Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Mar 11, 2013 @ 04:56
@notorginal thats wussup , wasnt even thinking like that when i created it. Good Looks.
Mar 11, 2013 @ 06:26

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Not sure what you're trying to do here, but it seems to me you just combined the logos of The Hundreds, Crooks and Castles, Booger Kids, and Original Fake and slapped the words "Free your Thoughts" on it.

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Mar 11, 2013 @ 11:49
here's the first product from KNGS , feedback ? 

Thanks,
Does this stand for Kings

yeah it stands for kings need gold supply.
Mar 11, 2013 @ 12:20
Originally posted by Inactive User
Ok. Yes we all know that fashion and clothing is a way to project personal image and individuality, but that is a given. Lets not get too deep into subjective opinions about 'masks of reality' or whatever. Its honestly all just opinion based shit. Leave that deep garbage for your next mushroom trip.

If one things for certain it is that clothing will be around as long as humans are around. Clothing is a part of our survival. There is a reason we no longer have hair all over our bodies. We adapted to need clothing so that our biological processes could be focused elsewhere (the brain). With the adaptation of clothing came individual fashion. It's here to stay whether you like it or not.

That being said, if you don't want to be involved in the fashion industry then get the fuck out. There is already enough of us.
Oh, I understand. I can just see where he's coming from with all of this. When you really start to look at it, some people just say, "fuck it" and leave the field entirely. I don't really blame them, to be honest.

In my opinion, fashion at it's heart is self-expression. It's just a way of showing the world "hey, this is who I am!". People tend to lie when they tell the world who they are, though, which is where the whole masks argument comes into play. People need to stop lying about who they are, and instead show who they truly are. 

I hope I've made some sense with all of this, as I'm terrible at putting thoughts into words.
honestly, who the fuck cares? i couldn't give a single fuck if a random guy walked by me wearing a black flag shirt but didn't know what it stood for. if he likes the design, he can wear it. there are far other things you should worry about people doing than "lying about their self expression". 
I think you're misinterpeting what I said. A person wearing something without knowing what it means is an entirely different argument, in my opinion.
I was talking more along the lines of people who would intentionally have 'looks' they'd go for. 

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Mar 11, 2013 @ 15:27
http://sticksbrand.bigcartel.com/

These guys followed me on Instagram..

"I keep myself so lifted I'm accustom to new heights."

Mar 11, 2013 @ 17:25

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Not sure what you're trying to do here, but it seems to me you just combined the logos of The Hundreds, Crooks and Castles, Booger Kids, and Original Fake and slapped the words "Free your Thoughts" on it.
mixing styles is always dope imo, thanks though appreciate it.  I dont see how u got THe Hundreds mixed in but i understand Crooks and Original fake 
Mar 11, 2013 @ 17:44


Image on the first crewneck, C&C please. Give me some suggestions
It looks like you devoted about five minutes of your life and used paint. Try again.
Any suggestions on what I should remove/look better? What do you hate the most about it?
The whole boom box and laptop thing doesn't make sense, technology from two different eras.

City of Savages Clothing http://shop.thecityofsavages.com "Live Free or Die"

Mar 11, 2013 @ 17:52
http://sticksbrand.bigcartel.com/

These guys followed me on Instagram..
Eww.

http://thedividedminds.com/

Mar 11, 2013 @ 18:22
here's the first product from KNGS , feedback ? 

Thanks,
I'm not a fan of the whole abbreviation/acronym thing that a lot of brands have been doing with their names. It kind of comes off as a cop out for not being able to think of a good name for your brand. Also if I were you I'd stay away from the the whole snake skin thing you'll be one of the last ones to the "party" I'm pretty sure that trend is on it's last legs.

City of Savages Clothing http://shop.thecityofsavages.com "Live Free or Die"

Mar 11, 2013 @ 18:49
here's the first product from KNGS , feedback ? 

Thanks,
I'm not a fan of the whole abbreviation/acronym thing that a lot of brands have been doing with their names. It kind of comes off as a cop out for not being able to think of a good name for your brand. Also if I were you I'd stay away from the the whole snake skin thing you'll be one of the last ones to the "party" I'm pretty sure that trend is on it's last legs.
Yeh i get what you're saying, i came up with the name kinda fast, i'll sit back and take some time to think of a legit one
Mar 11, 2013 @ 19:38
I'm gonna start drawing some logos for "YoungPharaohs" , i got some good shit thought out for that name
Mar 11, 2013 @ 19:44

Feedback
Not sure what you're trying to do here, but it seems to me you just combined the logos of The Hundreds, Crooks and Castles, Booger Kids, and Original Fake and slapped the words "Free your Thoughts" on it.
mixing styles is always dope imo, thanks though appreciate it.  I dont see how u got THe Hundreds mixed in but i understand Crooks and Original fake 
the frickin chain ball looks like a bomb thats why

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Mar 11, 2013 @ 23:22
@qrct touche 
Mar 12, 2013 @ 00:03
Originally posted by Inactive User
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Here's an example of good presentation if anyone was wondering.


late reply but thanks. anybody want to share their experiences on vendoring? 
Mar 12, 2013 @ 00:12
check out brightsupply.bigcartel.com ive done one season and i know i have way more room to improve...next season would look a lot more professional than this one did
gotta star somewhere bro, i really like the left chest. Is there an image on the back...Try getting more angles and different poses for the next lookbook 
yes the same image is on the entire back and larger..thanks for the response  
Mar 12, 2013 @ 01:59
Aigh' i just finished the logo for "Young Kings" 
Might play around with the lines a bit to make them cleaner.

Feedback? 

systemusa.co

Mar 12, 2013 @ 02:09
Feedback? Not just anonymous thumbs, actually say something
Thanks
Okay you asked for it, it looks like shit and you should stop trying.
Mar 12, 2013 @ 02:14
^^^ what he said.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Mar 12, 2013 @ 02:14
Feedback? Not just anonymous thumbs, actually say something
Thanks
Okay you asked for it, it looks like shit and you should stop trying.
Haha good one

systemusa.co

Mar 12, 2013 @ 02:15
^^^ what he said.
Honestly? that logo looks like shit ?  please explain , cause it seems like half the people here just shoot everything down with no explanation, mad hate

systemusa.co

Mar 12, 2013 @ 02:18
^^^ what he said.
Honestly? that logo looks like shit ?  please explain , cause it seems like half the people here just shoot everything down with no explanation, mad hate
I mean, it just seems kind of tacky. There are far worse streetwear logos out there but I still wouldnt pay for this. Keep playing around with stuff your progressing. 
Mar 12, 2013 @ 02:20
^^^ what he said.
Honestly? that logo looks like shit ?  please explain , cause it seems like half the people here just shoot everything down with no explanation, mad hate
I mean, it just seems kind of tacky. There are far worse streetwear logos out there but I still wouldnt pay for this. Keep playing around with stuff your progressing. 
the baby is tacky or the drawing itself ?

systemusa.co

Mar 12, 2013 @ 02:26
Aigh' i just finished the logo for "Young Kings" 
Might play around with the lines a bit to make them cleaner.

Feedback? 
It's too play plain and it doesn't catch my eye. There is no creativity what so ever.
Mar 12, 2013 @ 02:34
Honestly? that logo looks like shit ?  please explain , cause it seems like half the people here just shoot everything down with no explanation, mad hate
I mean, it just seems kind of tacky. There are far worse streetwear logos out there but I still wouldnt pay for this. Keep playing around with stuff your progressing. 
the baby is tacky or the drawing itself ?
the baby man, who wants to wear a baby on a shirt. and Young Kings just sounds tacky. Go look at how many brands start with young, and how many brands even have King in it. Dig deeper
Mar 12, 2013 @ 02:38
I wouldnt buy a shirt with that logo for a couple of reasons;
-- First thing that comes to mind is the baby with a diaper full of shit.
-- Second is the design is horrid. Seems like you chopp'd the kid on half.
-- Third, the idea of logo of a baby makes me feel kinda creepy. No lie.

Is that good enough?
You seem to think that this design will revolutionize the "streetwear" community and it's inhabtants lol. If so, go ahead and print 24 shirts of it and see how many you can sell. Better yet, see how many you can give away for free to people other than your friends, who will only wear them to not make you feel like an ass.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

Mar 12, 2013 @ 02:53
I wouldnt buy a shirt with that logo for a couple of reasons;
-- First thing that comes to mind is the baby with a diaper full of shit.
-- Second is the design is horrid. Seems like you chopp'd the kid on half.
-- Third, the idea of logo of a baby makes me feel kinda creepy. No lie.

Is that good enough?
You seem to think that this design will revolutionize the "streetwear" community and it's inhabtants lol. If so, go ahead and print 24 shirts of it and see how many you can sell. Better yet, see how many you can give away for free to people other than your friends, who will only wear them to not make you feel like an ass.
aigh i get it shit, ill think harder about a new name and logo 

systemusa.co

Mar 12, 2013 @ 02:53
I wouldnt buy a shirt with that logo for a couple of reasons;
-- First thing that comes to mind is the baby with a diaper full of shit.
-- Second is the design is horrid. Seems like you chopp'd the kid on half.
-- Third, the idea of logo of a baby makes me feel kinda creepy. No lie.

Is that good enough?
You seem to think that this design will revolutionize the "streetwear" community and it's inhabtants lol. If so, go ahead and print 24 shirts of it and see how many you can sell. Better yet, see how many you can give away for free to people other than your friends, who will only wear them to not make you feel like an ass.
I'm pretty sure the posts before yours were clear enough. You didn't have to go on post all that shit and insult him. He just asked for feedback not insults by a dumb ass. blushing
Mar 12, 2013 @ 03:01
wondering ? seeing that ppl like( YOUNGKINGS ) an a few others  have no idea in what they are doing when it comes to logos an shit  can we sell logos,brand names an ideas, tee designs an so on like a brand templates  on this site ?

http://southfame.com/

Mar 12, 2013 @ 03:02
I wouldnt buy a shirt with that logo for a couple of reasons;
-- First thing that comes to mind is the baby with a diaper full of shit.
-- Second is the design is horrid. Seems like you chopp'd the kid on half.
-- Third, the idea of logo of a baby makes me feel kinda creepy. No lie.

Is that good enough?
You seem to think that this design will revolutionize the "streetwear" community and it's inhabtants lol. If so, go ahead and print 24 shirts of it and see how many you can sell. Better yet, see how many you can give away for free to people other than your friends, who will only wear them to not make you feel like an ass.
I'm pretty sure the posts before yours were clear enough. You didn't have to go on post all that shit and insult him. He just asked for feedback not insults by a dumb ass.
naaa its cool its his strong opinion i respect it

systemusa.co

Mar 12, 2013 @ 03:03
^^^ I didn't know we were back in middle school...
Dude chill, if his feelings got hurt, he can defend himself.

I wasn't trying to insult him, I dont know him and honestly I wish him nothing but the best if he decides to continue trying to come up with new logos. Only issue is that it's all repetitive -- look 5, 6, 20 pages back and it's all the same. Some noob comes in with a horrible design asking for advice and when advice is given, he/she will flip out cause nobody likes it.

www.highwaysco.us -- for some fucking reason, you must use the www. idk why fml.

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