Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

October 04, 2012 @ 17:43:57
makin moves....


IG: @mobbyluii

October 04, 2012 @ 17:48:24


I was wondering if you had any feedback on this logo/ should we change some things on it,etc.
Any feedback is appreciated!


Thats pretty dope, the only thing I'd say is move the AL and stuff up a little bit looks like its a little too low. but still dope.


Alright, I'll fix that. Really appreciate the feedback!!
Quick question: Should we keep the crown or change it so it's 3 points instead of 4?
October 04, 2012 @ 17:53:33


I was wondering if you had any feedback on this logo/ should we change some things on it,etc.
Any feedback is appreciated!


Thats pretty dope, the only thing I'd say is move the AL and stuff up a little bit looks like its a little too low. but still dope.


Alright, I'll fix that. Really appreciate the feedback!!
Quick question: Should we keep the crown or change it so it's 3 points instead of 4?

to be honest, id stay away from the olive leaf logo and the "est. MMXII" and all that roman numeral stuff. Alotta people have thrown that on shirts...

I like the logo, but if you want to stand out, id say stay away from those 2 things

IG: @mobbyluii

October 04, 2012 @ 17:57:10
@mobbyluii

Yeah, that's something to consider. We did it without the olive leaf and est MMXII , but it felt too plain. But then again simplicity is best, right?
How would you feel if we changed the wreath to an emblem type design, like a circle around it?
October 04, 2012 @ 17:58:08
makin moves....



this your brand? I like it man

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October 04, 2012 @ 18:06:56
@mobbyluii

Yeah, that's something to consider. We did it without the olive leaf and est MMXII , but it felt too plain. But then again simplicity is best, right?
How would you feel if we changed the wreath to an emblem type design, like a circle around it?
yeah simplicity is best

and id sample it with a circle around it and post the original and the new one and get some feedback on which one targets your customers better.. try it it out tho and post em here bro!

makin moves....



this your brand? I like it man

yup its something ive been working on for 4 years and finally have the money to go into production... dont sleep on the previews ill be posting in the next coming weeks.

IG: @mobbyluii

October 04, 2012 @ 18:35:06
Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayalaughing0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!
October 04, 2012 @ 18:36:12
@mobbyluii

I can't wait to see what you have coming out, great that you're able to drop it
October 04, 2012 @ 18:43:33
Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayalaughing0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!

I like that, try and make the circle a bit thicker and see how that looks!
@mobbyluii

I can't wait to see what you have coming out, great that you're able to drop it

thanks bro!

IG: @mobbyluii

October 04, 2012 @ 18:51:26
@mobbyluii
You're welcome man! msg the link once it goes up!

And I'll fix that too, appreciate the help man!
October 04, 2012 @ 18:55:21
Here's my brand's script logo. I'm sure many will shit on it, but I'm interested to hear some feedback; positive and negative.

October 04, 2012 @ 18:58:56
Here's my brand's script logo. I'm sure many will shit on it, but I'm interested to hear some feedback; positive and negative.



I like it, what's the pattern/texture in the back though? I feel like it should be more defined
October 04, 2012 @ 18:59:51
Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayalaughing0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!


TBH, its not very original. star, leaf, crown are all kinda corny right now. A logo should be more simple and represent your brand
October 04, 2012 @ 19:04:46
@apollolifestyle thanks alot man. This particular rendering of the logo has shredded money running through the letters as a texture.

I completely agree with you though, this one is somewhat busy and less defined. We do use a plain black and white version on our hem tags and on some t's though.
October 04, 2012 @ 19:14:22
Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayalaughing0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!


This Logo sucks. There's too much (crown, star, alot of text), it's not simple enough. The font of the text clashes with the "olive branch" and it's not cohesive. The "olive branch" seems very unoriginal...so it doesn't separate your brand from other brands and it doesn't help give your brand an identity. But the main problem is that the "AL" font and the olive branch don't really go well together.

@illthrill_Myles

October 04, 2012 @ 19:21:41
@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:
October 04, 2012 @ 19:23:48
@mylesb

This Logo sucks. There's too much (crown, star, alot of text), it's not simple enough. The font of the text clashes with the "olive branch" and it's not cohesive. The "olive branch" seems very unoriginal...so it doesn't separate your brand from other brands and it doesn't help give your brand an identity. But the main problem is that the "AL" font and the olive branch don't really go well together.


what about the one I just posted?
October 04, 2012 @ 19:27:34
Its already more creative than the last
October 04, 2012 @ 19:29:40
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October 04, 2012 @ 19:31:15
makin moves....



can you post a better picture.... i like what i "kinda" see. lol

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October 04, 2012 @ 19:32:20
October 04, 2012 @ 20:16:02
@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:


I would simplify it even more possibly turning the rocket into a silhouette for any 1 color prints. It's not a bad idea to expand on though.



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October 04, 2012 @ 20:22:44
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Let me know whassup~

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October 04, 2012 @ 20:39:44
So here's the lookbook for the first Fall '12 drop from STANDARDZ®.
The "Basics" Pack includes a tee: $20 / Crewneck: $30 / Hoodie: $35 -- limited quantities | no reprints.
Available online this coming Wednesday (10.10.12) !

The lookbook itself was shot in film, which I feel captures the chill essence of Virginia pretty thoroughly.
Decided to use both a girl & boy to show how each piece can be pulled off regardless of gender.

Check it out in full here: http://standardzzz.com/fall-2012-basics.html
Fan page: http://facebook.com/StandardzVa
Instagram & Twitter: @StandardzVA









Let me know whassup~


I like this. The brand looks like it's off to a good start...looking forward to seeing how it expands

@illthrill_Myles

October 04, 2012 @ 20:46:19
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October 04, 2012 @ 20:52:52
@mylesb much appreciated dude

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October 04, 2012 @ 21:00:53

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October 04, 2012 @ 21:04:40
@angelooo that back print is too clean
October 04, 2012 @ 21:09:59
@dangerers thanks man! but those buttons...smokeyface

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