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January 31, 2013 @ 11:22 AM
cmpndist

Post: 27

Join Date: Jan 2013

Hi, I'm looking for some constructive feedback on one of our latest products...




The Gold A's are a nice touch, definitely something I would rock. Do you have a website?
Thanks for the feedback...Yes, you can check us out at www.artcoreclothing.com
Your prices are pretty steep for such a simple shirt.
nice detail as of the A goes but anyone and i mean anyone can make a pocket tee..no that hard to pick up fabric and sewed onto a shirt..set yourself apart from the rest..make a pattern with the A you have there..screenprint onto blank white or any color fabric and then have that made into a pocket..the value goes up the meaning..instead of it just looking like trying to collect some easy money..like i said set yourself apart..and whoever said it had to be on the left side of the shirt..start a new trend..be different..take a risk
January 31, 2013 @ 11:32 AM
cmpndist

Post: 27

Join Date: Jan 2013

its never a good idea to base a clothing brand off a rap line or a cool quote. Like "swag" "yolo" "cocaine and caviar"... those are temporary slurs that people eventually get tired of... your brand will eventually die off like those popular slurs will... good luck tho'

ps. have you even ever done cocaine? 
ever heard of crooks and castles?im sure u have be you not them.
January 31, 2013 @ 02:00 PM
paperboyjim

Post: 53

Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: Canada

January 31, 2013 @ 02:03 PM
orion8

Post: 6

Join Date: Jan 2013

Location: Switzerland

Hey guys,

i started my own label +/- 4months back. The new stuff i will drop on sunday on: www.orion8-clothing.com
Hope you like it! I am always open for feedbacks!











January 31, 2013 @ 02:33 PM
casein_point

Post: 183

Join Date: Jul 2012

Hey guys, we're getting ready to drop our first line this spring! Very excited. 

www.facebook.com/originallyfresh
Twitter & Instagram: @originallyfresh


Get a different picture or pose or model if you want people on here to be interested in your stuff.
Also, different outfits. The one you have up right now screams to me "CAWP DEEZ SWAG SHIRTS WIT OUR FRESH JAYZ"

tl;dr,
Different background picture. Good choice of font and logo.
great typography, it goes well with the flow of the fin of the whale..perhaps you guys can clean up the whale a bit more..the back make it more smooth..the eye a bit bigger..it looks just like a dot in the middle of a shape..possible add some depth and details to differentiate different body parts of the whale.. the leaf is so small it seems non existent or looks like you threw it in there at the last second..the leaf is as important as the whale if it going to be apart of the main logo you are using. You can incorporate the leaf inside the whale..scale it up bigger to where its a knockout against the whale and then people will understand where the word fresh comes into play..hope all works well in the future!
I think its an Elephant man but I agree the eye needs to be a little bit bigger but I like its simplicity
January 31, 2013 @ 04:34 PM
originallyfresh

Post: 10

Join Date: Jan 2013

Hey guys, we're getting ready to drop our first line this spring! Very excited. 

www.facebook.com/originallyfresh
Twitter & Instagram: @originallyfresh


Get a different picture or pose or model if you want people on here to be interested in your stuff.
Also, different outfits. The one you have up right now screams to me "CAWP DEEZ SWAG SHIRTS WIT OUR FRESH JAYZ"

tl;dr,
Different background picture. Good choice of font and logo.
great typography, it goes well with the flow of the fin of the whale..perhaps you guys can clean up the whale a bit more..the back make it more smooth..the eye a bit bigger..it looks just like a dot in the middle of a shape..possible add some depth and details to differentiate different body parts of the whale.. the leaf is so small it seems non existent or looks like you threw it in there at the last second..the leaf is as important as the whale if it going to be apart of the main logo you are using. You can incorporate the leaf inside the whale..scale it up bigger to where its a knockout against the whale and then people will understand where the word fresh comes into play..hope all works well in the future!
I think its an Elephant man but I agree the eye needs to be a little bit bigger but I like its simplicity


@jaemznugyen I agree, I have scheduled to get some professional lifestyle shots done. My photographer has been away for a couple months so I tried to make due but luckily they are available. So I will have some good shots before the release because I definitely don't want to give that "CAWP DEEZ SWAG SHIRTS WIT OUR FRESH JAYZ" type of vibe haha. Not what we are going for at all. 

@cmpndist Thanks! Yeah its an elephant smile 

@casein_point Thank you, I will try playing around with the eye and see if I like it bigger. I was curious how other people would perceive the logo. When I designed it, to me its obvious it's and elephant holding a leaf, but sometimes when you get deep in a project it can be hard to step back and see what other people might see. 

Thanks for all the feedback!
January 31, 2013 @ 05:08 PM
Truminati

Post: 19

Join Date: Jan 2013

Location: Los Angeles, CA

What do you all think of our logo?


Truminati - www.truminati.com - www.twitter.com/truminati - www.facebook.com/truminati

January 31, 2013 @ 06:03 PM
Broken Bank Clo

Post: 527

Join Date: Apr 2009

Location: San Diego

Hey guys, we're getting ready to drop our first line this spring! Very excited. 

www.facebook.com/originallyfresh
Twitter & Instagram: @originallyfresh



At the end of the day it's your company, your brand.

Don't always follow everyone advice...

Broken Bank Clothing *** www.BrokenBankClothing.com *** @brokenbankclo

January 31, 2013 @ 06:44 PM
-x

Post: 28

Join Date: Dec 2012

Location: Los Angeles

Because I love you guys...

Click the picture to use your EXCLUSIVE HB FORUM PROMO CODE
It can only be used twice so who ever gets there first wins I guess

http://tenthmusebc.com

January 31, 2013 @ 08:05 PM
originallyfresh

Post: 10

Join Date: Jan 2013

Hey guys, we're getting ready to drop our first line this spring! Very excited. 

www.facebook.com/originallyfresh
Twitter & Instagram: @originallyfresh



At the end of the day it's your company, your brand.

Don't always follow everyone advice...
Oh I agree smile I take every comment, compliment, insult, criticism etc. with a grain of salt. The brand will always ring true to who I am but I will always listen to an outsiders opinion. 
January 31, 2013 @ 08:06 PM
minsct

Post: 326

Join Date: Nov 2011

Location: Canada

Because I love you guys...

Click the picture to use your EXCLUSIVE HB FORUM PROMO CODE
It can only be used twice so who ever gets there first wins I guess
'TheSWAGISBACK'

Just horrible.

THE VISIONARY IS YOU - www.minsct.com

January 31, 2013 @ 08:19 PM
-x

Post: 28

Join Date: Dec 2012

Location: Los Angeles


'TheSWAGISBACK'

Just horrible.
jst 4 u bby :*

http://tenthmusebc.com

January 31, 2013 @ 10:22 PM
Iarumas

Post: 572

Join Date: Sep 2012

Location: Northpole

Things that make people take your "basementbrand" as a joke:
- Any of the words "Swag", "Fresh" or "Kush" in it.
- Ripping of famous logos and implementing your cheap ass logo on it.
- Doing the exact same shit as everyone else for some quick cash.
January 31, 2013 @ 10:34 PM
J_Got_The_Geass

Post: 186

Join Date: Sep 2012

Location: The Netherlands

@orion8 it is cool! I'll prolly cop.
what blanks do you use tho?

Changed my name from Mojosodope to J_Got_The_Geass

February 1, 2013 @ 12:53 AM
kitelifeco

Post: 48

Join Date: Jan 2013


Just waiting on them grape 5's to drop!!! razz

KiteLifeCo. "It's Not Style, It's a LifeStyle!" Follow Us @kitelifeco www.kitelifeclothing.com

February 1, 2013 @ 01:06 AM
kitelifeco

Post: 48

Join Date: Jan 2013


KiteLifeCo. "It's Not Style, It's a LifeStyle!" Follow Us @kitelifeco www.kitelifeclothing.com

February 1, 2013 @ 01:47 AM
92

Post: 1301

Join Date: Dec 2012

"Just waiting on them grape 5's to drop!!!"

can you not?
February 1, 2013 @ 03:49 AM
qrct1

Post: 1036

Join Date: May 2012

Things that make people take your "basementbrand" as a joke:
- Any of the words "Swag", "Fresh" or "Kush" in it.
- Ripping of famous logos and implementing your cheap ass logo on it.
- Doing the exact same shit as everyone else for some quick cash.
ur a faget

aeterna13.com

February 1, 2013 @ 04:14 AM
t-rex

Post: 27

Join Date: Mar 2012


check out my online store/vintage shop 

http://trexcollection.bigcartel.com/

http://t-rexcollection.blogspot.com

February 1, 2013 @ 06:27 AM
Rushnred

Post: 7

Join Date: Jun 2012

Hey wuts up....so i have been reading these forums and have seen some great stuff..... Im in the process of creating a clothing brand called Rushn Red and right now Ive been working by myself and the help of my brother. We just got done with some of our photoshoots you can see the pics at www.rushnred.com and would like to get some of your opinions of what you guys think of the brand. Also, I would like some advice on how you guys went about networking with people to learn more about this business and meeting people to help my brand grow thanx!!!!
February 1, 2013 @ 12:32 PM
wavytoussaint

Post: 2

Join Date: Jan 2013

Location: sakpasenyc.com

Some cool stuff on this thread

I just launched a new brand check out our collection here...

 http://www.sakpasenyc.com/collection/winter-delivery-13/


Store:
http://www.sakpasenyc.com/store/
February 1, 2013 @ 02:44 PM
kumasiii

Post: 144

Join Date: Dec 2012

why would anyone want to buy a sweatshirt with your shitty logo on it? idgi, there is literally nothing that sets you apart
please try harder
February 1, 2013 @ 03:41 PM
rare1

Post: 13

Join Date: Jul 2010

Location: Vancouver

Because I love you guys...

Click the picture to use your EXCLUSIVE HB FORUM PROMO CODE
It can only be used twice so who ever gets there first wins I guess
No thanks to the ass promo....
February 1, 2013 @ 05:45 PM
gregvillafana

Post: 9

Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: California

Hello Hypebeast Forum readers,
I have enjoyed reading for some time now. I would like to make a small contribution to the forum "Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread". I recently had some t-shirts printed for my soon to be face kerchief brand and was very impressed with the quality all around. The t-shirt brand is called "Cotton Heritage" http://www.cottonheritage.com/
If you are having a hard time finding a good t-shirt or sweater these guys are top notch and great people as well. Here is a couple shirts I put up on my ETSY store where you can purchase http://www.etsy.com/shop/Cilmera?ref=shop_sugg
Follow me on INSTAGRAM @g_vills
February 1, 2013 @ 07:31 PM
adoboFosho

Post: 2992

Join Date: Apr 2007

why would anyone want to buy a sweatshirt with your shitty logo on it? idgi, there is literally nothing that sets you apart
please try harder
but its sick pussy tho

http://www.ebay.com/usr/adobo_fosho... selling black/white flyknits... look like yeezy!!!

February 1, 2013 @ 08:26 PM
noneotherclothes

Post: 92

Join Date: Jun 2012

Everyone check out None Other Clothing sale right now on our Native Tee http://noneotherclothing.bigcartel.com/product/none-native

Like us on facebook at www.facebook.com/noneotherclothing and get some gear at noneotherclothing.com!

February 1, 2013 @ 09:15 PM
logojones

Post: 54

Join Date: Nov 2012

Hey guys, we're getting ready to drop our first line this spring! Very excited. 

www.facebook.com/originallyfresh
Twitter & Instagram: @originallyfresh


this guy looks like he has a dookie in his pants

r e a c h 4 t h e s t a r s b u t d o n t g e t 2 c l o s e y o u m i g h t b u r n y o u r h a n d

February 1, 2013 @ 09:20 PM
logojones

Post: 54

Join Date: Nov 2012

Hey guys I got a brand called Trainwreckers Club and just wanting to get some feed back. I rebranded and created a new look and logo for the brand but still got my old designs to sell. If you guys like what you see, like our facebook page or follow our tumblr. You can even support and help me produce some more shirts by buying one! Thanks guys!

Facebook
Tumblr
Buy!









I also got a new design coming after I sell enough of my old inventory to make new ones. Tell me what you guys think. Critique is much appreciated! The orange is a brighter orange but for some reason this jpg image is bad quality.

really like the simplicity of your logo but I would (personally) get rid of the black dot/hole on the badge. Real clean and strong no need to distract the eye.

r e a c h 4 t h e s t a r s b u t d o n t g e t 2 c l o s e y o u m i g h t b u r n y o u r h a n d

February 2, 2013 @ 03:41 AM
TrainwreckersClub

Post: 67

Join Date: Nov 2012

Hey guys I got a brand called Trainwreckers Club and just wanting to get some feed back. I rebranded and created a new look and logo for the brand but still got my old designs to sell. If you guys like what you see, like our facebook page or follow our tumblr. You can even support and help me produce some more shirts by buying one! Thanks guys!

Facebook
Tumblr
Buy!









I also got a new design coming after I sell enough of my old inventory to make new ones. Tell me what you guys think. Critique is much appreciated! The orange is a brighter orange but for some reason this jpg image is bad quality.

really like the simplicity of your logo but I would (personally) get rid of the black dot/hole on the badge. Real clean and strong no need to distract the eye.
Thanks. Thanks for the input!
February 2, 2013 @ 07:07 AM
Vezflow

Post: 47

Join Date: Oct 2006


Manhattan Motives


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