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November 20, 2012 @ 09:36 PM
jarrelsylvers

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Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: Chicago, Illinois

@timk125 I really dig the top typography you used for the social logo. I think it would function well as a theme for a tee or maybe a whole collection similar to SSUR's Commes Des joints. But basically you can build a few pieces around a theme like that

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November 20, 2012 @ 09:45 PM
timk125

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@jarrelsylvers Thanks man, and thanks for the suggestions to think about.
November 20, 2012 @ 09:49 PM
wcfrontrvnners

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Location: Hayward, Ca

@runnerupapparel Thank you for making that known. Couldn't agree with you more fam.

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November 20, 2012 @ 09:51 PM
timk125

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Here's my idea for a logo, I'm looking to use the pill bottle on it's own every once in a while. Thoughts and critique would be awesome. Thanks.


logo2 by
November 20, 2012 @ 09:56 PM
jarrelsylvers

Post: 22

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Location: Chicago, Illinois

@craftysince90 Those hoodies and beanies! Good stuff

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November 20, 2012 @ 10:17 PM
HighlyHonored

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Location: United States




I really like this tee. It is hard enough to come up with a solid illustration like that tiger, but to incorporate it into a design that flows and fits well on a t-shirt is even harder. I also like how you used the scratches across the HH on the front graphic to tie it in to the piece as a whole. Probably one of the most well executed pieces I've seen on this forum so far. Keep it up!


Not knocking it, but I wonder if he's a big CFL fan...


Hamilton Tiger-Cats


Damn...
Never seen that before. I thought the illustration was original



a lot of things in this industry aren't original. everyone rips, re-appropriates, or bases an idea of something. "nothing is original, there's nothing new under the sun, it's not what you do... but how it's done". that's one of my favorite lines from Nas. It's so true, everything repeats itself.

Now if someone just straight up jacks the whole design without changing it, that's stupid. But it is what it is. You can be original by taking someones design or logo and making it better or yours.

I do like original work as well, but isn't the point of this industry to piss evryone off and cross the lines?

look at johnny cupcakes, the hundreds, supreme (the king of rips), and other brands. they all use other art as a template of their designs. it's called "steal like an artist".


either way, i see all your views. we all have our own method to creating. i'm not saying steal all your work, but know when to steal and know when to create from scratch. I've had a design stolen from a growing comapny. I just took the L, it is what it is.

anyway, dope t shirt. even if the tiger is taken from a sports team or drawn from scratch.


I'm sorry but that is a terrible way at looking at things. There is a difference between a logo flip and trying to pass off work that you do not own or that you did not create. I did not know that was already a sports team logo. The tiger was not changed at all. That team probably paid a bunch of money for that illustration. What if you had worked really hard on a drawing to incorporate into your design as a whole and someone just took that piece and put different type over it? There is nothing clever about taking someones hard work and trying to pass it off as your own. What you are advocating is frustrating and essentially stealing.




I never stated this what an original artwork. While i agree with you Runnerup, both is true. Kudos to you if youre able to produce everything hand drawn, not many people do. But i dont see any harm in using a sports logo flip for a small brand made up of college students. This industry isnt always original, and this is a rare time that i found a sports logo go with my concept of the Tiger Division from the military. What Aldente said about this industry is completely true

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November 20, 2012 @ 10:18 PM
HighlyHonored

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^^^^ still a nice shirt...

havnt been in this thread in a while...

Twin collum....nice clothes not my personal style but i like it.....

ADC...I WANNA SEE SOME OF YOUR NEW SHIT MAN...i wish i would have copped that 93 mentality shirt but to broke...i might hit you soon..

i will have something to show in the next week or 2


Thank you lol

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November 20, 2012 @ 10:23 PM
mojosodope

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Location: The Netherlands

@easternco pretty cool man!

I disgust myself but I am not unhappy about that.

November 20, 2012 @ 10:24 PM
loungist

Post: 18

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Im new to the forums, but ive been speculating this site for a while.
My and friend and I started Lounge last spring, and we were selling our shirts to homies and kids at school. Itd be tight to expand, help us out. and please critique.

Samples from spring:



Designs I did:




November 20, 2012 @ 10:30 PM
mojosodope

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Location: The Netherlands

cool that u found a little audience!
but things like the last picture looks very unprofessional, the third looks pretty good tho!

I disgust myself but I am not unhappy about that.

November 20, 2012 @ 10:45 PM
loungist

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cool that u found a little audience!
but things like the last picture looks very unprofessional, the third looks pretty good tho!

Thanks for the feedback
November 20, 2012 @ 10:57 PM
al dente co.

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Here's my idea for a logo, I'm looking to use the pill bottle on it's own every once in a while. Thoughts and critique would be awesome. Thanks.


logo2 by



remember when doing a logo, it has to be something you can scale down and still notice is. that looks more of a design than a logo. i'd also sharpen the text a bit.

the circle one was nice, maybe if you used a thicker circle it'll work better.

good luck.

al dente company // aldenteco.com

November 20, 2012 @ 11:01 PM
HighlyHonored

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Anyways, Add us on IG: Highlyhonored




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November 20, 2012 @ 11:07 PM
timk125

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@al dente co

I see what you're saying. Thanks for the response.

The thicker circle definitely looks better. I'll have to play around with it some more. Just need to draw up a bunch of stuff.

Thanks!
November 20, 2012 @ 11:25 PM
chads

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Location: Vermont

Here's my idea for a logo, I'm looking to use the pill bottle on it's own every once in a while. Thoughts and critique would be awesome. Thanks.


logo2 by

I like the text a lot but I think you should keep the pill bottle and the text separate. If you do this, make sure the test is centered from top to bottom line. Also, I would work on the pill bottle more. It honestly just looks like some colored shaped; add some more detail so that its more obvious.

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November 21, 2012 @ 12:16 AM
timk125

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@chadacadabra Thanks for the feedback. I was trying to be as minimalist as possible with the bottle but I see your point.
November 21, 2012 @ 01:04 AM
twincolumn

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Here's my idea for a logo, I'm looking to use the pill bottle on it's own every once in a while. Thoughts and critique would be awesome. Thanks.


logo2 by



remember when doing a logo, it has to be something you can scale down and still notice is. that looks more of a design than a logo. i'd also sharpen the text a bit.

the circle one was nice, maybe if you used a thicker circle it'll work better.

good luck.


Text looks plenty sharp, but I agree with the rest

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November 21, 2012 @ 01:30 AM
Broken Bank Clo

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Location: San Diego

Anyways, Add us on IG: Highlyhonored




following sir

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November 21, 2012 @ 01:57 AM
paperboyjim

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Location: Canada


Feedback?
Merch
November 21, 2012 @ 02:45 AM
al dente co.

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Anyways, Add us on IG: Highlyhonored





sweet.

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November 21, 2012 @ 02:47 AM
al dente co.

Post: 339

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Location: MIAMI

Im new to the forums, but ive been speculating this site for a while.
My and friend and I started Lounge last spring, and we were selling our shirts to homies and kids at school. Itd be tight to expand, help us out. and please critique.

Samples from spring:



Designs I did:






on the last one... if the font was different it'll be dope.

al dente company // aldenteco.com

November 21, 2012 @ 02:48 AM
Frank_

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im actually thinking of closing are facebook page i think thats to much info to just have for no real reason..
November 21, 2012 @ 02:53 AM
drewlance

Post: 20

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Location: Lexington

My brand just did a new video, check it out and let me know what you think



House Fire Collective
November 21, 2012 @ 03:28 AM
jaemznugyen

Post: 297

Join Date: Sep 2012

Im new to the forums, but ive been speculating this site for a while.
My and friend and I started Lounge last spring, and we were selling our shirts to homies and kids at school. Itd be tight to expand, help us out. and please critique.

Samples from spring:



Designs I did:






I don't think putting the word "Lounge" on a bunch of pictures is really considered a design.
November 21, 2012 @ 03:42 AM
al dente co.

Post: 339

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: MIAMI

Perfect example of basing a design off of something.... i actually came up with a pretty cool typeface for my brand... i got inspired by some earlier posts....

tell me what you guys think...

SUPREMES



MINE


I used the idea of the shirt for this typeface....

talk to me....

al dente company // aldenteco.com

November 21, 2012 @ 03:43 AM
al dente co.

Post: 339

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: MIAMI

for all the new comers here....

take a look at my look book.
http://aldenteco.com/lookbook.html


i'm the idiot at the end when they say boogieman ... if anyone wants to put a face to my posts.

al dente company // aldenteco.com

November 21, 2012 @ 03:44 AM
Natural Talent

Post: 5

Join Date: Jan 2012

Location: RVA

Natural Talent Clothing
This is a brand we started in late December of 2010 Tell me what you think.



naturaltalentclothing.com

-Stay Talented

November 21, 2012 @ 03:50 AM
Natural Talent

Post: 5

Join Date: Jan 2012

Location: RVA

Perfect example of basing a design off of something.... i actually came up with a pretty cool typeface for my brand... i got inspired by some earlier posts....

tell me what you guys think...





I used the idea of the shirt for this typeface....

talk to me....


The type face for the logo is legit as for the shirt it needs something to tie together the meaning of the words with the design

-Stay Talented

November 21, 2012 @ 07:15 PM
lowlives

Post: 48

Join Date: Nov 2012

@natural talent, what the fuck did i just watch?

www.lowlivesclothing.com IG: lowlivesclothing

November 21, 2012 @ 08:09 PM
twincolumn

Post: 265

Join Date: Nov 2012

Hey guys, just wanted to post my Twin Column x Raider Klan collab drop 2 on here.

Raglan Crewnecks


Raider Longsleeves


Raider Sweatshirts


Keep in mind people like these collab garments busy, and they do not look so busy when the garment is on.

TwinColumn.com @TwinColumnCult Facebook.com/TwinColumn


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