Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

February 25, 2013 @ 02:59:51
Let us introduce you to the thought process behind my t shirt.
We wanted to create the new box logo tee.
There has been an alarming rate of bold italics so we decided to go with the Watchmen font.
Aeterna means 'eternal' in the now dead language, Latin, and we liked the chime of irony in that.
So we chose that 7-letter word and added a new color to it.
The yellow background offers a striking contrast with the black lettering, akin to caution tape and hazard signs,
offering the similar street sign effect the red and white logos have due to its resemblance to stop signs.
Additionally, the screen print on the back says 'Voila, Scum' which is a middle finger to everyone behind you.
Our online shop has just opened.
You can purchase our new box logo tee at - http://aeternasf.com/
Thanks.

The way you said everything made it sound so robotic, like some sort of super computer telling me how it used incredibly complex math to figure out who'd be pissing out of a window at 3 AM, and which window.

Doesn't really feel organic to me, but whatever suits you.

hot water

February 25, 2013 @ 04:03:03
Let us introduce you to the thought process behind my t shirt.
We wanted to create the new box logo tee.
There has been an alarming rate of bold italics so we decided to go with the Watchmen font.
Aeterna means 'eternal' in the now dead language, Latin, and we liked the chime of irony in that.
So we chose that 7-letter word and added a new color to it.
The yellow background offers a striking contrast with the black lettering, akin to caution tape and hazard signs,
offering the similar street sign effect the red and white logos have due to its resemblance to stop signs.
Additionally, the screen print on the back says 'Voila, Scum' which is a middle finger to everyone behind you.
Our online shop has just opened.
You can purchase our new box logo tee at - http://aeternasf.com/
Thanks.

The way you said everything made it sound so robotic, like some sort of super computer telling me how it used incredibly complex math to figure out who'd be pissing out of a window at 3 AM, and which window.

Doesn't really feel organic to me, but whatever suits you.
I just wanted to let you know my thoughts.
Sorry I get kind of nerdy with my dialect, I guess my engineering background acts up even when it comes to something as simple as shirts.

I honestly think about every shirt in this process of abstraction and try to pick apart the influences each designer had in mind when putting together their graphic shirt. It's how I learn from the greats. A 'Watch and Learn' method.

Hey I'm also glad that you took the time to give me feedback. I'm glad that the shirt is provocative enough to put you at this "agree to disagree" stance. I'd rather people feel anything than nothing at all about my shirts.

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February 25, 2013 @ 04:04:20
Let us introduce you to the thought process behind my t shirt.
We wanted to create the new box logo tee.
There has been an alarming rate of bold italics so we decided to go with the Watchmen font.
Aeterna means 'eternal' in the now dead language, Latin, and we liked the chime of irony in that.
So we chose that 7-letter word and added a new color to it.
The yellow background offers a striking contrast with the black lettering, akin to caution tape and hazard signs,
offering the similar street sign effect the red and white logos have due to its resemblance to stop signs.
Additionally, the screen print on the back says 'Voila, Scum' which is a middle finger to everyone behind you.
Our online shop has just opened.
You can purchase our new box logo tee at - http://aeternasf.com/
Thanks.

Honestly the box logo thing is played out and if you really want to get out somewhere you need to come up with something fresh. The big guys aren't clones. 
February 25, 2013 @ 04:31:00
Check out a few exclusive releases we have for S/S 2013. Tell us what you think!

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Travel Good. Live Most.

February 25, 2013 @ 04:44:54
Check out a few exclusive releases we have for S/S 2013. Tell us what you think!

-www.newcitizenus.com






I like the little pouches, the design on the t-shirt can be improved. 
February 25, 2013 @ 04:54:11
Check out a few exclusive releases we have for S/S 2013. Tell us what you think!

-www.newcitizenus.com




Refreshing just to see different shit instead of shirts and hoodies on here. I don't really like the name, though. What does the name mean?

hot water

February 25, 2013 @ 04:54:29
Check out a few exclusive releases we have for S/S 2013. Tell us what you think!

-www.newcitizenus.com






I like the little pouches, the design on the t-shirt can be improved. 
Thanks! Although we're focusing on leather and travel goods, we are open to suggestions for tees. What would you add/subtract from this?

Travel Good. Live Most.

February 25, 2013 @ 04:56:29
Let us introduce you to the thought process behind my t shirt.
We wanted to create the new box logo tee.
There has been an alarming rate of bold italics so we decided to go with the Watchmen font.
Aeterna means 'eternal' in the now dead language, Latin, and we liked the chime of irony in that.
So we chose that 7-letter word and added a new color to it.
The yellow background offers a striking contrast with the black lettering, akin to caution tape and hazard signs,
offering the similar street sign effect the red and white logos have due to its resemblance to stop signs.
Additionally, the screen print on the back says 'Voila, Scum' which is a middle finger to everyone behind you.
Our online shop has just opened.
You can purchase our new box logo tee at - http://aeternasf.com/
Thanks.

The way you said everything made it sound so robotic, like some sort of super computer telling me how it used incredibly complex math to figure out who'd be pissing out of a window at 3 AM, and which window.

Doesn't really feel organic to me, but whatever suits you.
I just wanted to let you know my thoughts.
Sorry I get kind of nerdy with my dialect, I guess my engineering background acts up even when it comes to something as simple as shirts.

I honestly think about every shirt in this process of abstraction and try to pick apart the influences each designer had in mind when putting together their graphic shirt. It's how I learn from the greats. A 'Watch and Learn' method.

Hey I'm also glad that you took the time to give me feedback. I'm glad that the shirt is provocative enough to put you at this "agree to disagree" stance. I'd rather people feel anything than nothing at all about my shirts.
I've gotta admit, your response game on point. From how you handled the negative feedback you got when you first showed your brand to now, you seem to know what to do to please people. You go to school for this stuff?

hot water

February 25, 2013 @ 04:58:18
Check out a few exclusive releases we have for S/S 2013. Tell us what you think!

-www.newcitizenus.com




Refreshing just to see different shit instead of shirts and hoodies on here. I don't really like the name, though. What does the name mean?
Adaptation and embracing new ideologies. We want to create premium goods that could become anyone's daily travel essentials. We're not here to follow trend and all the rediculous hype behind cheap brands. 

Travel Good. Live Most.

February 25, 2013 @ 05:00:07
i like the simplicity of the products^

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February 25, 2013 @ 05:01:22
i like the simplicity of the products^
We appreciate the feedback. Visit us at www.newcitizenus.com

Travel Good. Live Most.

February 25, 2013 @ 06:53:09
http://lcwr.tumblr.com/ 

LCWR is an acronym for Loaf Chick Water Reeds, which in hieroglyphics, translates to TONY. 
You can check out our look-book in the Tumblr above. Big Cartel is coming soon.
It'd be greatly appreciated if you guys can check us out and give some support. We're just some kids from Stockton, California.
Thank you so much!

February 25, 2013 @ 06:59:47
Check out my upcoming high end brand named Lumières

http://LumieresByKai.com

Right now there a contest on the Facebook http://fb.com/LumieresByKai page and Tumblr http://kailumieres.tumblr.com/   to win the first tee design called YOTS "Year of the Snake"

Contest end when pre-ordering is available.

Egyptian/Light cotton. 

Here a view of the tee. 

This is fucking sick, I wanna collab and a shirt ASAP lol

Find us at www.princessesandpresidents.com

February 25, 2013 @ 08:53:21
http://aeternasf.com/The way you said everything made it sound so robotic, like some sort of super computer telling me how it used incredibly complex math to figure out who'd be pissing out of a window at 3 AM, and which window.

Doesn't really feel organic to me, but whatever suits you.
I just wanted to let you know my thoughts.
Sorry I get kind of nerdy with my dialect, I guess my engineering background acts up even when it comes to something as simple as shirts.

I honestly think about every shirt in this process of abstraction and try to pick apart the influences each designer had in mind when putting together their graphic shirt. It's how I learn from the greats. A 'Watch and Learn' method.

Hey I'm also glad that you took the time to give me feedback. I'm glad that the shirt is provocative enough to put you at this "agree to disagree" stance. I'd rather people feel anything than nothing at all about my shirts.
I've gotta admit, your response game on point. From how you handled the negative feedback you got when you first showed your brand to now, you seem to know what to do to please people. You go to school for this stuff?
HB raised me

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February 25, 2013 @ 14:51:40
Check out my upcoming high end brand named Lumières

http://LumieresByKai.com

Right now there a contest on the Facebook http://fb.com/LumieresByKai page and Tumblr http://kailumieres.tumblr.com/   to win the first tee design called YOTS "Year of the Snake"

Contest end when pre-ordering is available.

Egyptian/Light cotton. 

Here a view of the tee. 

This is fucking sick, I wanna collab and a shirt ASAP lol
thanks a lot man! you should check out the fb page and such! message me on there or email me here @ kai.kaname@gmail.com for more question! 
February 25, 2013 @ 16:48:20
Hi, I got some new designs again. I just listed them below.. Some of these you might have seen already, and some are not fully finished yet.














FLAUWEKUL™ Facebook
FLAUWEKUL™ Tumblr
FLAUWEKUL™CLOTHING.COM

www.flauwekul.in - www.koenroetman.nl

February 25, 2013 @ 16:57:11
I think those are actually pretty sick. Nice work.
February 25, 2013 @ 17:56:42
@flauwekul nice work brutha. I really enjoy the middle logo that has the 'painted' effect to it. Sick!

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February 25, 2013 @ 21:12:20
February 25, 2013 @ 21:34:20
if flawukel underwear every becomes a thing, this must be on the packaging.

hot water

February 25, 2013 @ 22:10:49
if flawukel underwear every becomes a thing, this must be on the packaging.
good one

www.flauwekul.in - www.koenroetman.nl

February 26, 2013 @ 00:00:25
i like all but this it looks too much like an obey shirt ive seen kids walk around with but everything else is super nice
February 26, 2013 @ 00:06:38
Everything looks like everything now days.

Thats all I hear from people most of the time...

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February 26, 2013 @ 02:47:46
Hey guys, I was looking into doing some of these all over tees. I see alot of brands using this type of printing now and I was wondering if you guys liked this particular design? Thanks. All feedback is welcome. 
Thanks again guys, and once again...feedback please...
February 26, 2013 @ 03:10:49
Hey guys, I was looking into doing some of these all over tees. I see alot of brands using this type of printing now and I was wondering if you guys liked this particular design? Thanks. All feedback is welcome. 
Thanks again guys, and once again...feedback please...
Its hard to say its a bad design, or if its a good design. It all matters about the persons thoughts and opinions, and even if that is what you are looking for, this thread isn't very diverse. I just want you to know, it has to have some correlation with your brand or the theme of your brand, like givenchy, I hope it isn't just in a grayscale format because that means the only color you can print it on would be black. Also it would work fine with brands with a little a target audience of cannabis but it doesn't fit for other people to wear it. It would only be popular for teens in there mid 16-18 because most work places wouldn't allow this nor schools so its all about how you wanted to market this design. (Also do you think you can pm me where you found the template of the tshirt)

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February 26, 2013 @ 05:17:24
there's like a company that does all-over high-res prints on crewnecks lookin really silly
doing custom orders for everyone and stuff putting cats on sweaters and stuff lmao

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February 26, 2013 @ 15:14:49
Check out my upcoming high end brand named Lumières

http://LumieresByKai.com

Right now there a contest on the Facebook http://fb.com/LumieresByKai page and Tumblr http://kailumieres.tumblr.com/   to win the first tee design called YOTS "Year of the Snake"

Contest end when pre-ordering is available.

Egyptian/Light cotton. 

Here a view of the tee. 

This is fucking sick, I wanna collab and a shirt ASAP lol
thanks a lot man! you should check out the fb page and such! message me on there or email me here @ kai.kaname@gmail.com for more question! 
Goin somewhere with the name placement.. I could fuck with it
February 26, 2013 @ 16:23:17
Check out a few exclusive releases we have for S/S 2013. Tell us what you think!

-www.newcitizenus.com






I like the little pouches, the design on the t-shirt can be improved. 
Thanks! Although we're focusing on leather and travel goods, we are open to suggestions for tees. What would you add/subtract from this?

Maybe make something cool. Cause the shirt u made seems like something thats always made wit hte NY LA thingy. Maybe focus on a leather type design
February 26, 2013 @ 17:06:28
Originally posted by Inactive User
just a work in progress ive got, feedback is appreciated
Woah, total hivemind. I've had this design sitting on my computer for the longest:

Intended for a sticker, so I tried to use only one color. Good job on your's, by the way.
thanks mane, yeah that old ice box is sick

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