Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread - Page 204

October 4, 2012 @ 06:55 PM

southshorematt

Post: 27

Join Date: Sep 2012

Here's my brand's script logo. I'm sure many will shit on it, but I'm interested to hear some feedback; positive and negative.

October 4, 2012 @ 06:58 PM

apollolifestyle

Post: 100

Join Date: Sep 2012

Here's my brand's script logo. I'm sure many will shit on it, but I'm interested to hear some feedback; positive and negative.

I like it, what's the pattern/texture in the back though? I feel like it should be more defined

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

October 4, 2012 @ 06:59 PM

HighlyHonored

Post: 503

Join Date: Dec 2006

Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii

Then the olive branch:

The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayaxd0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!

TBH, its not very original. star, leaf, crown are all kinda corny right now. A logo should be more simple and represent your brand

IG: HighlyHonored - Highlyhonored.com

October 4, 2012 @ 07:04 PM

@apollolifestyle thanks alot man. This particular rendering of the logo has shredded money running through the letters as a texture.

I completely agree with you though, this one is somewhat busy and less defined. We do use a plain black and white version on our hem tags and on some t's though.

October 4, 2012 @ 07:14 PM

mylesb

Post: 12

Join Date: Oct 2012

Location: Long Beach, CA

Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii

Then the olive branch:

The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayaxd0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!

This Logo sucks. There's too much (crown, star, alot of text), it's not simple enough. The font of the text clashes with the "olive branch" and it's not cohesive. The "olive branch" seems very unoriginal...so it doesn't separate your brand from other brands and it doesn't help give your brand an identity. But the main problem is that the "AL" font and the olive branch don't really go well together.

@illthrill_Myles

October 4, 2012 @ 07:21 PM

apollolifestyle

Post: 100

Join Date: Sep 2012

@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

October 4, 2012 @ 07:23 PM

apollolifestyle

Post: 100

Join Date: Sep 2012

@mylesb

This Logo sucks. There's too much (crown, star, alot of text), it's not simple enough. The font of the text clashes with the "olive branch" and it's not cohesive. The "olive branch" seems very unoriginal...so it doesn't separate your brand from other brands and it doesn't help give your brand an identity. But the main problem is that the "AL" font and the olive branch don't really go well together.

what about the one I just posted?

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

October 4, 2012 @ 07:27 PM

HighlyHonored

Post: 503

Join Date: Dec 2006

Its already more creative than the last

IG: HighlyHonored - Highlyhonored.com

October 4, 2012 @ 07:29 PM

scratchclothing

Post: 26

Join Date: Jun 2012

VIDEO OF US OUT AT THE MAGIC SHOW IN AUGUST

October 4, 2012 @ 07:31 PM

al dente co.

Post: 298

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: MIAMI

makin moves....

can you post a better picture.... i like what i "kinda" see. lol

al dente company // aldenteco.com

October 4, 2012 @ 07:32 PM

scratchclothing

Post: 26

Join Date: Jun 2012

October 4, 2012 @ 08:16 PM

rare01

Post: 89

Join Date: Jul 2012

@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:

I would simplify it even more possibly turning the rocket into a silhouette for any 1 color prints. It's not a bad idea to expand on though.

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October 4, 2012 @ 08:22 PM

angelooo

Post: 59

Join Date: May 2012

Location: Virginia

So here's the lookbook for the first Fall '12 drop from STANDARDZ®.
The "Basics" Pack includes a tee: $20 / Crewneck: $30 / Hoodie: $35 -- limited quantities | no reprints.
Available online this coming Wednesday (10.10.12) !

The lookbook itself was shot in film, which I feel captures the chill essence of Virginia pretty thoroughly.
Decided to use both a girl & boy to show how each piece can be pulled off regardless of gender.

Check it out in full here: http://standardzzz.com/fall-2012-basics.html
Fan page: http://facebook.com/StandardzVa
Instagram & Twitter: @StandardzVA

Let me know whassup~

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October 4, 2012 @ 08:39 PM

mylesb

Post: 12

Join Date: Oct 2012

Location: Long Beach, CA

So here's the lookbook for the first Fall '12 drop from STANDARDZ®.
The "Basics" Pack includes a tee: $20 / Crewneck: $30 / Hoodie: $35 -- limited quantities | no reprints.
Available online this coming Wednesday (10.10.12) !

The lookbook itself was shot in film, which I feel captures the chill essence of Virginia pretty thoroughly.
Decided to use both a girl & boy to show how each piece can be pulled off regardless of gender.

Check it out in full here: http://standardzzz.com/fall-2012-basics.html
Fan page: http://facebook.com/StandardzVa
Instagram & Twitter: @StandardzVA

Let me know whassup~

I like this. The brand looks like it's off to a good start...looking forward to seeing how it expands

@illthrill_Myles

October 4, 2012 @ 08:46 PM

sons10

Post: 16

Join Date: Sep 2012

Mystic Sons Shirt templates > 100 % Grey Lambs Wool

Link

October 4, 2012 @ 08:52 PM

angelooo

Post: 59

Join Date: May 2012

Location: Virginia

@mylesb much appreciated dude

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October 4, 2012 @ 09:00 PM

dangerers

Post: 49

Join Date: Apr 2012

Location: College Park

Glow In The Dark Jagan Eyes buttons

http://www.facebook.com/dangerersdeathtribe * http://dangerers.bigcartel.com * http://dangerersdeathtribe.tumblr.com

October 4, 2012 @ 09:04 PM

dangerers

Post: 49

Join Date: Apr 2012

Location: College Park

@angelooo that back print is too clean

http://www.facebook.com/dangerersdeathtribe * http://dangerers.bigcartel.com * http://dangerersdeathtribe.tumblr.com

October 4, 2012 @ 09:09 PM

angelooo

Post: 59

Join Date: May 2012

Location: Virginia

@dangerers thanks man! but those buttons...

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October 4, 2012 @ 10:01 PM

apollolifestyle

Post: 100

Join Date: Sep 2012

@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:

I would simplify it even more possibly turning the rocket into a silhouette for any 1 color prints. It's not a bad idea to expand on though.

R-1 AO 1 20
49° 15′N 123° 6W
FMC – 18201006
AD INFINITUM
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Working on that for the one colors, might change the placement of the rocket too, thank you very much for the feedback!
ps. dope line, great concepts and prints

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

October 4, 2012 @ 10:14 PM

FEAture

Post: 7

Join Date: Jul 2012

Location: AZ

@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:

I would simplify it even more possibly turning the rocket into a silhouette for any 1 color prints. It's not a bad idea to expand on though.

R-1 AO 1 20
49° 15′N 123° 6W
FMC – 18201006
AD INFINITUM
ONE OF A KIND. RARE1

WWW.RARE1.CA
Facebook
instagram @rare1

Working on that for the one colors, might change the placement of the rocket too, thank you very much for the feedback!
ps. dope line, great concepts and prints

I would get rid of the circle.

October 5, 2012 @ 01:20 AM

UnlimitedSusNiqqa

Post: 1154

Join Date: May 2009

Location: in the cut

Hey guys to get a perspective, What programs do you guys do when designing? Photoshop? GLooks in advanced

October 5, 2012 @ 01:33 AM

steppingonsnails

Post: 61

Join Date: Mar 2012

Location: Toronto

@rsomers6 I usually do graphics for bands and shit, but often I'll paint/draw in photoshop, often over a picture I drew in pen and scanned. Or for like logo designs and patters you can use Illustrator which is also made by Adobe

always use at least 300 dpi when doing these designs so they look nice printed!

facebook.com/steppingonsnails

October 5, 2012 @ 01:35 AM

bedrockhoopz

Post: 34

Join Date: Jun 2012

[FEASIBLE]
New brand, Tell me if you F with these mock shirts..

Link

October 5, 2012 @ 01:37 AM

UnlimitedSusNiqqa

Post: 1154

Join Date: May 2009

Location: in the cut

@rsomers6 I usually do graphics for bands and shit, but often I'll paint/draw in photoshop, often over a picture I drew in pen and scanned. Or for like logo designs and patters you can use Illustrator which is also made by Adobe

always use at least 300 dpi when doing these designs so they look nice printed!

Thanks man Ima DL Illustrator

October 5, 2012 @ 02:24 AM

chadacadabra

Post: 903

Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: Vermont

Hey guys to get a perspective, What programs do you guys do when designing? Photoshop? GLooks in advanced

google.com

[FEASIBLE]
New brand, Tell me if you F with these mock shirts..

Link

Yo, I really don't F wit these designs.

chadacadabra.tumblr.com

October 5, 2012 @ 02:43 AM

bedrockhoopz

Post: 34

Join Date: Jun 2012

Hey guys to get a perspective, What programs do you guys do when designing? Photoshop? GLooks in advanced

google.com
[FEASIBLE]
New brand, Tell me if you F with these mock shirts..

Link

Yo, I really don't F wit these designs.

What changes should I make .. ?

October 5, 2012 @ 08:54 AM

aaronstrdywngs

Post: 53

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: Manchester, UK

Just looking for somebodies opinion on big cartel stores.
I prefer not to use big cartel because everyone is doing it but I don't know if people who are currently using it find an increase in web sales?
Is it because of how easy it is to select your product, checkout with minimal address and card forms to fill out?
I use an online store built into my website and would appreciate any feedback on it?

www.strdywngs.com

thanks

Rad produced not mass produced: www.strdywngs.com | strdywngs.tumblr.com

October 5, 2012 @ 11:52 AM

karakter1

Post: 587

Join Date: Jun 2006

i remember when all over print was hot....everybody made all over print...no big deal. customers bought.
i remember when hounds-tooth pattern was hot....everybody made hounds-tooth print...no big deal. customers bought.
fitteds.....
snapbacks...
selvage denim jeans...
bandanas..
polka dots..
native American print...

something becomes a trend..all the brands incorporate it into the line....

There is a difference between starting a trend and following & running a trend to the ground.

ive seen at least 20 lookbooks this season with native American print.

which brand is the trend setter?...im assuming the other 19 run it in the ground?

does the customer only want product for the brand who started the trend?......if so, alot of those brand got the game all wrong! ......................................................or maybe we have it wrong.

October 5, 2012 @ 12:03 PM

karakter1

Post: 587

Join Date: Jun 2006

Just looking for somebodies opinion on big cartel stores.
I prefer not to use big cartel because everyone is doing it but I don't know if people who are currently using it find an increase in web sales?
Is it because of how easy it is to select your product, checkout with minimal address and card forms to fill out?
I use an online store built into my website and would appreciate any feedback on it?

www.strdywngs.com

thanks

i don't understand....you don't want to use bigcartel, because everyone uses it?

If they are the #1 webstore with easy setup, payment options, 1000's of templates and customization options, great customer service and inventory set up and tracking, and pretty good traffic reports.........