October 4, 2012 @ 06:06 PM
mobbyluii

Post: 1988

Join Date: Nov 2011

@mobbyluii

Yeah, that's something to consider. We did it without the olive leaf and est MMXII , but it felt too plain. But then again simplicity is best, right?
How would you feel if we changed the wreath to an emblem type design, like a circle around it?

yeah simplicity is best

and id sample it with a circle around it and post the original and the new one and get some feedback on which one targets your customers better.. try it it out tho and post em here bro!

makin moves....



this your brand? I like it man

yup its something ive been working on for 4 years and finally have the money to go into production... dont sleep on the previews ill be posting in the next coming weeks.

IG: @mobbyluii

October 4, 2012 @ 06:35 PM
AreteBrand

Post: 130

Join Date: Sep 2012

Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayaxd0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!

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October 4, 2012 @ 06:36 PM
AreteBrand

Post: 130

Join Date: Sep 2012

@mobbyluii

I can't wait to see what you have coming out, great that you're able to drop it

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October 4, 2012 @ 06:43 PM
mobbyluii

Post: 1988

Join Date: Nov 2011

Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayaxd0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!

I like that, try and make the circle a bit thicker and see how that looks!
@mobbyluii

I can't wait to see what you have coming out, great that you're able to drop it

thanks bro!

IG: @mobbyluii

October 4, 2012 @ 06:51 PM
AreteBrand

Post: 130

Join Date: Sep 2012

@mobbyluii
You're welcome man! msg the link once it goes up!

And I'll fix that too, appreciate the help man!

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

October 4, 2012 @ 06:55 PM
southshorematt

Post: 38

Join Date: Sep 2012

Here's my brand's script logo. I'm sure many will shit on it, but I'm interested to hear some feedback; positive and negative.

October 4, 2012 @ 06:58 PM
AreteBrand

Post: 130

Join Date: Sep 2012

Here's my brand's script logo. I'm sure many will shit on it, but I'm interested to hear some feedback; positive and negative.



I like it, what's the pattern/texture in the back though? I feel like it should be more defined

SHOP: http://www.apollolifestyle.bigcartel.com FACEBOOK: http://www.facebook.com/apollolifestyle

October 4, 2012 @ 06:59 PM
Danny

Post: 566

Join Date: Dec 2006

Location: United States

Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayaxd0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!



TBH, its not very original. star, leaf, crown are all kinda corny right now. A logo should be more simple and represent your brand
October 4, 2012 @ 07:04 PM
southshorematt

Post: 38

Join Date: Sep 2012

@apollolifestyle thanks alot man. This particular rendering of the logo has shredded money running through the letters as a texture.

I completely agree with you though, this one is somewhat busy and less defined. We do use a plain black and white version on our hem tags and on some t's though.
October 4, 2012 @ 07:14 PM
mylesb

Post: 12

Join Date: Oct 2012

Location: Long Beach, CA

Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayaxd0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!


This Logo sucks. There's too much (crown, star, alot of text), it's not simple enough. The font of the text clashes with the "olive branch" and it's not cohesive. The "olive branch" seems very unoriginal...so it doesn't separate your brand from other brands and it doesn't help give your brand an identity. But the main problem is that the "AL" font and the olive branch don't really go well together.

@illthrill_Myles

October 4, 2012 @ 07:21 PM
AreteBrand

Post: 130

Join Date: Sep 2012

@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:

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October 4, 2012 @ 07:23 PM
AreteBrand

Post: 130

Join Date: Sep 2012

@mylesb



This Logo sucks. There's too much (crown, star, alot of text), it's not simple enough. The font of the text clashes with the "olive branch" and it's not cohesive. The "olive branch" seems very unoriginal...so it doesn't separate your brand from other brands and it doesn't help give your brand an identity. But the main problem is that the "AL" font and the olive branch don't really go well together.


what about the one I just posted?

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October 4, 2012 @ 07:27 PM
Danny

Post: 566

Join Date: Dec 2006

Location: United States

Its already more creative than the last
October 4, 2012 @ 07:29 PM
scratchclothing

Post: 26

Join Date: Jun 2012

VIDEO OF US OUT AT THE MAGIC SHOW IN AUGUST
October 4, 2012 @ 07:31 PM
al dente co.

Post: 339

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: MIAMI

makin moves....




can you post a better picture.... i like what i "kinda" see. lol

al dente company // aldenteco.com

October 4, 2012 @ 07:32 PM
scratchclothing

Post: 26

Join Date: Jun 2012

October 4, 2012 @ 08:16 PM
rare01

Post: 90

Join Date: Jul 2012

@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:


I would simplify it even more possibly turning the rocket into a silhouette for any 1 color prints. It's not a bad idea to expand on though.



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October 4, 2012 @ 08:22 PM
angelooo

Post: 59

Join Date: May 2012

Location: Virginia

So here's the lookbook for the first Fall '12 drop from STANDARDZ®.
The "Basics" Pack includes a tee: $20 / Crewneck: $30 / Hoodie: $35 -- limited quantities | no reprints.
Available online this coming Wednesday (10.10.12) !

The lookbook itself was shot in film, which I feel captures the chill essence of Virginia pretty thoroughly.
Decided to use both a girl & boy to show how each piece can be pulled off regardless of gender.

Check it out in full here: http://standardzzz.com/fall-2012-basics.html
Fan page: http://facebook.com/StandardzVa
Instagram & Twitter: @StandardzVA









Let me know whassup~

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October 4, 2012 @ 08:39 PM
mylesb

Post: 12

Join Date: Oct 2012

Location: Long Beach, CA

So here's the lookbook for the first Fall '12 drop from STANDARDZ®.
The "Basics" Pack includes a tee: $20 / Crewneck: $30 / Hoodie: $35 -- limited quantities | no reprints.
Available online this coming Wednesday (10.10.12) !

The lookbook itself was shot in film, which I feel captures the chill essence of Virginia pretty thoroughly.
Decided to use both a girl & boy to show how each piece can be pulled off regardless of gender.

Check it out in full here: http://standardzzz.com/fall-2012-basics.html
Fan page: http://facebook.com/StandardzVa
Instagram & Twitter: @StandardzVA









Let me know whassup~


I like this. The brand looks like it's off to a good start...looking forward to seeing how it expands

@illthrill_Myles

October 4, 2012 @ 08:46 PM
sons10

Post: 16

Join Date: Sep 2012

Mystic Sons Shirt templates > 100 % Grey Lambs Wool



Link
October 4, 2012 @ 08:52 PM
angelooo

Post: 59

Join Date: May 2012

Location: Virginia

@mylesb much appreciated dude

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October 4, 2012 @ 09:00 PM
dangerers

Post: 209

Join Date: Apr 2012

Location: College Park


Glow In The Dark Jagan Eyes buttons

http://www.dangerers.bigcartel.com

October 4, 2012 @ 09:04 PM
dangerers

Post: 209

Join Date: Apr 2012

Location: College Park

@angelooo that back print is too clean

http://www.dangerers.bigcartel.com

October 4, 2012 @ 09:09 PM
angelooo

Post: 59

Join Date: May 2012

Location: Virginia

@dangerers thanks man! but those buttons...cool

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October 4, 2012 @ 10:01 PM
AreteBrand

Post: 130

Join Date: Sep 2012

@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:


I would simplify it even more possibly turning the rocket into a silhouette for any 1 color prints. It's not a bad idea to expand on though.



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Working on that for the one colors, might change the placement of the rocket too, thank you very much for the feedback!
ps. dope line, great concepts and prints

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October 4, 2012 @ 10:14 PM
FEAture

Post: 7

Join Date: Jul 2012

Location: AZ

@southshorematt

no problem man,I feel you. You try any other textures? Dope logo though

@craftysince90

what about this:


I would simplify it even more possibly turning the rocket into a silhouette for any 1 color prints. It's not a bad idea to expand on though.



R-1 AO 1 20
49° 15′N 123° 6W
FMC – 18201006
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ONE OF A KIND. RARE1

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Working on that for the one colors, might change the placement of the rocket too, thank you very much for the feedback!
ps. dope line, great concepts and prints


I would get rid of the circle.
October 5, 2012 @ 01:20 AM
®içh ßæ

Post: 1818

Join Date: May 2009

Hey guys to get a perspective, What programs do you guys do when designing? Photoshop? GLooks in advanced
October 5, 2012 @ 01:35 AM
bedrockhoopz

Post: 35

Join Date: Jun 2012

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New brand, Tell me if you F with these mock shirts..

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October 5, 2012 @ 01:37 AM
®içh ßæ

Post: 1818

Join Date: May 2009

@rsomers6 I usually do graphics for bands and shit, but often I'll paint/draw in photoshop, often over a picture I drew in pen and scanned. Or for like logo designs and patters you can use Illustrator which is also made by Adobe

always use at least 300 dpi when doing these designs so they look nice printed!


Thanks man Ima DL Illustrator
October 5, 2012 @ 02:24 AM
chads

Post: 1576

Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: Vermont

Hey guys to get a perspective, What programs do you guys do when designing? Photoshop? GLooks in advanced

google.com
[FEASIBLE]
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Link

Yo, I really don't F wit these designs.

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