Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

here's the first product from KNGS , feedback ? 

Thanks,

I'm not a fan of the whole abbreviation/acronym thing that a lot of brands have been doing with their names. It kind of comes off as a cop out for not being able to think of a good name for your brand. Also if I were you I'd stay away from the the whole snake skin thing you'll be one of the last ones to the "party" I'm pretty sure that trend is on it's last legs.

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Not sure what you're trying to do here, but it seems to me you just combined the logos of The Hundreds, Crooks and Castles, Booger Kids, and Original Fake and slapped the words "Free your Thoughts" on it.

mixing styles is always dope imo, thanks though appreciate it.  I dont see how u got THe Hundreds mixed in but i understand Crooks and Original fake 

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Here's an example of good presentation if anyone was wondering.


late reply but thanks. anybody want to share their experiences on vendoring? 

check out brightsupply.bigcartel.com ive done one season and i know i have way more room to improve...next season would look a lot more professional than this one did

gotta star somewhere bro, i really like the left chest. Is there an image on the back...Try getting more angles and different poses for the next lookbook 

Feedback? Not just anonymous thumbs, actually say something
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Okay you asked for it, it looks like shit and you should stop trying.

^^^ what he said.

^^^ what he said.

Honestly? that logo looks like shit ?  please explain , cause it seems like half the people here just shoot everything down with no explanation, mad hate

^^^ what he said.

Honestly? that logo looks like shit ?  please explain , cause it seems like half the people here just shoot everything down with no explanation, mad hate

I mean, it just seems kind of tacky. There are far worse streetwear logos out there but I still wouldnt pay for this. Keep playing around with stuff your progressing. 

Aigh' i just finished the logo for "Young Kings" 
Might play around with the lines a bit to make them cleaner.

Feedback? 

I wouldnt buy a shirt with that logo for a couple of reasons;
-- First thing that comes to mind is the baby with a diaper full of shit.
-- Second is the design is horrid. Seems like you chopp'd the kid on half.
-- Third, the idea of logo of a baby makes me feel kinda creepy. No lie.

Is that good enough?
You seem to think that this design will revolutionize the "streetwear" community and it's inhabtants lol. If so, go ahead and print 24 shirts of it and see how many you can sell. Better yet, see how many you can give away for free to people other than your friends, who will only wear them to not make you feel like an ass.

I wouldnt buy a shirt with that logo for a couple of reasons;
-- First thing that comes to mind is the baby with a diaper full of shit.
-- Second is the design is horrid. Seems like you chopp'd the kid on half.
-- Third, the idea of logo of a baby makes me feel kinda creepy. No lie.

Is that good enough?
You seem to think that this design will revolutionize the "streetwear" community and it's inhabtants lol. If so, go ahead and print 24 shirts of it and see how many you can sell. Better yet, see how many you can give away for free to people other than your friends, who will only wear them to not make you feel like an ass.

I wouldnt buy a shirt with that logo for a couple of reasons;
-- First thing that comes to mind is the baby with a diaper full of shit.
-- Second is the design is horrid. Seems like you chopp'd the kid on half.
-- Third, the idea of logo of a baby makes me feel kinda creepy. No lie.

Is that good enough?
You seem to think that this design will revolutionize the "streetwear" community and it's inhabtants lol. If so, go ahead and print 24 shirts of it and see how many you can sell. Better yet, see how many you can give away for free to people other than your friends, who will only wear them to not make you feel like an ass.

I'm pretty sure the posts before yours were clear enough. You didn't have to go on post all that shit and insult him. He just asked for feedback not insults by a dumb ass.

I wouldnt buy a shirt with that logo for a couple of reasons;
-- First thing that comes to mind is the baby with a diaper full of shit.
-- Second is the design is horrid. Seems like you chopp'd the kid on half.
-- Third, the idea of logo of a baby makes me feel kinda creepy. No lie.

Is that good enough?
You seem to think that this design will revolutionize the "streetwear" community and it's inhabtants lol. If so, go ahead and print 24 shirts of it and see how many you can sell. Better yet, see how many you can give away for free to people other than your friends, who will only wear them to not make you feel like an ass.

I'm pretty sure the posts before yours were clear enough. You didn't have to go on post all that shit and insult him. He just asked for feedback not insults by a dumb ass.

naaa its cool its his strong opinion i respect it

I wouldnt buy a shirt with that logo for a couple of reasons;
-- First thing that comes to mind is the baby with a diaper full of shit.
-- Second is the design is horrid. Seems like you chopp'd the kid on half.
-- Third, the idea of logo of a baby makes me feel kinda creepy. No lie.

Is that good enough?
You seem to think that this design will revolutionize the "streetwear" community and it's inhabtants lol. If so, go ahead and print 24 shirts of it and see how many you can sell. Better yet, see how many you can give away for free to people other than your friends, who will only wear them to not make you feel like an ass.

I'm pretty sure the posts before yours were clear enough. You didn't have to go on post all that shit and insult him. He just asked for feedback not insults by a dumb ass.

naaa its cool its his strong opinion i respect it

I will highly, highly recommend you do this:

Come up with whatever/however many logos/names/ideas you can. Write them down and save 'em. Let them sit for a couple of weeks and then come back to them and see what you think. I myself am trying to do the same as a lot of people here, come up with a cool brand to start and hopefuly turn into something. Only difference is that I have done my due diligence and I have even thrown out over 6 different names/logos that I was sure were gonna be a hit.

You can't just jump onto the first idea and expect it to work. Not saying that it can't happen, but it's highly unlikely. Also if you look at the streetwear(I hate using that word cause I think of Zummies) market, you will see a jump into more refined trends and mature tastes. I'm pretty sure a kid on a diaper doesn't fit that.

Just look through the fahion forum and see what people are saying about other brands. It's a long process but totally rewarding at the end if you do it right.