Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

Nov 20, 2012 @ 22:18
^^^^ still a nice shirt...

havnt been in this thread in a while...

Twin collum....nice clothes not my personal style but i like it.....

ADC...I WANNA SEE SOME OF YOUR NEW SHIT MAN...i wish i would have copped that 93 mentality shirt but to broke...i might hit you soon..

i will have something to show in the next week or 2


Thank you lol
Nov 20, 2012 @ 22:23
@easternco pretty cool man!

Changed my name from Mojosodope to J_Got_The_Geass

Nov 20, 2012 @ 22:24
Im new to the forums, but ive been speculating this site for a while.
My and friend and I started Lounge last spring, and we were selling our shirts to homies and kids at school. Itd be tight to expand, help us out. and please critique.

Samples from spring:



Designs I did:




Nov 20, 2012 @ 22:30
cool that u found a little audience!
but things like the last picture looks very unprofessional, the third looks pretty good tho!

Changed my name from Mojosodope to J_Got_The_Geass

Nov 20, 2012 @ 22:45
cool that u found a little audience!
but things like the last picture looks very unprofessional, the third looks pretty good tho!

Thanks for the feedback
Nov 20, 2012 @ 22:57
Here's my idea for a logo, I'm looking to use the pill bottle on it's own every once in a while. Thoughts and critique would be awesome. Thanks.


logo2 by



remember when doing a logo, it has to be something you can scale down and still notice is. that looks more of a design than a logo. i'd also sharpen the text a bit.

the circle one was nice, maybe if you used a thicker circle it'll work better.

good luck.

al dente company // aldenteco.com

Nov 20, 2012 @ 23:01
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Nov 20, 2012 @ 23:07
@al dente co

I see what you're saying. Thanks for the response.

The thicker circle definitely looks better. I'll have to play around with it some more. Just need to draw up a bunch of stuff.

Thanks!
Nov 20, 2012 @ 23:25
Here's my idea for a logo, I'm looking to use the pill bottle on it's own every once in a while. Thoughts and critique would be awesome. Thanks.


logo2 by

I like the text a lot but I think you should keep the pill bottle and the text separate. If you do this, make sure the test is centered from top to bottom line. Also, I would work on the pill bottle more. It honestly just looks like some colored shaped; add some more detail so that its more obvious.

chadacadabra.tumblr.com

Nov 21, 2012 @ 00:16
@chadacadabra Thanks for the feedback. I was trying to be as minimalist as possible with the bottle but I see your point.
Nov 21, 2012 @ 01:04
Originally posted by Inactive User
Here's my idea for a logo, I'm looking to use the pill bottle on it's own every once in a while. Thoughts and critique would be awesome. Thanks.


logo2 by



remember when doing a logo, it has to be something you can scale down and still notice is. that looks more of a design than a logo. i'd also sharpen the text a bit.

the circle one was nice, maybe if you used a thicker circle it'll work better.

good luck.


Text looks plenty sharp, but I agree with the rest

TwinColumn.com @TwinColumnCult Facebook.com/TwinColumn

Nov 21, 2012 @ 01:30
Anyways, Add us on IG: Highlyhonored




following sir

Broken Bank Clothing *** www.BrokenBankClothing.com *** @brokenbankclo

Nov 21, 2012 @ 01:57

Feedback?
Merch
Nov 21, 2012 @ 02:45
Anyways, Add us on IG: Highlyhonored





sweet.

al dente company // aldenteco.com

Nov 21, 2012 @ 02:47
Im new to the forums, but ive been speculating this site for a while.
My and friend and I started Lounge last spring, and we were selling our shirts to homies and kids at school. Itd be tight to expand, help us out. and please critique.

Samples from spring:



Designs I did:






on the last one... if the font was different it'll be dope.

al dente company // aldenteco.com

Nov 21, 2012 @ 02:48
im actually thinking of closing are facebook page i think thats to much info to just have for no real reason..
Nov 21, 2012 @ 02:53
My brand just did a new video, check it out and let me know what you think



House Fire Collective
Nov 21, 2012 @ 03:28
Im new to the forums, but ive been speculating this site for a while.
My and friend and I started Lounge last spring, and we were selling our shirts to homies and kids at school. Itd be tight to expand, help us out. and please critique.

Samples from spring:



Designs I did:






I don't think putting the word "Lounge" on a bunch of pictures is really considered a design.

jaemz.tumblr.com // @ja.emz

Nov 21, 2012 @ 03:42
Perfect example of basing a design off of something.... i actually came up with a pretty cool typeface for my brand... i got inspired by some earlier posts....

tell me what you guys think...

SUPREMES



MINE


I used the idea of the shirt for this typeface....

talk to me....

al dente company // aldenteco.com

Nov 21, 2012 @ 03:43
for all the new comers here....

take a look at my look book.
http://aldenteco.com/lookbook.html


i'm the idiot at the end when they say boogieman ... if anyone wants to put a face to my posts.

al dente company // aldenteco.com

Nov 21, 2012 @ 03:44
Natural Talent Clothing
This is a brand we started in late December of 2010 Tell me what you think.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_gLhO-5tGSw
http://youtu.be/Cp4ZgHdo8nI

naturaltalentclothing.com

-Stay Talented

Nov 21, 2012 @ 03:50
Originally posted by Inactive User
Perfect example of basing a design off of something.... i actually came up with a pretty cool typeface for my brand... i got inspired by some earlier posts....

tell me what you guys think...





I used the idea of the shirt for this typeface....

talk to me....


The type face for the logo is legit as for the shirt it needs something to tie together the meaning of the words with the design

-Stay Talented

Nov 21, 2012 @ 19:15
@natural talent, what the fuck did i just watch?

www.lowlivesclothing.com IG: lowlivesclothing

Nov 21, 2012 @ 20:09
Hey guys, just wanted to post my Twin Column x Raider Klan collab drop 2 on here.

Raglan Crewnecks


Raider Longsleeves


Raider Sweatshirts


Keep in mind people like these collab garments busy, and they do not look so busy when the garment is on.

TwinColumn.com @TwinColumnCult Facebook.com/TwinColumn

Nov 21, 2012 @ 20:31
@twincolumn to be honest, I like the busy style, the sleeves on the sweatshirts look so dope dude. But in regards to twin COLVMN I think the v confuses people, because it represents both an A and a U.

but doing well mate, I have my first line on it's way!

www.lowlivesclothing.com IG: lowlivesclothing

Nov 21, 2012 @ 20:50
smokeyface

al dente company // aldenteco.com

Nov 21, 2012 @ 22:03
My brand just did a new video, check it out and let me know what you think



House Fire Collective


This makes 0% sense to me.

Inactive User

Nov 22, 2012 @ 00:12
Photos of our "Feather" Hoodie dropping 11/26/12


Nov 22, 2012 @ 02:14
i changed up my designs again. i totally dropped the graphics i had and made everything a text design, but i feel more solid about this one. simple, clean, and straight forward.

lmk what you think


“We Are the Rare Creatures” - Pocket print graphic tee


“Freed Spirits Crew” - Pocket and back print graphic tee


“Fuck Your Feelings” - Back print graphic tee
Nov 22, 2012 @ 02:43
my dude Kevin Montejano's walkout shirt for his Gladiator fight on Saturday.


https://www.facebook.com/pages/Pacifist-Fight- Wear/198022430260055

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