Starting a New Line/Brand Feedback Thread

October 4, 2012 @ 03:11 AM
chadacadabra

Post: 908

Join Date: Dec 2011

Location: Vermont

Peep our promo for "Crispy Apparel X Jtu X Koi aesthetics"

Honestly, it sucks. If I saw nothing about your comment on the video, I would not have know that it was a promo for your brand, much less a promo for a collab at that. In fact all it seems to be to me is a montage comprised of bad filming, bad skating, and bad editing (not at all saying I could do better so don't try to come at me from that perspective). Overall it just seems pointless, uninteresting and poorly executed.
Sorry in advance for the harsh words.

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October 4, 2012 @ 03:58 AM
Crispy1

Post: 487

Join Date: Apr 2012

Location: Colorado

Peep our promo for "Crispy Apparel X Jtu X Koi aesthetics"

Honestly, it sucks. If I saw nothing about your comment on the video, I would not have know that it was a promo for your brand, much less a promo for a collab at that. In fact all it seems to be to me is a montage comprised of bad filming, bad skating, and bad editing (not at all saying I could do better so don't try to come at me from that perspective). Overall it just seems pointless, uninteresting and poorly executed.
Sorry in advance for the harsh words.

Its just the "Jaycrispy" in general, i guess.
October 4, 2012 @ 04:02 AM
Crispy1

Post: 487

Join Date: Apr 2012

Location: Colorado

But i guess these ones probably make more sense.





Thanks for the feedback tho guys. Appreciate it.
October 4, 2012 @ 04:24 AM
hkeys

Post: 320

Join Date: Apr 2012

Location: Tampa

Videos like this are dope. Really just need better people riding for your brand. Build a team since you are skate related. @crispy1




http://thedividedminds.com/

October 4, 2012 @ 05:10 AM
garyoak

Post: 27

Join Date: Aug 2012

It's cool that everyone critiques each other; that's needed for improvement. But you gotta be more positive with eachother. I'm sure everyone wants to eventually be a big brand and we all have aspirations to live off of this stuff. But look the truth is we're all kids saving up our money to print t-shirts and sell to mostly our friends. We're all in the same boat, to me this is like it's own culture within a culture if that makes sense. Just be positive and push good vibes, I have hella respect for these crispy kids right here. Just having fun, making dope stuff and actually enjoying it. Good shit lil' niggas.
October 4, 2012 @ 05:55 AM
wiltedco

Post: 23

Join Date: Jan 2012

Location: Orange County

amazing

This is all cool as f***, big stuff

Fall 2012 is now available at www.runnerupapparel.com















that cap is really cool
October 4, 2012 @ 06:14 AM
secretsociety

Post: 588

Join Date: Sep 2012

Location: DMV

all these brands suck haha.... most is cheap quality too i understand yall on the come up but damn. the only good small brands out now are deathprecisioninc/divinties/dertbag/freedminds/strayrats

سبحان

October 4, 2012 @ 06:20 AM
mylesb

Post: 12

Join Date: Oct 2012

Location: Long Beach, CA

Peep our promo for "Crispy Apparel X Jtu X Koi aesthetics"

Honestly, it sucks. If I saw nothing about your comment on the video, I would not have know that it was a promo for your brand, much less a promo for a collab at that. In fact all it seems to be to me is a montage comprised of bad filming, bad skating, and bad editing (not at all saying I could do better so don't try to come at me from that perspective). Overall it just seems pointless, uninteresting and poorly executed.
Sorry in advance for the harsh words.


Pretty much took the words out my mouth lol

@illthrill_Myles

October 4, 2012 @ 06:22 AM
mylesb

Post: 12

Join Date: Oct 2012

Location: Long Beach, CA

Keep a Look out!


I had a hard time reading the text

@illthrill_Myles

October 4, 2012 @ 07:28 AM
HighlyHonored

Post: 505

Join Date: Dec 2006

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October 4, 2012 @ 08:23 AM
cityofsavages

Post: 962

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: Old Fourth Ward

Keep a Look out!


I had a hard time reading the text

me too

City of Savages Clothing http://shop.thecityofsavages.com "Live Free or Die"

October 4, 2012 @ 08:26 AM
cityofsavages

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Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: Old Fourth Ward

@craftysince90 the HH w/ the claw marks looks good, have you considred making it slightly larger on the shirt that isn't a pocket tee?

City of Savages Clothing http://shop.thecityofsavages.com "Live Free or Die"

October 4, 2012 @ 10:45 AM
mylesb

Post: 12

Join Date: Oct 2012

Location: Long Beach, CA




The design as a whole doesn't look too bad, but the black leg on the tiger is kinda weird

@illthrill_Myles

October 4, 2012 @ 01:55 PM
al dente co.

Post: 298

Join Date: Jun 2012

Location: MIAMI

all these brands suck haha.... most is cheap quality too i understand yall on the come up but damn. the only good small brands out now are deathprecisioninc/divinties/dertbag/freedminds/strayrats



LET ME GUESS, ODD FUTURE IS THE GREATEST TOO?

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October 4, 2012 @ 03:06 PM
casein_point

Post: 137

Join Date: Jul 2012

How many of y'all have some of your production offshore whether its cut and sew or regular tees? Obviously the price is better but I was just wondering what your thoughts are in terms of quality, turnaround time, and other stuff. And for any of you that do use offshore production how many of you have actulaly went and visited the plant where your product is made?
October 4, 2012 @ 04:19 PM
apollolifestyle

Post: 103

Join Date: Sep 2012



I was wondering if you had any feedback on this logo/ should we change some things on it,etc.
Any feedback is appreciated!

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October 4, 2012 @ 04:37 PM
casein_point

Post: 137

Join Date: Jul 2012



I was wondering if you had any feedback on this logo/ should we change some things on it,etc.
Any feedback is appreciated!


Thats pretty dope, the only thing I'd say is move the AL and stuff up a little bit looks like its a little too low. but still dope.
October 4, 2012 @ 04:41 PM
JStorm803

Post: 1591

Join Date: Jun 2006

Location: South Carolina, Tha...

Has anybody ever thought about getting toys made? I know this has nothing to do with starting a clothing line, but it's something I seriously have been considering.

"I keep myself so lifted I'm accustom to new heights."

October 4, 2012 @ 04:47 PM
minsct

Post: 304

Join Date: Nov 2011

Location: Canada

all these brands suck haha.... most is cheap quality too i understand yall on the come up but damn. the only good small brands out now are deathprecisioninc/divinties/dertbag/freedminds/strayrats


Sounds like something a stereotypical hypebeast would say. Although the brands you listed are great brands, there are currently a variety of other quality small brands on the market amongst the shitstorm of terrible ones. Obviously you have not done your research.

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October 4, 2012 @ 05:43 PM
mobbyluii

Post: 1737

Join Date: Nov 2011

makin moves....

IG: @mobbyluii

October 4, 2012 @ 05:48 PM
apollolifestyle

Post: 103

Join Date: Sep 2012



I was wondering if you had any feedback on this logo/ should we change some things on it,etc.
Any feedback is appreciated!


Thats pretty dope, the only thing I'd say is move the AL and stuff up a little bit looks like its a little too low. but still dope.


Alright, I'll fix that. Really appreciate the feedback!!
Quick question: Should we keep the crown or change it so it's 3 points instead of 4?

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October 4, 2012 @ 05:53 PM
mobbyluii

Post: 1737

Join Date: Nov 2011



I was wondering if you had any feedback on this logo/ should we change some things on it,etc.
Any feedback is appreciated!


Thats pretty dope, the only thing I'd say is move the AL and stuff up a little bit looks like its a little too low. but still dope.


Alright, I'll fix that. Really appreciate the feedback!!
Quick question: Should we keep the crown or change it so it's 3 points instead of 4?

to be honest, id stay away from the olive leaf logo and the "est. MMXII" and all that roman numeral stuff. Alotta people have thrown that on shirts...

I like the logo, but if you want to stand out, id say stay away from those 2 things

IG: @mobbyluii

October 4, 2012 @ 05:57 PM
apollolifestyle

Post: 103

Join Date: Sep 2012

@mobbyluii

Yeah, that's something to consider. We did it without the olive leaf and est MMXII , but it felt too plain. But then again simplicity is best, right?
How would you feel if we changed the wreath to an emblem type design, like a circle around it?

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October 4, 2012 @ 05:58 PM
apollolifestyle

Post: 103

Join Date: Sep 2012

makin moves....



this your brand? I like it man

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October 4, 2012 @ 06:02 PM
steppingonsnails

Post: 61

Join Date: Mar 2012

Location: Toronto

Hey uhh
figured this would be the best place to post this

I get that some people dont like to share manufacturers, but if anyone could tip me on where I can get some 5panels made would be much appreciated. It's for a Band (not brand) that im doing some t shirt designs for and we think selling 5panels at shows might be kinda cool

INBOX ME PLEASE!

ill send you a finished cap if the lead works out! haha

-wam

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October 4, 2012 @ 06:06 PM
mobbyluii

Post: 1737

Join Date: Nov 2011

@mobbyluii

Yeah, that's something to consider. We did it without the olive leaf and est MMXII , but it felt too plain. But then again simplicity is best, right?
How would you feel if we changed the wreath to an emblem type design, like a circle around it?

yeah simplicity is best

and id sample it with a circle around it and post the original and the new one and get some feedback on which one targets your customers better.. try it it out tho and post em here bro!

makin moves....



this your brand? I like it man

yup its something ive been working on for 4 years and finally have the money to go into production... dont sleep on the previews ill be posting in the next coming weeks.

IG: @mobbyluii

October 4, 2012 @ 06:35 PM
apollolifestyle

Post: 103

Join Date: Sep 2012

Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayaxd0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!

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October 4, 2012 @ 06:36 PM
apollolifestyle

Post: 103

Join Date: Sep 2012

@mobbyluii

I can't wait to see what you have coming out, great that you're able to drop it

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October 4, 2012 @ 06:43 PM
mobbyluii

Post: 1737

Join Date: Nov 2011

Here we go:

as influenced by @mobbyluii


Then the olive branch:


The the plain:
http://static.tumblr.com/ayaxd0f/IyIm9utjk/untitled-1.jpg

Let me know what you think!

I like that, try and make the circle a bit thicker and see how that looks!
@mobbyluii

I can't wait to see what you have coming out, great that you're able to drop it

thanks bro!

IG: @mobbyluii

October 4, 2012 @ 06:51 PM
apollolifestyle

Post: 103

Join Date: Sep 2012

@mobbyluii
You're welcome man! msg the link once it goes up!

And I'll fix that too, appreciate the help man!

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