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November 20, 2012 @ 11:07 PM
timk125

Post: 22

Join Date: Nov 2012

@al dente co

I see what you're saying. Thanks for the response.

The thicker circle definitely looks better. I'll have to play around with it some more. Just need to draw up a bunch of stuff.

Thanks!
November 20, 2012 @ 11:25 PM
chads

Post: 1573

Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: Vermont

Here's my idea for a logo, I'm looking to use the pill bottle on it's own every once in a while. Thoughts and critique would be awesome. Thanks.


logo2 by

I like the text a lot but I think you should keep the pill bottle and the text separate. If you do this, make sure the test is centered from top to bottom line. Also, I would work on the pill bottle more. It honestly just looks like some colored shaped; add some more detail so that its more obvious.

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November 21, 2012 @ 12:16 AM
timk125

Post: 22

Join Date: Nov 2012

@chadacadabra Thanks for the feedback. I was trying to be as minimalist as possible with the bottle but I see your point.
November 21, 2012 @ 01:04 AM
twincolumn

Post: 269

Join Date: Nov 2012

Here's my idea for a logo, I'm looking to use the pill bottle on it's own every once in a while. Thoughts and critique would be awesome. Thanks.


logo2 by



remember when doing a logo, it has to be something you can scale down and still notice is. that looks more of a design than a logo. i'd also sharpen the text a bit.

the circle one was nice, maybe if you used a thicker circle it'll work better.

good luck.


Text looks plenty sharp, but I agree with the rest

TwinColumn.com @TwinColumnCult Facebook.com/TwinColumn

November 21, 2012 @ 01:30 AM
Broken Bank Clo

Post: 533

Join Date: Apr 2009

Location: San Diego

Anyways, Add us on IG: Highlyhonored




following sir

Broken Bank Clothing *** www.BrokenBankClothing.com *** @brokenbankclo

November 21, 2012 @ 01:57 AM
paperboyjim

Post: 53

Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: Canada


Feedback?
Merch
November 21, 2012 @ 02:45 AM
al dente co.

Post: 339

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: MIAMI

Anyways, Add us on IG: Highlyhonored





sweet.

al dente company // aldenteco.com

November 21, 2012 @ 02:47 AM
al dente co.

Post: 339

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: MIAMI

Im new to the forums, but ive been speculating this site for a while.
My and friend and I started Lounge last spring, and we were selling our shirts to homies and kids at school. Itd be tight to expand, help us out. and please critique.

Samples from spring:



Designs I did:






on the last one... if the font was different it'll be dope.

al dente company // aldenteco.com

November 21, 2012 @ 02:48 AM
Frank_

Post: 1224

Join Date: Jan 2009

im actually thinking of closing are facebook page i think thats to much info to just have for no real reason..
November 21, 2012 @ 02:53 AM
drewlance

Post: 20

Join Date: Apr 2012

Location: Lexington

My brand just did a new video, check it out and let me know what you think



House Fire Collective
November 21, 2012 @ 03:28 AM
jaemznugyen

Post: 351

Join Date: Sep 2012

Im new to the forums, but ive been speculating this site for a while.
My and friend and I started Lounge last spring, and we were selling our shirts to homies and kids at school. Itd be tight to expand, help us out. and please critique.

Samples from spring:



Designs I did:






I don't think putting the word "Lounge" on a bunch of pictures is really considered a design.
November 21, 2012 @ 03:42 AM
al dente co.

Post: 339

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: MIAMI

Perfect example of basing a design off of something.... i actually came up with a pretty cool typeface for my brand... i got inspired by some earlier posts....

tell me what you guys think...

SUPREMES



MINE


I used the idea of the shirt for this typeface....

talk to me....

al dente company // aldenteco.com

November 21, 2012 @ 03:43 AM
al dente co.

Post: 339

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: MIAMI

for all the new comers here....

take a look at my look book.
http://aldenteco.com/lookbook.html


i'm the idiot at the end when they say boogieman ... if anyone wants to put a face to my posts.

al dente company // aldenteco.com

November 21, 2012 @ 03:44 AM
Natural Talent

Post: 5

Join Date: Jan 2012

Location: RVA

Natural Talent Clothing
This is a brand we started in late December of 2010 Tell me what you think.



naturaltalentclothing.com

-Stay Talented

November 21, 2012 @ 03:50 AM
Natural Talent

Post: 5

Join Date: Jan 2012

Location: RVA

Perfect example of basing a design off of something.... i actually came up with a pretty cool typeface for my brand... i got inspired by some earlier posts....

tell me what you guys think...





I used the idea of the shirt for this typeface....

talk to me....


The type face for the logo is legit as for the shirt it needs something to tie together the meaning of the words with the design

-Stay Talented

November 21, 2012 @ 07:15 PM
lowlives

Post: 48

Join Date: Nov 2012

@natural talent, what the fuck did i just watch?

www.lowlivesclothing.com IG: lowlivesclothing

November 21, 2012 @ 08:09 PM
twincolumn

Post: 269

Join Date: Nov 2012

Hey guys, just wanted to post my Twin Column x Raider Klan collab drop 2 on here.

Raglan Crewnecks


Raider Longsleeves


Raider Sweatshirts


Keep in mind people like these collab garments busy, and they do not look so busy when the garment is on.

TwinColumn.com @TwinColumnCult Facebook.com/TwinColumn

November 21, 2012 @ 08:31 PM
lowlives

Post: 48

Join Date: Nov 2012

@twincolumn to be honest, I like the busy style, the sleeves on the sweatshirts look so dope dude. But in regards to twin COLVMN I think the v confuses people, because it represents both an A and a U.

but doing well mate, I have my first line on it's way!

www.lowlivesclothing.com IG: lowlivesclothing

November 21, 2012 @ 08:50 PM
al dente co.

Post: 339

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: MIAMI

cool

al dente company // aldenteco.com

November 21, 2012 @ 10:03 PM
BEENDOINGIT

Post: 550

Join Date: Feb 2012

Location: Scotland.

My brand just did a new video, check it out and let me know what you think



House Fire Collective


This makes 0% sense to me.
November 22, 2012 @ 12:12 AM
wcfrontrvnners

Post: 346

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: Hayward, Ca

Photos of our "Feather" Hoodie dropping 11/26/12



WCFRVS.COM INSTAGRAM & TWITTER: WCFRONTRVNNERS ; JJFRNTRVNNERS

November 22, 2012 @ 02:14 AM
tuesdaygirlfriend

Post: 177

Join Date: Nov 2012

Location: SAN DIEGO, CA

i changed up my designs again. i totally dropped the graphics i had and made everything a text design, but i feel more solid about this one. simple, clean, and straight forward.

lmk what you think


“We Are the Rare Creatures” - Pocket print graphic tee


“Freed Spirits Crew” - Pocket and back print graphic tee


“Fuck Your Feelings” - Back print graphic tee
November 22, 2012 @ 02:43 AM
Angry Chair

Post: 133

Join Date: Oct 2006

my dude Kevin Montejano's walkout shirt for his Gladiator fight on Saturday.


https://www.facebook.com/pages/Pacifist-Fight- Wear/198022430260055

November 22, 2012 @ 02:45 AM
Frank_

Post: 1224

Join Date: Jan 2009

i like the fuck your feelings shirt
November 22, 2012 @ 02:53 AM
Frank_

Post: 1224

Join Date: Jan 2009

@aldenteco just watched your lookbook again and BRUH WHEN I COME TO MIA.....PLEASE HOOK ME UP WITH THE GIRL WITH THE BLUE HIGHLIGHTS PLEASE..cool
November 22, 2012 @ 03:15 AM
timk125

Post: 22

Join Date: Nov 2012

@diefasterdarren I like them all but the last one; has a too much of Y&R feeling to it for me. I would buy the first one.
November 22, 2012 @ 03:26 AM
lightworks1crew

Post: 41

Join Date: Aug 2012

Location: PA

@aldenteco did you make the typeface?

THE NAME OF THE GAME / www.lightworksclothing.com

November 22, 2012 @ 06:00 AM
tuesdaygirlfriend

Post: 177

Join Date: Nov 2012

Location: SAN DIEGO, CA

@xdung @timk125 thanks guys.

does anyone feel like anything is missing from the designs?
November 22, 2012 @ 06:14 AM
timk125

Post: 22

Join Date: Nov 2012

@diefasterdarren I don't think anything is missing. On the "Can't stop me from being me" design the bottom "me" being bigger is a little odd. I would see how it looks with both the me's being the same size, and possibly the whole saying in a different font or the same size font.
November 22, 2012 @ 06:23 AM
Frank_

Post: 1224

Join Date: Jan 2009

Only think is you should have Atleast 1 design and not all just text designs

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