Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Mar 24, 2013 @ 06:47
A look at our "Aurora" cap. Inspired by the intergalactic wonders and

natural electric phenomenon of yellow, green and purple lights over the

most northern hemisphere. Handcrafted in the USA.


OFFTHEMAP-SF
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Off-The-Map-San-Francisco/124110531091458
http://instagram.com/offthemapsf
https://twitter.com/OffTheMapSF

How long was this in the works before you started to post OTM to Hypebeast?

hot water

Mar 24, 2013 @ 06:57
A look at our "Aurora" cap. Inspired by the intergalactic wonders and

natural electric phenomenon of yellow, green and purple lights over the

most northern hemisphere. Handcrafted in the USA.


OFFTHEMAP-SF
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Off-The-Map-San-Francisco/124110531091458
http://instagram.com/offthemapsf
https://twitter.com/OffTheMapSF
How long was this in the works before you started to post OTM to Hypebeast?
I've been working on this individual hat for almost half a year now. And I still have a lot of things I want to add and change with the hat.

Here's a picture of the hat handcrafted by myself and the one by my manufacturer.

offthemapsf.com

Mar 24, 2013 @ 07:00
http://goodclo.bigcartel.com/LOL at the shirt with the crossed eyes..
thanks for the feedback man!
the strongest design is the lion one. keep heading in that direction.

www.shillingfordco.com

Mar 24, 2013 @ 10:30
I've been working on this individual hat for almost half a year now. And I still have a lot of things I want to add and change with the hat.

Here's a picture of the hat handcrafted by myself and the one by my manufacturer.
Where'd you learn to make hats? Requesting to be schooled in the art of hatting, or at least pointed in the right direction to learn.

hot water

Mar 24, 2013 @ 13:46


Updated Logo, Please Tell me what you think.
Mar 24, 2013 @ 14:12
^^ the fact that you use the word "streetwear" on your logo makes me hate it even more.
If you don't mind me asking, how old are you?

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Mar 24, 2013 @ 15:11
City of Savages "Bone Collector" capsule collection http://shop.thecityofsavages.com/category/bone-collector

This shit is mad ugly son... I saw the same joint at target for $15 and it included socks...
word? did you cop? lol Anyways thanks for the feedback.

City of Savages Clothing http://shop.thecityofsavages.com "Live Free or Die"

Mar 24, 2013 @ 15:18
City of Savages "Bone Collector" capsule collection http://shop.thecityofsavages.com/category/bone-collector
no lie, the dude looks like he's 5
Not sure how this makes sense but thanks for your opinion.

City of Savages Clothing http://shop.thecityofsavages.com "Live Free or Die"

Mar 24, 2013 @ 15:24


Updated Logo, Please Tell me what you think.
I don't see how this logo really fits with the name of the line. Also I don't think "streetwear" should be included in the company's name. Keep at it though.

City of Savages Clothing http://shop.thecityofsavages.com "Live Free or Die"

Mar 24, 2013 @ 15:48
A look at our "Aurora" cap. Inspired by the intergalactic wonders and

natural electric phenomenon of yellow, green and purple lights over the

most northern hemisphere. Handcrafted in the USA.


OFFTHEMAP-SF
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Off-The-Map-San-Francisco/124110531091458
http://instagram.com/offthemapsf
https://twitter.com/OffTheMapSF


I really think you're doing your brand a diservice by posting n this thread. If I was you I would just do a thread on the Fashion Forum and stop "asking for approval"  from the people on this thread. You have nice hats and a good eye for design, spend your time trying to ge the hats into the heads of the right people and you will be okay.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Mar 24, 2013 @ 16:14


New Design change it from Atomic Streetwear to Atomic Clothing And Added The Eye of Horus is an Ancient Egyptian symbol of protection, royal power and good health. because I think it fits well with this Ancient Egyptian look with the design And @joey1320 I'm 15 - @cityofsavages Do you think i should Change the name of the line because i rather do that than change the design because i personally like this this design.
Mar 24, 2013 @ 16:35


New Design change it from Atomic Streetwear to Atomic Clothing And Added the Eye of Horus because I'm going for the Ancient Egyptian look with this design And @joey1320 I'm 15 - @cityofsavages Do you think i should Change the name of the line because i rather do that than change the design because i personally like this this design.
Changing the name could work. But everything about your brand has to be cohesive, I just don't see how the Eye of Horus or anything involving ancient Egypt fits in with the name "Atomic". Take some time and brainstorm a little more.

City of Savages Clothing http://shop.thecityofsavages.com "Live Free or Die"

Mar 24, 2013 @ 16:35
 And @joey1320 I'm 15 -

Ahh of course you are...

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Mar 24, 2013 @ 16:52
 And @joey1320 I'm 15 -

Ahh of course you are...
Sorry I'm not trying to be a dick but you need to rethink what your "brand" means and what it stands for. Seems like you are just jumping on the bandwagon...

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Mar 24, 2013 @ 16:58
http://goodclo.bigcartel.com/thanks for the feedback man!
the strongest design is the lion one. keep heading in that direction.
thanks for the feedback once again!

good vibes. http://goodclo.bigcartel.com

Mar 24, 2013 @ 17:02
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Mar 24, 2013 @ 18:37
http://www.goodjoie.com/


all new design for the website check it out 
Mar 24, 2013 @ 18:51
#3 ideas for the Brand name

All Seeing Eye
Ancient Clothing
Unidentified Clothing
Mar 24, 2013 @ 20:07
#3 ideas for the Brand name

All Seeing Eye
Ancient Clothing
Unidentified Clothing

anything with clothing or apparel at the end is kind of corny an played out now of day  my opinion because what if in your future you  want to do like skateboard deck,sunglasses,sneakers,watches,belts  maybe even custom bikes frames other shit if get what i mean from company so like the best thing is to pick a neutral name that won't limit you market wise

http://southfame.com/

Mar 24, 2013 @ 21:05
Got some new labels in for our head wear. Patches came in today too. How's everyone else's Spring/Summer/New products coming along?

Always thought the brand name was great. Those'll totally make people look twice.

www.stillwild.co / online store that celebrates nature!

Mar 24, 2013 @ 22:16
 And @joey1320 I'm 15 -

Ahh of course you are...
I thought i was the youngest on here,  im 16

- System

Mar 24, 2013 @ 22:36
I'm just brainstorming....Feedback and criticism welcome.





Thanks.
Mar 25, 2013 @ 00:22
Got some new labels in for our head wear. Patches came in today too. How's everyone else's Spring/Summer/New products coming along?

Always thought the brand name was great. Those'll totally make people look twice.
Ah thanks man, appreciate that. I'm actually more excited for our snapback because we're using the patch I posted on the previous page, but I like 5 panels better. I like our name too, co owner Jon came up with it and we've been running since. Only thing that bummed me out was finding out about other brands like Divinities and Freedminds after we had already started. Cool guys and good brands for sure. Just not a fan of similar names? Haha I'm probably the most critical and picky about our brand but that's how it should be. 

http://thedividedminds.com/

Mar 25, 2013 @ 00:23
Ahh of course you are...
I thought i was the youngest on here,  im 16
Im 15 too, but it doesn't matter. Doesn't Matter about age, you just gotta do it. (corny) But as i look around this form, you got some dumb 19-20 year olds with the dumbest brands and graphic out there. I may have a push because i come from a family with clothing designers. (Sister works for ACNE and LACOSTE, Mother was one of the start up designers for LOUIS VUITTON) It doesn't matter about the age, but hey not all of the older people have good things anyways

OWNER // AXCIE // AXCIEFACTORY.COM

Mar 25, 2013 @ 02:17



Legends Never Die Heather Gray Crewneck 

http://www.goodjoie.com/
Mar 25, 2013 @ 03:16
I'm just brainstorming....Feedback and criticism welcome.





Thanks.
3rd tee font reminds me of Been Trill... Theres already a brand called rebel 8..
Mar 25, 2013 @ 05:29
Bootylicious Boutique has cool tees's for Men, Women and kids with prices starting at $20! 


http://bootyliciousboutique.spreadshirt.com/
Mar 25, 2013 @ 05:51
Bootylicious Boutique has cool tees's for Men, Women and kids with prices starting at $20! 


http://bootyliciousboutique.spreadshirt.com/
Dude...come on. 

http://thedividedminds.com/

Mar 25, 2013 @ 05:58
#3 ideas for the Brand name

All Seeing Eye
Ancient Clothing
Unidentified Clothing
do you think any of us care what your potential brand names are... if you can't even take the time to inspire yourself to create a brand name you truly like, you shouldn't even run a brand in the first place.

http://www.distantlight.co

Mar 25, 2013 @ 11:04
no pictures, lame background i'm going to assume you can't even legally use, no lookbook.

C'mon man, if you don't even have at the very least a mockup of the product, don't start a store and link it around.

hot water

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