Holy Fuck can i ever win ?
You're just not meant for it b, I've refrained from commenting cuz I didn't want to be an ass but everything you've come up is all too rushed.
You don't just come up with a brand name after a day of thinking... It's a manifestation of the idea your brand is based around. It usually takes time and good ones just pop in your head.
You are forcing everything, that's why the designs are shit. It seems like you are just trying to make a brand in order to make money. That's not why you should start a clothing line, especially now.
I've seen other people say a few of the same things before but I don't think it really landed.
And for all you other new brands, this thread isn't meant to hold your hand and help you with 50% of making the brand and to help you with 50% of your design work. And you shouldn't really want people in this thread to help with that anyways since the majority here are new brands as well... it's just the blind leading the blind..
Come up with your own brand basis, designs, make your shit and then give a good presentation of what you have. You'll get better feedback that way anyway instead of posting shit designs over and over.