Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Jun 14, 2013 @ 04:05
matter of opinion. whats wrong with it?
dude it just looks ridiculous, its poorly drawn, sloppy looking, the colors are absurd and the designs are stupid and childish, did you make this shit in paint
i like the top one, shit is funny. but if youre talking about "poorly drawn/sloppy looking" ......
Jun 14, 2013 @ 04:35
matter of opinion. whats wrong with it?
dude it just looks ridiculous, its poorly drawn, sloppy looking, the colors are absurd and the designs are stupid and childish, did you make this shit in paint
ill agree the 2nd one looks real sloppy and i plan to redo that one, but other than that thats just my style of art, i know im not the best drawer in the world so i embrace it, use it to my advantage of art. and as you can see my stuff is not for everyone, and i know that, but im still gonna do things the way i want. I dont want to be a BLVCK SCALE, or a louis vuttion, i want fucked up designs , intresting shit, colors and what not. Thats just my brand.
Jun 14, 2013 @ 04:37
dude it just looks ridiculous, its poorly drawn, sloppy looking, the colors are absurd and the designs are stupid and childish, did you make this shit in paint
i like the top one, shit is funny. but if youre talking about "poorly drawn/sloppy looking" ......
exatly Dertbags tyler the creator collab tee was drawn "shitty" too

Jun 14, 2013 @ 04:41

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Lookbook photos are cool,
Cant figure out exactly what it is but something looks weird,
Maybe faces are too bright and pop off too much, compared to the clothing.

This shot^^
had sooooooooooo much more potential
too much shadows on her face, neck and shoulders,
tree is brighter than her and she doesn't seem committed to pose.
Thanks for the feedback. We will keep that in mind for our future editing.:]

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Jun 14, 2013 @ 05:24
i like the top one, shit is funny. but if youre talking about "poorly drawn/sloppy looking" ......
exatly Dertbags tyler the creator collab tee was drawn "shitty" too

yes, it's drawn "badly" but it still looks good. Diggers is drawn "badly" and looks bad.
Jun 14, 2013 @ 05:59
i like the top one, shit is funny. but if youre talking about "poorly drawn/sloppy looking" ......
exatly Dertbags tyler the creator collab tee was drawn "shitty" too

Just keep on developing your skills...you got all summer bro.

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Jun 14, 2013 @ 06:27
ok cool, we really wanna see how the yellow/black one would look. If it was a perfect world I would do both. Seeing that I have to pick one. Would you rather the black one over the white one? Or the white one is your favorite. Idk its so confusing. I just want the people to make the decision...


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Jun 14, 2013 @ 07:41
dude it just looks ridiculous, its poorly drawn, sloppy looking, the colors are absurd and the designs are stupid and childish, did you make this shit in paint
i like the top one, shit is funny. but if youre talking about "poorly drawn/sloppy looking" ......
minimalism and just plain shitty is completely different, you have no clue what you are talking about

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Jun 14, 2013 @ 14:20
ok cool, we really wanna see how the yellow/black one would look. If it was a perfect world I would do both. Seeing that I have to pick one. Would you rather the black one over the white one? Or the white one is your favorite. Idk its so confusing. I just want the people to make the decision...

i like the white better

Feeling like Bishop from Juice

Jun 14, 2013 @ 18:42
ok cool, we really wanna see how the yellow/black one would look. If it was a perfect world I would do both. Seeing that I have to pick one. Would you rather the black one over the white one? Or the white one is your favorite. Idk its so confusing. I just want the people to make the decision...

I fuck with white more than the black, but then again 85% of the shirts in my closet are white, so that may just be my personal preference.

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Jun 14, 2013 @ 20:17
simple teeLS shirtok cool, we really wanna see how the yellow/black one would look. If it was a perfect world I would do both. Seeing that I have to pick one. Would you rather the black one over the white one? Or the white one is your favorite. Idk its so confusing. I just want the people to make the decision...

i like the white better
i guess i'll do it like this. First color to get to 3 wins. As corny as that sounds its the best way to do it. You guys decide...Yellow-1        White-2             Black- 1
This is info I have so far from twitter too. Lowkey I like the white one too but I dont count lol

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Jun 14, 2013 @ 20:21
simple teeLS shirtok cool, we really wanna see how the yellow/black one would look. If it was a perfect world I would do both. Seeing that I have to pick one. Would you rather the black one over the white one? Or the white one is your favorite. Idk its so confusing. I just want the people to make the decision...

I fuck with white more than the black, but then again 85% of the shirts in my closet are white, so that may just be my personal preference.
so ok white is getting alot of love, i like the white one too. One more like for the white and we'll re-release that one sometime soon. You guys can throw out a new colorway you think would be nice too

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Jun 14, 2013 @ 21:20

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Jun 14, 2013 @ 21:28
Hey guys I currently have my own website with my own line.  Let me know what you guys think thanks!
http://www.crosscollarapparel.com/ 

Simplicity.

Jun 14, 2013 @ 21:37
(Invalid img)Tell me what you think...

Simplicity.

Jun 14, 2013 @ 22:43
New to hypebeast and just found out about this thread. I recently released my second drop for my brand, The MSTRPLAN, and would love to get some feedback. Feel free to check the store and website and let me know what you guys think, and what I can improve on. Thanks!
-MSTRMIND
http://www.themstrplan.com 
http://www.store.themstrplan.com 



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Thanks!

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Jun 14, 2013 @ 22:45
hey check this brand called VNDLSM from uk what do think about this tee i think its a bit sick ..
http://www.vndlsm.co.uk/product/bacon-gang-x-vndlsm
Jun 15, 2013 @ 02:27
No set date yet
Jun 15, 2013 @ 05:34
No set date yetI would change the sailor jerry one a little more or do the same concept but reference a different design. The redrawn tittays look weird. 
Jun 15, 2013 @ 06:58
Yea I just noticed for that design that is a old version I reworked the design since that stage
Jun 15, 2013 @ 15:10
No set date yet
requesting close up of 3rd/4th tee
Jun 15, 2013 @ 15:34
No set date yet
requesting close up of 3rd/4th tee
*Cosigns Request*

- System

Jun 15, 2013 @ 16:04
Originally posted by Inactive User
exacly
Exacly dude haha

Inactive User

Jun 15, 2013 @ 20:49
Originally posted by Inactive User
I think I saw you guys on Instagram, and if I'm not mistake you're from SF right? I was wondering how has selling your shirts at 32$ been going for you, or is that just an online store thing?
Jun 15, 2013 @ 21:19
  
what you guys think? 

ps: does anyone have a link to some quality templates? 
Jun 16, 2013 @ 01:27
10character

- System

Jun 16, 2013 @ 07:39
(Invalid img)Sample for a brand that im starting, minor adjustments need to be done to the eyelets im looking for lots of feedback on what you think so far 

www.theheatedenvironment.com

Jun 16, 2013 @ 08:09
(Invalid img)Sample for a brand that im starting, minor adjustments need to be done to the eyelets im looking for lots of feedback on what you think so far 
part of me thinks that the religious shit is played out but i like the colors on this hat

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Jun 16, 2013 @ 10:13
Missed No Limit Records and Hypnotize Minds 
Jun 16, 2013 @ 13:37
(Invalid img)Sample for a brand that im starting, minor adjustments need to be done to the eyelets im looking for lots of feedback on what you think so far 
no doubt im gonna buy this but the eyelets are way far apart
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