Working on some ideas for a brand called, "The Hunt Season". The slogan used would be "Prowl The Wildlife". We are all about having fun, drinking, breaking shit and getting some pus.. wait, prey, let's call it prey. Anyways here are some ideas. Let us know what ya'll think. If you wanna thumb it down, go for it, but we would rather have a discussion as to why you don't like 'em, so we can learn/adapt/change if needed.
This is our "Hunters' Club" tee.
This is our "Family Crest" tee.
This is one of our logo tees - "Mountain View".
This is our "Grammar Class" Tee. It reads many different variations of "Prey On The Weak".
Um....this brand...seems to be just ok. You got some good things going on and some bad things going on. First off, the bad things. I'm going to give you a quick lecture on your meaning. I believe there are other brands that have this sort of fun lifestyle, breaking shit, getting pussy or prey kind of meaning you guys said. In my opinion it's a bit wierd to make a brand then you actually put out your shit then people are going to be calling you a carbon copy of some other brands. To go on with brands that have similar to the same kinds of meanings as you guys are Livevil and Primitive. Here's an article you guys can read about the first one http://www.daily49er.com/opinion/livevil-clothing-company-nope-just-profiteering-vandals-1.2682540#.Uco6d1deGf0. Second thing, (which is the good thing I guess) your designs are just ok as well, nothing to bring home to mom ya know. The Family crest tee is ok, nothing else I can really say, its a crest. The mountain view tee is bit wierd, but it's ok. Now the two I dont like are the Hunter Club tee and the Grammer Class Tee. Now to begin with the Hunter Club tee, its a bit confusing to me. Mainly because of the font, since I'm a fucking idiot, I'm not going to be able to tell that "n" in Hunt from an "r". And since I'm an idiot there are plenty more idiots out there. Then having the logo right near it looking as if it's a period or something seems wierdly laid out. You can get more creative with that shit, try to use that font they used for the movie drive, think that will be beast, or find something with a similar touch. Now the Grammer Class tee, I see what you guys are trying to do, some cute shit by the way, but make it clear. If you guys want to make this chalkboard effect you're going to need to make it look more legit and the way I see it the text seems to be squished up like the words dont complete themself yet they start on the next line. Make it look like it's actually written on a chalkboard. For this I reccommend actually using handwriting to make it look more legit. Yes it may not come out clean but doing this will give it that effect. Other than that, i guess try to do something a bit different to the meaning of the brand, give it your own twist instead of making it sound like some kind of white boy, odd future kind of shit, unless you guys want that, I dont know. Other than that good luck with your surfer brand...thing.