Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Apr 15, 2013 @ 17:58




 WOLVES DEN SPRING 13 AVAILABLE NOW

http://shop.wdnation.com/ 
Way too much going on in the first two tbh. I like the last one though.

jaemz.tumblr.com // @ja.emz

Apr 15, 2013 @ 19:17
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www.AboveRoyaltyClothing.com

Apr 15, 2013 @ 21:27
I mean in all honesty I wouldn't be able to tell your crown logo from the other 100 brands out there with crown designs. So you're saying you do more than crown designs, but I just looked at your website and it's all the same crown designs and you posted that line sheet with your Spring 13 release. To me if I have had my brand since 2010 I'd be doing a lot more than just the same design over and over again. Have to get original, switch it up from just normal tees and hoodies, how many crowns have you put on different shirts over the past 3 years? You must be running out of color options. Aside from the bashing, I will say the subtle branding with the crown over the particular sizes on the inside of your shirts is way iller than any of your designs. Also, why not just put your website under the sizes instead of your facebook url. That kills the little bit of originality you had with that execution.

 


http://thedividedminds.com/

Apr 15, 2013 @ 22:15
Coming Soon!!!! Colors Black.Blue.Red.

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Apr 15, 2013 @ 23:04
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www.AboveRoyaltyClothing.com

Apr 16, 2013 @ 00:57
The finishings are some of the most important aspects of a brand. People may rip up hang tags but visual impact is there. Then you get weirdos like me who collect tags or take photos of logos they like (i like to blame 4 yrs of design school)

As far as breaking typographic rules, i feel like if it has a conceptual purpose then do it! but there is a huge difference between doing something because it was a uninformed decision  and a conceptual strategy. That applies to art and design right??

@joey1320 i dont think your tags are awful but they could use some work. Try lowering the size of the font, its pushing up against the sides of the border and it creates a bit of visual tension. The font is okay just dont stretch type not because its some kind of rule but because its more of a respect thing to designer. (its like cropping an artists work in a exhibition brochure). Also if you want to create more visual significance to certain set of words i would use a thicker more condensed weight. I also think you should get rid of the border it kind of contains what your saying. As far as the actual text i don't have much to say considering im not a copywriter
hope this helps! 
Apr 16, 2013 @ 04:37
We just did a light weight release at www.badnewsco.com. Check us out and tell me what you guys think!

Apr 16, 2013 @ 05:24
Originally posted by Inactive User
We just did a light weight release at www.badnewsco.com. Check us out and tell me what you guys think!

I really like the shirt without the front print =(
Apr 16, 2013 @ 08:53
Originally posted by Inactive User
We just did a light weight release at www.badnewsco.com. Check us out and tell me what you guys think!

yea it would look better witout the design on the front
Apr 16, 2013 @ 09:47
Some preview of our upcoming summer drop, "Fresh snapback" / "Dreamteam snapback" / "camp caps" / "Oxford shirt" / "Smooth pocket tee"
We are Lucidbrand a young brand based in Stockholm, Sweden
We are working on a new website/store so its not updated, I have attached a screenshoot from our new website.
It's just the design, (The Photos are only examples we do not own them!)
Our goal with this season is to creat new and creative products from what we think is verry classic streetwear silhouettes like Pocket T-shirts and Oxford shirts.The name of the collection is : NEW CLASSICS by Lucidbrand
Feel free to give us feedback, we need to hear it!
/Erik

www.lucidbrand.se

Apr 16, 2013 @ 13:44
not to be a debby downer, but if you think any of those designs are "new" or "creative".....
Apr 16, 2013 @ 14:33
Originally posted by Inactive User
We just did a light weight release at www.badnewsco.com. Check us out and tell me what you guys think!
I really like the shirt without the front print =(
Thanks for the feedback! We are experimenting with design ideas. We have another shipment coming in that will have no prints on them =)
Apr 16, 2013 @ 14:51
Coming Soon!!!! Colors Black.Blue.Red.

gxldstoresupply.storenvy.com
gxldstoresupply.storenvy.com
gxldstoresupply.storenvy.com
$upport $avage 99…..
thats such a blatant copy of the 'been trill' logo..all of your shit is straight copied from pyrex
Apr 16, 2013 @ 16:53
hey whats up everybody?! I'm new on here. Well not new to hypebeast but just joined as a member for a specific purpose. I'm trying to start a new brand and I'm looking for a creative partner to do so with. I live in Cali, southern ca, costa mesa to be exact. Which is about 30 miles south of LA. Im hoping there are some people on here that are in my area that would like to help/be my partner in starting a brand. I have been doing art since a young kid, have taken almost every art/design class in college, which Im currently going back to finish while working.I've had a passion for street wear since i was young and its time to turn it into a reality.I actually have some experience working with different artist, printing tee, etc. Enough of that, I dont have to ask if your passionate about street wear or else you wouldnt be on here. Ideal person;very creative and open minded, has some art/graphic design experience(photoshop, illustrator)a plus to help design for print,has s somewhat good understanding of current streetwear trends, willing to spend tons of there free time building the brand. If you have extra money to put towards production cost would also be a plus but not a must. I want a partner I can bounce ideas off of, and collab in the creative process together. Some of my fav brands( HUF, supreme, Mishka, crooks &castles, the hundreds,stussy of course, diamond, reason, 10deep, undftd, obey) If you live in the area and your 100 percent down for committing to putting the energy in to start a brand, please reply!
Apr 16, 2013 @ 19:34
Coming Soon!!!! Colors Black.Blue.Red.

gxldstoresupply.storenvy.com
gxldstoresupply.storenvy.com
gxldstoresupply.storenvy.com
$upport $avage 99…..
thats such a blatant copy of the 'been trill' logo..all of your shit is straight copied from pyrex
lol cool...dats wssp..
Apr 16, 2013 @ 19:38
Coming Soon!!!! Colors Black.Blue.Red.

gxldstoresupply.storenvy.com
gxldstoresupply.storenvy.com
gxldstoresupply.storenvy.com
$upport $avage 99…..
thats such a blatant copy of the 'been trill' logo..all of your shit is straight copied from pyrex
wait, why do you think im copying been trill and Pyrex? they could be copying me.....o.0
Apr 16, 2013 @ 20:17



[FREE GIVEAWAY]
swefn will release the "3 Nails" T-shirts on this Saturday the April 20th. One winner will get one FREE "3 Nails" T-shirt. 

[RULES]
***Fulfill all three rules by April 20th, 2013 to enter for this giveaway***
1. "Like" swefn’s facebook page. (If you already did, you don't have to do it again) 
2. "Like" this post.
3. Leave a "comment" what you think about this T-shirt.

The winners will be announced on the day of release April, 20th 2013

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swefn

Apr 16, 2013 @ 20:56
Originally posted by Inactive User
We just did a light weight release at www.badnewsco.com. Check us out and tell me what you guys think!

the python pattern makes the text unreadable for me.

It's just all over the place, looking like it's supposed to match, but doesn't.

hot water

Apr 16, 2013 @ 20:57



[FREE GIVEAWAY]
swefn will release the "3 Nails" T-shirts on this Saturday the April 20th. One winner will get one FREE "3 Nails" T-shirt. 

[RULES]
***Fulfill all three rules by April 20th, 2013 to enter for this giveaway***
1. "Like" swefn’s facebook page. (If you already did, you don't have to do it again) 
2. "Like" this post.
3. Leave a "comment" what you think about this T-shirt.

The winners will be announced on the day of release April, 20th 2013

www.facebook.com/swefn
I take it you're a religious person?

hot water

Apr 16, 2013 @ 21:02
Originally posted by Inactive User
We just did a light weight release at www.badnewsco.com. Check us out and tell me what you guys think!


good.

al dente company // aldenteco.com

Inactive User

Apr 16, 2013 @ 22:52
Apr 16, 2013 @ 23:47
Originally posted by Inactive User
like the style, kinda like the same as everything else out right now 
but still a lil different, id rock it... only thing is on your site, you should allow
the product images to be viewed in a LARGER size.

ThePreciseLife.com

Apr 17, 2013 @ 00:38
Originally posted by Inactive User
you got some pretty dope designs bro! 
Apr 17, 2013 @ 00:44
Some preview of our upcoming summer drop, "Fresh snapback" / "Dreamteam snapback" / "camp caps" / "Oxford shirt" / "Smooth pocket tee"
We are Lucidbrand a young brand based in Stockholm, Sweden
We are working on a new website/store so its not updated, I have attached a screenshoot from our new website.
It's just the design, (The Photos are only examples we do not own them!)
Our goal with this season is to creat new and creative products from what we think is verry classic streetwear silhouettes like Pocket T-shirts and Oxford shirts.The name of the collection is : NEW CLASSICS by Lucidbrand
Feel free to give us feedback, we need to hear it!
/Erik
You have some pretty dope garments homie 
Apr 17, 2013 @ 02:01
Recently re-designed our online store / blog, feedback is appreciated www.soleindividual.com

Thank you,
Rico
Apr 17, 2013 @ 07:19
Some preview of our upcoming summer drop, "Fresh snapback" / "Dreamteam snapback" / "camp caps" / "Oxford shirt" / "Smooth pocket tee"
We are Lucidbrand a young brand based in Stockholm, Sweden
We are working on a new website/store so its not updated, I have attached a screenshoot from our new website.
It's just the design, (The Photos are only examples we do not own them!)
Our goal with this season is to creat new and creative products from what we think is verry classic streetwear silhouettes like Pocket T-shirts and Oxford shirts.The name of the collection is : NEW CLASSICS by Lucidbrand
Feel free to give us feedback, we need to hear it!
/Erik
You have some pretty dope garments homie 
Thanks allot for the love Ricosway, always good to hear feedback.
Btw you got some funny prints on your clothes and they are well put togheter, but I think you should have real product photos in your Shop man.
Keep doing your thing.
/Erik

www.lucidbrand.se

Apr 17, 2013 @ 07:44
 
You have some pretty dope garments homie 
Thanks allot for the love Ricosway, always good to hear feedback.
Btw you got some funny prints on your clothes and they are well put togheter, but I think you should have real product photos in your Shop man.
Keep doing your thing.
/Erik
on your b&w 5 panel strapbacks, i dont feel as if the front label/patch is "balanced" enough. But im a sucker for symmetry so maybe thats just me.
Apr 17, 2013 @ 07:52
these are a couple of the designs I came up with for my spring/ summer drop. My first real drop. I tried to keep it clean and simple. In the future I will have more elaborte designs the brand is called Adamant Society. If you like what you see follow it on instagram @adamantsocietycohttp://adamantsocietyco.tumblr.com/image/48107716063
Apr 17, 2013 @ 08:40
Thanks allot for the love Ricosway, always good to hear feedback.
Btw you got some funny prints on your clothes and they are well put togheter, but I think you should have real product photos in your Shop man.
Keep doing your thing.
/Erik
on your b&w 5 panel strapbacks, i dont feel as if the front label/patch is "balanced" enough. But im a sucker for symmetry so maybe thats just me.
Thanks allot for your opinion man! Yes I can see what you mean about that, I will look in to that for my next drop for sure.
Keep the feedback coming Hypebeasters blushing
/Erik

www.lucidbrand.se

Apr 18, 2013 @ 03:27
Whats up Hypebeast been checking out the forum for a while and im really digging the feedback you guys give. I have a brand named Rag Cal! and we just dropped our new collection. Just wanted to drop by and see what you guys think of the pieces. Hit me up if you have any questions about the brand or clothes.

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twitter/instagram: @ragcal

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