward. They don't look like they belong or have anything to do with your products. Some of your designs are a bit random, in this case lets talk about the rising crown hat. I understand your message behind this one, and you do a good job constructing it to follow through within the design, but my gripe with this one is the color combination you guys decided to go with. For me, that pink does not seem to stand out well on the hat, and you guys should have tried to make that brain be more obvious to looking like a brain, but it's good enough. Not only the color combination but to name the hat rising crown and to represent the brain as a crown is a bit out of place, but it's just a gripe I'm having with it, I feel it doesn't seem to fit. Then, The second hat, The Seventh Crown, seems to be just another standard hat with the branding logo on it in order to get your name out there, which is fine however I've seen that side ways diamond shape in so many other logos and I think you really could of done better and did something truly more original. Then I don't know the basis of why calling it the seventh crown either? I wouldn't fuck with those colors either but that's just personal preference. I would probably never wear the first hat, but the second would look decent if I could find something that goes well with it. On a scale form 1-10 I'd give your first hat a 4 and your second a 5. I'm really not a big fan of the color combo you are doing and the hats seem to just have slapped on designs. 

 Your website has some nice looking little models.Those girls look cute as fuck, but your designs look sort of half assed. I'm not going to go into full detail with your shirts, but my overall summary is try to put a little more  originality into it, glad each product has a meaning behind and a simple one everyone could understand and fuck with, but try to make these designs a little more original. They look a bit generic right now, sort of like something you can just buy randomly at wal-mart or something. Also work on your color scheme. If you can try to experiment with contrast for your designs and see how that will work out for you. I'll give you credit for putting actual tags on your products although, and again as I stated before, I'm not a fan of the color you used and also the words you chose like 'beastmode" and "beastingit" is a joke in my eyes. This ain't xbox live, we ain't playing call of duty up in here. Your sweatpants remind me of some 80s b-boy gear, but again your designs are good but only if you want them to belong at Walmart or Zoomies. I suggest you take time off and think of designs that appeal to the group of people you are trying to sell it to. So if you want some wal-mart ass designs go make the best possible wal-mart looking designs you can. So I hope this was helpful and helped you realized what you may need help on and what you don't. Just my opinion and of course I wish your brand the best and keep doing what you do.
Thank you for taking the time to share with us about your ideas & thoughts. We really appreciate well-written critics such as this one. Although we don't completely agree with everything mentioned above, but overall it definitely helps us focus on certain areas that will help strengthen our branding. Bravo~

Foreground® - Rise Independently. www.foregroundofficial.com

Jul 16, 2013 @ 20:22
How do I post pics from my Iphone?? Help please would really like to upload some pics for you guys. Thanks.
Get photobucket app and upload em there, then copy the image url and paste the link to the little Image button 

- System

Jul 16, 2013 @ 21:29


SSummer 2013 available now.  http://shop.theundg.net/
Jul 16, 2013 @ 21:34






Limited handmade Summer Collection By Abe New York is now available.

http://www.abenewyork.com/

Let us know what you think!

Contact info@abenewyork.com for inquiries
Jul 17, 2013 @ 02:33
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Thanks for the feedback, that really means alot.

Your presentation is really extremely clean, it remind me allot of one of my favorite brands i love ugly. Your brand looks more on the high end side high end of street wear and i really like how professional it is presented, and i'm feeling the name you chose. The site also matches the look you are portraying from these pictures, the clothing is also reasonably priced and i see you already have retailers. However i'm not the biggest fan of the pocket shirts, i really do think pattern pocket shirts are played out but adding a different material on it other than just cotton makes it allot more interesting. And its also a plus that you have just about every social media available. I love how its not just another t shirt brand but a complete lifestyle brand. I would write allot more about your brand but i don't think you really need it, your doing a better job than most people on here including us. I can really see your vision and what your brands about. I really do believe you guys will make it. Red Crown is already established now its just a race to the top, good luck to all of you.

- Project Nibiru

http://projectnibiru.bigcartel.com Also Follow us on Instragram & Twitter @ projectnibiru

Jul 17, 2013 @ 07:33

THUMPS UP IF YOU THINK THIS A GO
Jul 17, 2013 @ 08:29
Originally posted by Inactive User

THUMPS UP IF YOU THINK THIS A GO
It's a little bit too much for me. But I don't know, someone else might like it.
Jul 17, 2013 @ 08:43
Originally posted by Inactive User

THUMPS UP IF YOU THINK THIS A GO
It's a little bit too much for me. But I don't know, someone else might like it.
THANK YOU MAYBE IF YOU SEE IT IN PERSON IT WILL CHANGE YOUR OPINION ABOUT
Jul 17, 2013 @ 09:45
like logo! so great!  http://www.pandawill.com/consumer-electronics-c248/3d-glasses.html
Jul 17, 2013 @ 16:45






Limited handmade Summer Collection By Abe New York is now available.

http://www.abenewyork.com/

Let us know what you think!

Contact info@abenewyork.com for inquiries
i like the clothes themselves, but why are you charging $65 dollars for a tank when no one knows who you guys are?

Feeling like Bishop from Juice

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